Chapter 3 Page 35

November 26th, 2010, 6:22 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
November 26th, 2010, 6:22 pm
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I'm honestly quite suprised at how many people believed what I said in the authors comments of the last pages. First off, it would throw aside all that suspense building for nothing, second, I'd be unlikely to blatantly reveal what's coming up in future pages, and thirdly... ... Like I'd be as nice as that ;D

I had a perfect vision in my head for how Feraligatr would do the attack. ... Too perfect, I realised, where had I subconsiously stolen it from... ... Ah. Bahamut. Curses! Just a bit different then.

This chapter is longer than the others, because I'm hoping it to have something of a conclusion... The end of the first arc. I'd like to get this chapter finished before the new year, I'd be most pleased with that.

Anyone playing the drinking game take another shot. See y'all soon!
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newyorkdefendertalon
November 26th, 2010, 6:22 pm
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Oh snap, here it comes.
Asj
November 26th, 2010, 6:35 pm
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maybe Atty has that "I'm not moving" look to him because him and Dragonthing snuck in some awsome, high-level training between updates. :D
Actually, I don't know what's going to happen. D:
(also, last page, it was the user comments on the page that threw me off. So I was like, "wait, what? you mean he really is going to give up?" )
(...I think... Actually, I can't remember what I was thinking last page. ^_^" But I didn't think he'd give up.)
Blitzn'Burst
November 26th, 2010, 6:41 pm
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details are perfect...I'm scared to crawl back to my ds now....yet my politoed is still amazing <3
CactusJuicy
November 26th, 2010, 6:44 pm
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Atty used srs face
its super effective
KirtiMiko
November 26th, 2010, 6:45 pm
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Wait, I'm stupid. What was the drinking game again? Drink when a pokemon gets hurt? I can't find the authors comment that explained it.
Guest
November 26th, 2010, 6:46 pm
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EEEEEEEEEEEK

:D
Lavender Okamari
November 26th, 2010, 6:50 pm
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Nooooooo!!!! Don't hurt him!!!
DT_Fan (Guest)
November 26th, 2010, 6:58 pm
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Injured DT looks so cute.. But I still hope someone or something rescues him from that oncoming blast x.x
mosama
November 26th, 2010, 6:59 pm
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lmao some authors can go ahead and reveal the ending of their comics via author comments seeing as how barely anyone reads those (mostly other authors read them, cuz we know its important, but the lerkers and junk just skip through that junk) SO FEEL FREE TO COPY AND PASTE THE ENTIRE MOKEPON SCRIPT INTO THE NEXT AUTHORCOMMENT. you should make a fake script for lulz.
DragonHat
November 26th, 2010, 7:05 pm
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oh god, HYPERBEAM?

Overkill! OVERKILL!
FrostedWaffle
November 26th, 2010, 7:09 pm
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It sure looks like a hyper beam!! D=
peanutbutterpancakes
November 26th, 2010, 7:13 pm
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ATTY! Stop being dumb! :(
ShadowEevee128
November 26th, 2010, 7:14 pm
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DT's fire on his tail is small, meaning he is in REALLY bad health. (as if no one know)
pat15
November 26th, 2010, 7:24 pm
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Mortal Kombat voice: FINISH HIM!!!!
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
November 26th, 2010, 7:35 pm
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I just wanna say that you draw Feraligatr VERY WELL. Like, the drool and his skin. It's just. Really good. And well. Damn. Lmao, I can't even explain it IT'S JUST REALLY GOOD OKAY?
OH GOD HYDRO PUMP. ;;
Story teller, Astralle
November 26th, 2010, 7:48 pm
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I hate you people!!!!!!! That is just mean!!!!
n47h4n
November 26th, 2010, 7:52 pm
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I met a 3 year old named Atticus today.
It was a profound experience.
Sonic_Boom
November 26th, 2010, 7:57 pm
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I thought it looked like Hydro Pump =D
Ms_Mayhem
November 26th, 2010, 8:52 pm
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Bahamut.... <3
I just got done watching Advent Children. :D
NGGGGGGGGGGGGH.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
xD
Lockman
November 26th, 2010, 9:12 pm
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shoop da woop.
Jazeki
November 26th, 2010, 9:20 pm
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Noooo DT. You look so vulnerable. D:

