Chapter 3 Page 47

February 11th, 2011, 4:57 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
February 11th, 2011, 4:57 pm
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WE MADE IT! TO THE END OF THE CHAPTER! EVERYONE PARTY, MAN! Oh am I happy. I'm so happy to get this page up at long last. Because I finished it on sunday and was going to update it then, lovely and early... ... But I left it at my dads. And then after he said he'd send it me, he forgot. We're as bad as each other. So when I finally got my hands on it today, I was overjoyed. I had not been wanting to draw all those rocks again.

I got sick of those rocks over the course of this chapter. My own fault for being unimaginative when I first showed the scene and had to stick to it, just rocks rocks rocks in the background. So I decided since this was the last time I was going to have to draw them, I'd give them one last big ridiculous go. That's a lot of rocks. It's like New Vegas Wastelend that scene I swear.

Don't get me wrong about what I say in this page, I have no intention of quitting any time soon. It just astounds me how far this comic has come, when I only intended it to be something to mess around with for a few weeks. Chapter four, with this kind of response, christ. Thanks guys. It's been a long chapter this one and I've learnt a lot from making it, I'm still intending to learn a lot more yet.

See y'all soon. Hope you'll enjoy chapter four.
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DragonHat
February 11th, 2011, 4:58 pm
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WOOOOO

haha, I do love that classic pokemon ending
Ultimate the Hedgehog
February 11th, 2011, 4:58 pm
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nice!

this is wut pokemon shouldve been like
daniblovespie
February 11th, 2011, 4:59 pm
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awesome :D
Reigan
February 11th, 2011, 5:02 pm
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You couldn't have ended it a better way.
Hero of Comedy
February 11th, 2011, 5:04 pm
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@H0ly Ash may be a pokemon master,
but you are thee suspense master.
popzink123456
February 11th, 2011, 5:06 pm
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but i love the new page *u* who is "holy" ow wait is that the ather :O
blizzard (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 5:11 pm
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STAY TUNED BECAUSE THE MOKE RAP IS COMING UP!!!
Blitz3124
February 11th, 2011, 5:12 pm
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nice epic ending to chapter 3
grifendel
February 11th, 2011, 5:24 pm
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Julia And BAAM, there goes the forth wall.
:P

I luv your comics! Please keep doing it! <3
Sir sarcasm (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 5:27 pm
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Hey kids, it's time for the Mokerap
You just take care of the singing; I'll handle the hard part
Let's get it on!
Don't want to be the best, there ever was,
to beat all the rest, that's not my cause.
Electrode
Diglett
Nidoran
Mankey
Venusaur
Rattata
Fearow
Pidgey
Seaking
Jolteon
Dragonite
Gastly
Ponyta
Vaporeon
Poliwrath
Butterfree
Catch 'em Catch 'em, don't wanna catch 'em all. Dont wanna catch 'em all, MOKEPON
someone (Guest)
September 28th, 2014, 8:48 am
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@Sir sarcasm: you should just made as name all the pokemon like how he says dragon thing and bulboid
Story teller, Astralle
February 11th, 2011, 5:27 pm
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I laughed when I read the blurb that had your name in it. That was funny. (no offense intended) XD

Edit: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, sir sarcasm you are the BEST!!!!!!! ROFL XD
Asj
February 11th, 2011, 5:29 pm
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(reads the alt message) Eeeh? O_o How did you know I just asked that question in my head?

hmm... by the way, I think Sir sarcasm's rap is slightly off.
It should go more like,
ball thing
mole thing
rat thing
monkey
flower monster
rat
bird thing
different bird
goldfish
oxoJinkxox
February 11th, 2011, 5:30 pm
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Victory Road Such a great story!! I can't wait to see more! :D
The_mad_one
February 11th, 2011, 5:36 pm
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Next epic chapter: Catching a pidgey. :3
slammy4
February 11th, 2011, 5:37 pm
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lol! very nice
Chaos The Hedgehog4444
February 11th, 2011, 5:41 pm
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All I can say about the Pokerap is two things
1. I love the way Wartortles name is said, always have, always will
2. with all the pokemon from 1st to 5th gen, imagine how long it'd be now
peanutbutterpancakes
February 11th, 2011, 5:48 pm
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That is a lot of rocks... wow...
Also I can always hear the narrator speaking in my head while reading the ends of the chapters. I can't decide if that's good or bad.
pat15
February 11th, 2011, 6:01 pm
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Mask guy's mask looks like a hyper ball, missing a stripe
Gibson Twist
February 11th, 2011, 6:02 pm
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In the span that this chapter has been updating, two people have had a drunken one-night stand that resulted in a pregnancy and carried the child to term.
Pietje (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 6:29 pm
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Yeah Chapter 4!
absolutely great story so far!
Solar
February 11th, 2011, 6:42 pm
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so that dude with the mask is the pokemon league
im just asuming because of the mask picture on the victory road sighn
TheCorty (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 6:48 pm
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^_^ Love this comic. I wish I could actually go out and buy this as a manga~
Salice Kyrth (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 7:01 pm
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If You ever print it, i do WANT xD
varsaigen
February 11th, 2011, 7:10 pm
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AHAHA I love how you mimicked the show's ending.

