Chapter 13 Page 121

September 8th, 2019, 7:07 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
September 8th, 2019, 7:07 pm
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Aaand that is this chapter finished for real now, folks. (Early by accident but hey we'll roll with it lol).

This one was a biggie. I really enjoyed it, really enjoyed everyone's comments. I'm super tired though, inevitably. It may take me a couple weeks or so before I start the next chapter... Can't rest, gotta take this chance to get a whole lotta work done before I can return to comics lol. But on the brightside, I think this next chapter will be an interesting one.

As ever, thanks for reading this far. You guys are the reason I'm still working on this. I hope you've enjoyed it thus far, and that you'll enjoy what's to come.

Ah'll sithee later.
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Vapor (Guest)
September 2nd, 2019, 12:03 pm
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Oh snaaaap~ Welcome back DT! <3 But yes, very interested to see where the future will lead. XD But get some rest in the meantime, H0ly. =) You definitely deserve it!
HVoice
September 5th, 2019, 1:53 am
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Oooh man, what a bittersweet ending! Can't wait to see what happens.
Enjoy your break :)
Drac (Guest)
September 8th, 2019, 7:20 pm
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Omg, DT is back and I couldn't be more excited to see her.

Though geez if Atty did what I am assuming he did.. eeep. Rip George.
The Peaceful Is Willing To (Guest)
September 8th, 2019, 7:21 pm
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Ooh, early update!

Did Atty and DT make it through Rock Tunnel? Or are they walking out the entrance?

Looking forward to the next chapter, but not as much as I'm looking forward to chapter 17, page 33.
PercussionFish (Guest)
September 8th, 2019, 7:22 pm
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So is he stepping out of the cave on the Lavender Town side or the power plant side?
Josh Spicer (Guest)
September 8th, 2019, 9:38 pm
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@PercussionFish: It looks like George might've seen him exit, and since they were on the Power Plant side, I'm assuming that's where he's exiting.

Unless her reaction was just being shocked that he's not there, in which case it's Lavender Town.
Bouncer (Guest)
September 8th, 2019, 7:28 pm
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So cool to see the fire raptor thing again!

I doubt she's gonna be happy with Atty tho'.

Anyway, amazing chapter, feels like every chapter is better than the last and they've been great since Chapter 1. Keep it up!
Tehpikachu
September 8th, 2019, 7:58 pm
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i'm very excited as ever! it was a long ride this chapter, but your characters have drawn me in for the last ten years, and i'll stick around for another ten if that's how long it takes.
AndreTheLugia
September 8th, 2019, 8:00 pm
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He made it out once again.
HarmonyTRE
September 8th, 2019, 10:22 pm
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Dragonthing! But did he . . .
RazorD9
September 8th, 2019, 11:02 pm
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@HarmonyTRE: Worst is that he gave Thad a bunch of Pidges that were going to sit in a PC for the rest of their lives and are now in the hands of a criminal organization that may or may not use them to commit crimes. Least they might be used.
The_mad_one
September 9th, 2019, 3:46 am
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@RazorD9: Just goes to show George should've joined Team Rocket all along. If you want to catch 'em ALL, that's how to get it done.
The Peaceful Is Willing To (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 6:39 pm
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@RazorD9: Or maybe someone on Team Rocket is going to grind the Pidgeys down and make candy out of them.
Night Worker (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 3:54 am
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Finally, mah boi Atty can SLEEP!
Ren (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 4:55 am
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Oooh I loved this chapter!! <3 I'm reading this since the beginning and only realized now how to comment lol. ^^||
I'm reallllly curious for the next one! What will happen and how the characters will react and interact now this happened. Don't forget to rest! <3 Love your comic and story! <3
Riverfox237 (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 11:15 am
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Man, I'm so..... sad. It's such a gutpunch that he was willing to turn around, WANTED to turn around, and then this happened and he fell far deeper down the rabbit hole than he ever was before. He let Thad win. He's on a path to becoming as bad as Thad. It's heartbreaking and I hope he turns around at some point.

In response to the argument that "all those pokemon would have just sat in the box forever", justifying the crime is what every criminal does, and why they all think they don't deserve to be in prison. Whether it's "because he hurt me" or just "because he was looking at me funny," the crime doesn't stop being a crime, and that's why it's sad. Once you start down the path of thinking you have a good enough reason to do terrible things, it becomes easier and easier to do terrible things with even less good reason.
AngryRobot (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 2:09 pm
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@Riverfox237: I'm on board with your feelings about this. They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions, and I think that's why I've been so sour on both Atticus and any attempts to rationalize what he's done.
That said, there's a curious ambiguity to this ending. The thing I can't help but wonder is...why did he come back? He knows Georgie is willing to throw down over his exploiting people. He also wanted to be rid of her. So why return to the person you despise, especially if you just robbed them? I think it'd come out quick what happened if he sold off her fodder mons, and she wouldn't be happy with it.
As Atticus emerges into the blinding light from the depths of the cave he was in, part of me thinks things aren't as they seem.
Riverfox237 (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 2:55 pm
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@AngryRobot: I really hope so! To be fair, we don't actually know if he's coming out of this cave the same way he came in; he might not be facing George at all. It'll be interesting to see how events unfold next chapter as we find out just what actually went down in that cave.
varsaigen (Guest)
September 9th, 2019, 2:54 pm
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What you fail to realize, H0lyhandgrenade, is that EVERY chapter you make is interesting. :P

But yes, I am excited to see where this goes, specifically. I really enjoy the plot twists (and unique twists to the world design)
King_Kindred
September 9th, 2019, 7:04 pm
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Our hero's(or villain's) triumphant return with his trusty partner.
Gamegod018
September 9th, 2019, 10:31 pm
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@King_Kindred he's a very neutral character. Not really good or bad
King_Kindred
September 9th, 2019, 10:38 pm
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I meant hero because he's the main protag and villain because he may have traded George's Pokemon for Dragonthing.
Hokova
September 10th, 2019, 8:11 am
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DRAGONTHING!!!! <3<3<3
TropicalCyclone
September 10th, 2019, 9:00 am
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Oof Atty's like Steven on the new Steven Universe movie.

Tired, bags under his eyes, tired of the problems he has.

Now he can get some sleep.
Nova (Guest)
September 10th, 2019, 11:00 am
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I can't remember if Atty got a pokedex or not. If so, I wouldn't be a bit surprised if there's some kind of tracker in each dex produced. And of course his would be linked to his ID, so with George knowing his name, she could report him to the authorities and they would have a pretty easy time tracking him down. He could run, but they'd always be on his tail.
corienne
September 10th, 2019, 8:07 pm
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oh fuck he done did it
Pok (Guest)
September 17th, 2019, 6:29 pm
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Yes he fricken did. Also, (headphone warning) NO CURSING REEEEEEEEEEEEE
Rainmon
September 11th, 2019, 3:58 am
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Heh.. He is going to be evil protagonist, that's gonna be fun, maybe later he will go back and steal all those cute pokemons, they would be worth much more than George bunch of Pidgeys ^^
Guest
September 13th, 2019, 6:19 am
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Alls well that ends well.
LovedDarkLonelinessEevee
September 13th, 2019, 2:21 pm
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Yep. Well personally I am glad to see that annoyance George finally get what was coming to them for a LONG TIME! VERY HAPPY WITH THIS RESULT, IT'S LIKE THE JACKASS RIVAL YOU GET IN POKEMON GAMES WHO'S DREAM YOU COMPLETELY SMASH IN THE END, THAT LEVEL OF SATISFACTION!