Well, at least Atty won his first match.
C.Olimar788 (Guest)
November 26th, 2010, 9:57 pm
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Doesn't the Pokemon already count as knocked out if it can't get back up? D:

ATTICUS DO SOMETHING.
FrostedWaffle
November 26th, 2010, 10:43 pm
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Ture, Sonic_Boom a hydro pump would be fitting for this fight against a fire type but I dunno.. could be hydro pump, hyper beam, or ice beam from the looks of it (since he can learn all of the three). x3
Harrow
November 26th, 2010, 10:53 pm
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Nuooooo~
Jaizen
November 26th, 2010, 11:28 pm
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That looks more like a hyper beam than a hydro pump but that's okay with TMs
sega-tendo-com2.0
November 26th, 2010, 11:33 pm
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HE'S A FIRIN HIS LAZAR!!!!!! look out!!!
xwx101 ya its me (Guest)
November 27th, 2010, 12:01 am
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Is Kahn Jewish?
*Suki*
November 27th, 2010, 12:07 am
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O________________O
Raichi
November 27th, 2010, 12:27 am
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AWW but he's already incapable of moving any longer :(
Imperial
November 27th, 2010, 12:29 am
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but atty's heart grew three sizes that day and he saved DT, or mask man was just testing to see how much atty cares and hes gonna stop
Anonymous (Guest)
November 27th, 2010, 1:22 am
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I think Feraligatr is using Hydro Cannon... a wonderful way to overkill a poor little Charmander. D=

RUN DT, RUN!
Moo Moo
November 27th, 2010, 1:42 am
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And then Rattata comes to the rescue...
Generalnuke (Guest)
November 27th, 2010, 1:46 am
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lol that would be great one runs in the way of the attack.

or a passing pigie flies in the way
varsaigen
November 27th, 2010, 1:50 am
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Ooh... His tail flame is dwindling. D: If he takes this hit, he's done for. :c

Atticus! Get in the way! Save your burning lizard!

That, or Kahn will step in. You dont' want Kahn getting all the glory, do you? :P
varsaigen
November 27th, 2010, 1:55 am
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Then again, if this turns out like te bubblebeam, then it could be a small jet of water... which only make me invision the watersaws, a small jet of super-pressurized water capable of easily slicing through rock and metal like butter.
Christo556
November 27th, 2010, 5:48 am
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*screams* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- *rushes to his aid from a VERY long ditance* -OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO etc. etc.!!!
Supersheep64
November 27th, 2010, 7:51 am
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I think Kahn will do somthing. He has that look about him.
Thunder the HalfBloodHedgehog
November 27th, 2010, 8:58 am
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Here it comes... O_o
renchikolul
November 27th, 2010, 9:58 am
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Save him you asshole whether you like it or not hes YOURS.Dragonthingy fought for you you should do the same.
Reigan
November 27th, 2010, 11:33 am
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Come on, Kahn! Go in for a last-minute save! D;

Please?
Nyah-HEH?! o.O (Guest)
November 27th, 2010, 1:31 pm
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Lolwuuuut...? =w= Guys...if you hover your cursor over the picture, the artist has MORE comments. IT'S HYDRO PUMP! Artist said so herself!
interspark
November 27th, 2010, 2:08 pm
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a wild Raikou appeared!
Guest
November 27th, 2010, 2:57 pm
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and pangit ng komix na ito... pwede namang kumuha ng baril at patayin yung mga hayop.. bakit hinde nalang nya ginawa yun
pwii
November 27th, 2010, 4:10 pm
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I got it! Atty is gonna use the pokeball and capture Feraligator!
Crusty_Kris
November 27th, 2010, 6:22 pm
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and then atty will return Dragonthing at the last second, then send him back out while the feraligatr thinks it won for an epic 1HKO.
YuuganaruKyoujin
November 27th, 2010, 6:33 pm
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Found it xD @KirtiMiko, and anyone else going "Wait what is the mokepon drinking game again???" - "Mokepon drinking game- Whenever I end a page on a cliffhanger, take a shot."
redeyes07
November 27th, 2010, 6:56 pm
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I will laugh if Feraligatr misses. There's nothing worse than having a high level Pokémon miss the lower levels; it’s embarrassing.
emruki
November 27th, 2010, 9:05 pm
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D: Oh GEEZ, Atticus. Do something!