I remember that billboard. :3 And omg, how many rocks are you going to draw?! XD So.. much... detail... O_O
Fang Shinobi
February 11th, 2011, 7:28 pm
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Atty > Ash any day.
Gadvac
February 11th, 2011, 8:01 pm
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Whoo! Chapter 4, wow! This is an excellent comic, keep it up!
@Fang Agreed. Ash can go die... oh wait, he already did.
AnnietheKitten (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 8:20 pm
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What happened to the CurlyWurly, or however you spell it?
rawredy
February 11th, 2011, 8:28 pm
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@grifendel
I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of the fourth wall. :P
Naya
February 11th, 2011, 8:38 pm
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I still love the
VICTORY
in road form

XD
webcomiclover
February 11th, 2011, 8:48 pm
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HIS MASK IS ON THAT SIGN
I love this webcomic
Lockman
February 11th, 2011, 8:58 pm
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the mask is on the sign!
C.Olimar788 (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 9:08 pm
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"Victory in road form" is the best slogan ever. Trufax.

Also, never stop. This comic is amazing. :D
newyorkdefendertalon
February 11th, 2011, 9:15 pm
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Sweetness, I can't wait to see what's up next :D
Moo Moo
February 11th, 2011, 9:21 pm
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Oh look, a tree!
Jazeki
February 11th, 2011, 9:29 pm
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Excitement.
HiAndrom0n
February 11th, 2011, 9:40 pm
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Great web-comic, looking forward to his first catch.Are there only Pokemon in red and Blue in this region?What Pokemon do you think he'd catch?
Tangla-Is..Is this thing made of..I think I'll just take this ball back befor..!Crap!
Abra-Does this thing do anything other then sleep!?
Tentacool-Great, jellyfish poison is such an appealing thing.
Scyther-I'm not comfortable with how sharp those things are.
Magicarp-Worthless little...Giant man eating monster!
What if he could get Pokemon from other regions?
Totodile-He'd probably want to learn as much as he can from the team of a guy he's worried about.
What do you guys think?
Robin (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 9:49 pm
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Rocks DAMN those are some good lookin rocks!
8-Bit Squirrel
February 11th, 2011, 9:51 pm
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Victory in Road Form! XD How did I miss that?
muffinpoodle (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 9:56 pm
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The rocks are my favourite character.
Rodrigo (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 10:10 pm
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The story is really great, I hope you keep updating often.
MightyMoose
February 11th, 2011, 10:16 pm
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I kiiiiiiiind of want Atticus to do the Pokerap.
*Suki*
February 11th, 2011, 10:27 pm
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*A* I love the details you put in this, man.
dragonfairy
February 11th, 2011, 10:28 pm
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Loving this series totally one of my favs. I can't wait for chapter 4 SUPER EXCITED!!!! Atty is one of the best characters of all time xD
krnyong39
February 11th, 2011, 10:34 pm
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yes! the beginning of another chapter! im so excited :D
i think it would be so funny if dragonthing evolved into a charmeleon and became all defiant like ash's did...
RASP (Guest)
February 11th, 2011, 11:00 pm
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@Asj Love your Moke Rap! Very well done! That's probably how he'd sing it. :)



((Actually, he probably wouldn't sing it at all. Lol.))
luvsmepokemon
February 11th, 2011, 11:38 pm
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*stalks to a corner* now to sit here and wait till the next chapter starts.
Iarei (Guest)
February 12th, 2011, 12:05 am
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... I noticed the mask on the sign before. I even commented on it, but no-one read my post. None of you read this post either, you're too busy trying to find some place online that will ship you twirly-whirls. Bastards. NEXT ON POKEMON : is there anything in the ball Atty ganked from the shop keeper? Stay tuned to find out! Or something. I'm going to go run around my house till the caffiene jitters stop.
Nived (Guest)
February 12th, 2011, 12:11 am
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But what happened to the Curlywurly!?

I've been lurking since I stumbled across this on TV tropes over Christmas. dig your style and the story, look forward to the next chapter.
TAR0T
February 12th, 2011, 1:05 am
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Am I the only one who read this and heard the narrator's voice from Pokemon in my head?

Just curious.
thesmiter
February 12th, 2011, 1:26 am
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Am I the only one who noticed that you spelled hereos instead of heroes? xD;

Mmm, Fallout rocks. (literally and figuratively)
Spoonweaver
February 12th, 2011, 1:34 am
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Holy BETTER reach that far in the comic for us to find out.

Holy better....
Voidan
February 12th, 2011, 2:29 am
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Hereos... rhymes with cheerios... both are good ;3
SpiralPen
February 12th, 2011, 3:11 am
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XD since when is Victory Road right outside Pallet Town?...
Or did I miss some kind of transition?
Oh, and I think I'm the only one to bring this up but:
TEAM ROCKET!! XD
I can't wait to see how you incorporate our favorite softcore terrorist organization into the Mokepon World

Edit: I JUST now realized the Charizard on the cover is most likely Dragonthing... *brick'd*
Korokos
February 12th, 2011, 3:58 am
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Haha, I noticed the billboard!