Also, that is some fantastic hatching work on Feraligator. x'D Just thought I'd mention that.
omg (Guest)
November 27th, 2010, 9:49 pm
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LAZORZ SHOOOOP--DAAAAAA---WOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!
(o)<=====
ShayneZee
November 28th, 2010, 2:51 am
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This is getting amazing. I'm loving the added details to the artwork and the storyline is as awesome as ever. Keep it up and good luck :)
Koal
November 28th, 2010, 3:37 am
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I just know I'm gonna predict what happens next, I'm not gonna reveal it. :P
Red (Guest)
November 28th, 2010, 3:53 am
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And then Hydro Pump misses. It does that on an annoyingly frequent basis, actually.

Seriously though, I'm astonished that Dragonthing is still standing after even one hit - this clearly works on the anime series rules, not the game ones.
sbdrag
November 28th, 2010, 7:31 am
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DRAGONTHING!!! NOOOOO!!!
gamemaster1_11@hotmail.com (Guest)
November 28th, 2010, 10:40 am
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hey to me that looks like an ice beam
but if its a hydro pump its a hydro pump
"your description makes sense actually"

a thought that just came to me is
does atty have dragonthing's pokeball with him so if he wanted to he could make him return
RASP (Guest)
November 28th, 2010, 1:48 pm
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@Nyah-HEH?! o.O : That's supposed to be "our little secret"... or did you just notice it now?

@gamemaster1_11@hotmail.com: I never thought of that! That sounds like just the thing Atty would do too! He'd nonchalantly hold the pokeball and (almost inaudibly) mutter "return." This would happen just before the hydro pump hit DT. It would be so close that Atty would be the only one who even knew until the mist settled after the attack and we'd see Atty w/ the pokeball on the next page.
SerenityMikadzuki
November 28th, 2010, 3:53 pm
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Noooo!!! DT!!!!
Dark Blood End
November 28th, 2010, 9:31 pm
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Moo Moo's comment gave me an idea. What if the Rattata comes along and acts like Artty's 2nd pokemon, then the Rattata totally owns the Feraligator. Because that Rattata is top percent!

http://www.halolz.com/index.php?s=rattata
TheDarkAngel
November 28th, 2010, 11:31 pm
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Maybe there'll be something like in the TV series? The hero Pokemon loses its first big battle, the trainer rushes it to the PokeCenter, heals it, and says, "Even though you lost, I still love you and you're mine. So, let's use our friendship and get stronger!" *sparkle, sparkle*

Either way, can't wait to see what happens!
Pelaaja
November 29th, 2010, 11:35 am
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Feraligatr swallows it when DT jumps on his mouth. Fera's head explodes and Atticus wins.
randomkid
November 29th, 2010, 12:54 pm
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what i think might happen is: feraligator uses hyper beam kills dt then has a little "snack" between meals or maybe a level 1 rattata with endeavor and quick attack bread into it appears wearing a focus sach and it takes the hit left with just 1 hp uses endeavor then attacks with quick attack and defeats feraligator leveling up dt and the rattata a big bunch!
Hero of Comedy
November 29th, 2010, 4:42 pm
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Here comes the Hydro Cannon!!
Dyster (Guest)
November 29th, 2010, 5:14 pm
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I just LOVE your style of drawing. :D
Dalek555
November 29th, 2010, 8:57 pm
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This dude is really dragging this out. If this were my platinum trainer, my Rotom would have decimated DT in seconds. He must be trying to torture DT.
Vickygal
November 29th, 2010, 9:29 pm
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I think this Feraligatr just has a bit of a flair for the dramatic. That's why his hydropump has such an unorthodox beginning. After all, did you see that breath he took for his bubble(beam)? That's probably why he doesn't wipe the drool either. Maskboy bought him a hanky and everything, but he's convinced he's scarier this way.

...Maybe he took steroids as a teenage Croconaw, too. It would explain the monstrous size. I bet he was bullied by all the other Totodile and developed a complex. Who's the big one now, huh?!

He's such a good match for his Gary-types-hating master. Who, judging by the mask, has his own fondness for the dramatic.
PyroTeam
November 30th, 2010, 5:45 pm
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Evolve. NOW.
.........facepalm (Guest)
November 30th, 2010, 8:45 pm
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Dang it atty, do something intelligent! DT is going to die horrifically and you're just STANDING THERE. *sigh* I have a bad feeling about this.
Mirasol
November 30th, 2010, 9:42 pm
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HHHIIIIINNNNNDDDDDIIIII!!!!!! Ito ay hindi makatarungan!! Atty dapat i-save ang kanyang DT! DT may ibig mo kaya dapat mo ng hindi bababa sa bigyan siya ng paggalang kung hindi ibig!!!
Darrelkun
December 1st, 2010, 3:35 am
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I predict that Ferfer is going to kill DragonThing, and then Atticus will go home to watch television.

The end. :3
Erosem
December 1st, 2010, 8:15 am
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FFFFFfffffffffffuuuuu-!!! DX
ocelotl (Guest)
December 1st, 2010, 10:36 pm
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MIERDA¡¡ NOOOOOOO
NO PUEDO ESPERAR A VER K PASA¡¡¡¡¡
BUENO AMM....NO CREO K ENTIENDAN ESTO = _=
UN SALUDO DESDE MEXICO
Grif (Guest)
December 2nd, 2010, 7:08 am
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Atticus "has to find a way" to win, and he never loses. Clearly there are only three possible outcomes: Atticus wins, he draws, or the battle is postponed. Dragonthing, though determined, lacks the training to defeat Feraligatr; he can't be relied on.

Theory: Atticus will resort to dirty tricks like participating in the battle himself. If I recall correctly, the battle ends when all of your pokémon have fainted and are back in their balls. He might refuse to return Dragonthing long enough for the enemy to forfeit out of impatience, or he might step in front of Feraligatr's attack, forcing it to stop. In the games, the trainer never ever got attacked. Atticus is unconventional enough to kick a Rattata out of his way, for example.
gamemaster1_11@hotmail.com (Guest)
December 2nd, 2010, 9:04 am
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IMA A CHARGIN MA LAZAR!!!!!
wtf i love comin here just for the comments there looks to be a few spanish people to lol
Guest
December 2nd, 2010, 9:44 am
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yo si lo entieno y pienso = kiero ver ya q pasaaaaaaaa!!!!
Kon (Guest)
December 2nd, 2010, 9:44 am
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Maan... the way you draw that Feraligatr is just gorgeous... ~
Guest
December 2nd, 2010, 4:36 pm
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Your comic is very entertaining. All drawings are well done, and the story is interesting to read.
Hmm... maybe Dragonthing will evolve? Or it is too early? Questions, questions...
If they appears that means comic is good.
Bcaseb (Guest)
December 2nd, 2010, 8:36 pm
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I love this. I love your comic! I like the take on the issue many of us thought of after having beaten several of these games. If the real world took issues like npcs into account. I hope you update soon!
Fuzor2 (Guest)
December 2nd, 2010, 11:27 pm
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inb4watergun
also inb4ATicustakesthewatergun4DT
sanmo999
December 3rd, 2010, 9:11 am
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LE GASP!! OAO
DT run for your life! T^T
Miguel (Guest)
December 3rd, 2010, 9:35 am
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"No PP left for that move."
Dyanna (Guest)
December 3rd, 2010, 11:43 am
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OVERKILL 99999! ITS OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But yeah H0ly, that attack is so stolen. Bahamut will be summoned, and you will be punished in Yevons name.... Jk~ I'm Al-bhed, I don't believe in Yevon :D
blizzard (Guest)
December 3rd, 2010, 1:26 pm
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"DO A BARREL ROLL TO REFLECT ENEMY FIRE!!!"
YamiRin
December 3rd, 2010, 4:08 pm
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heya I rarely comment on any comic I read, but I just had to tell you about this wierd dream I had this night, in which Atticus and Kahn came into my room and started to battle, and in Kahn's case catch, my pokemon plushies! it was totally wierd, kahn stole my plushies by capturing them in pokeballs! wtf!
Quiet Voice (Guest)
December 3rd, 2010, 11:02 pm
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I can't help but expect a giant Metroid (or maybe a Ditto) to swoop in and latch onto Feraligatr's head right as it goes to fire.
Guest
December 4th, 2010, 3:25 am
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nooo! dt cant survive that! its powa is ova 9000!!!ITS OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAND! for gods' sake.
dotdotdot (Guest)
December 7th, 2010, 12:04 am
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Three words for you: Om nom nom.
Tevermiti (Guest)
December 7th, 2010, 12:27 am
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Excellent!! I just started reading your comic today, and I've gotta say that this has been a very exciting experience to the very end. From your drawings to your unorthodox plot, I have enjoyed every second of the 45 min. it took to read this (slow computer). Keep up the good work Dood.
TheCorty (Guest)
December 7th, 2010, 4:25 pm
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This is...beautiful ;w;
Andromeda "Annie" Lazuli (Guest)
December 8th, 2010, 4:43 am
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XD OMG!!! You SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO need to update soon because I wanna see what happens next before I forget stuff again... That's why I saved it and sent a link to my friends and boyfriend so that they could enjoy it, too. ^_^
Random Spectator (Guest)
December 9th, 2010, 9:45 am
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D8 Dragonthing is so dead...
Random Person (Guest)
December 9th, 2010, 4:12 pm
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I predict the rattata will appear. It will be a fear rattata. Thus the Feraligatr will go down in two turns. The end.
Anishka
December 9th, 2010, 7:31 pm
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Damn.. that poor Charamander. I hope it'll be okay. D:
Grif (Guest)
December 10th, 2010, 12:18 am
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Last page November 26? I thought this was a friday comic. Come on man, you're slacking. This story has a lot of potential and you're leaving us on a big cliffhanger.
Emmy (Guest)
December 10th, 2010, 12:58 am
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@Grif Hey, lay off. He's probably under some stress right now. Why don't you go make your own comic and try keeping up with it and see how easy it is? It's not.
Astolos (Guest)
December 10th, 2010, 1:00 am
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Oh No Come on EVOLVE NOW!!!
snaps
December 10th, 2010, 9:32 pm
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that sucks and come on evolve already
Raikozu
December 12th, 2010, 12:46 pm
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@Emmy

I don't recall h0ly ever being a man...
RASP (Guest)
December 12th, 2010, 5:16 pm
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@Grif Emmy has a point. It's very difficult to keep up with this kind of stuff--especially with most schools and universities having exams and such. I love H0ly for the incredible work she's done so far and I don't want to see her rush a page if it means reduced quality. If she goes from once a week to once every other week I'll be okay with it because her works is WORTH waiting for.
Please don't post any flame here.
Lvndris91 (Guest)
December 13th, 2010, 6:38 am
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This update take so LOONG! I wanna see the next few pages so bad. Please, h0ly, please?
xkrazydog
December 13th, 2010, 7:11 am
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congratulations on over 5000 babezz <3 you deserve it for your hardworkkk!!
-_- (Guest)
December 13th, 2010, 8:23 am
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-___- updaet plz -____-
Antonyms
January 4th, 2011, 5:25 am
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Atticus... is cold.
Giras the Ebil
February 28th, 2011, 9:12 pm
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Well....DT's gonna melt now...
Valkyrie (Guest)
March 14th, 2012, 6:53 pm
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TT~TT This comic makes me cry. Atticus is so heartless...Poor Dragonthing ;_;

Dear Author, you are a sick twisted individual to write this...good job! ;P