By the way, something occurred to me on my second read-through. . . I think I totally know who the masked man is. I won't put it here though, in case I'm right. Don't want to spoil it D:
zetina
February 12th, 2011, 5:03 am
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Atty got a dry smoke at last |D;;
Gratz on finishing the chap!
Seranatis
February 12th, 2011, 5:12 am
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Well done! I look forward to your continued efforts on this comic, and i've throughly enjoyed it so far.
Keep at it, and i know it'll be something great, I'm patiently waiting for the next page, the start of the next chapter as always ;D
~Seranatis
Christo556
February 12th, 2011, 6:21 am
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now we just need a Mokepon ending theme or something :P
kyo (Guest)
February 12th, 2011, 6:25 am
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ah I think I know why those kids in that town a while back were wearing his mask >_<

love this, looking forward to more ^^
Raichi
February 12th, 2011, 7:21 am
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lawl filler paaaaage xD
Mythee
February 12th, 2011, 8:18 am
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I LOEV YOO. <3
And your comic is wonderful awesome magnificentitude that has given me many lol's and woa's and yay's. @v@ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EVERYTHING SO FAAAAARRR~~~ And yay for the fourth chapter! 8'D An achievement, this is. Hurr.
JunYo
February 12th, 2011, 9:45 am
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VICTORY
in road form.
this actually made my day xD
Nitrogen
February 12th, 2011, 12:25 pm
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AWESOME!
I just read the whole comic over. AGAIN. :D
Nya-chan (Guest)
February 12th, 2011, 12:47 pm
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Hah, good job for hanging in there for so long! >W<

I look forward to the next chapter!!! <3
In England
February 12th, 2011, 12:55 pm
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this is such a awesome comic!
Addict
February 12th, 2011, 1:04 pm
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Thanks for all of your hard work, Holy!
Waiting For Your Whistle
February 12th, 2011, 2:48 pm
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identity revealed! ah! i get it... the sign shows his mask so the masked man is the the highest of elite four right?! <3
Jake (Guest)
February 12th, 2011, 3:39 pm
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Congrats! Okay, I've been bad and haven't commented since I caught up on all the pages, but I wanted to comment and say congrats on finishing another chapter. This one was pretty fun to read, and I look forward to whatever comes next.

Until then, Cyas!
FrederikVT
February 12th, 2011, 4:04 pm
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Lol "Victory in road form" XD
Cedric Bale
February 12th, 2011, 5:03 pm
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And thus Chapter 3 comes to a close. Congratz! :D

That's never occured to me before. In Red/Blue, your rival becomes the champion before you get there. Who was the champion before -him-? A slightly effeminate dude in an overcoat wearing a pokeball-like mask, perhaps?

[Edit] Or maybe that's the champion after Ash left to live in a cave? Either way, I'm now 90% certain that he's the current champion.
spazatron
February 12th, 2011, 6:54 pm
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YAY ACCOMPLISHMENT

and uh you spelled "heroes" wrong

am i the only one that noticed that
speak92
February 12th, 2011, 10:22 pm
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the billborard i noticed..

anyway holy, don't give up!!
roby (Guest)
February 13th, 2011, 10:15 am
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Congratulations! I really enjoy this comic man! I hope to this this go far! You have a real talent! Keep up the awesome work!
SerenityMikadzuki
February 13th, 2011, 11:29 am
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Haha, I loved how you ended this chapter!
I'm really excited for chapter 4! 8D
KirtiMiko
February 13th, 2011, 12:43 pm
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Nice work! Whoo-hoo, chapter four! -parties-
LeeSloan
February 13th, 2011, 6:23 pm
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Classic I can even hear the light instrumental closing that usually came with each episode of the original season, as well as the typecast narrator. XD

I love how this ended and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Piano-kun
February 13th, 2011, 7:16 pm
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Does that mean there is a Mokerap next? LOL And so, the sun set over the hills...someone needs to play the Pokemon Red/Blue Route 4 music now.

Woo! Nice end to the chapter. I don't see anything wrong with rocks for the background. I mean, every Pokemon location caters to some kind of land form (forests, plains, mountains...has there ever been a desert?). At least it shows the the dedication you put to each page.

OH MAN CHAPTER 4 IS COMING. I know something major is going to happen. I CAN FEEL IT.
doodeedoo (Guest)
February 13th, 2011, 7:29 pm
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Is that the mysterious masked guy's mask I see on the Victory Road sign? Hmmmmmm?
Keishi (Guest)
February 13th, 2011, 7:40 pm
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I love this; finally someone who rather watch Tv than get their ass kicked out the door and go for an adventure xD

The mask man reminds me of Tobi/Mandara from the naruto series.... I bet he's probably the champion; or some ass of a gymleader >.<
Dr who (Guest)
February 13th, 2011, 8:27 pm
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now what is goings to be the first pokemon he catch place bets wait for it ............................. now
Biscuit Thief (Guest)
February 13th, 2011, 8:37 pm
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I sure hope you make it to the end. This is by far the best webcomic that I've ever read.
toboe059
February 13th, 2011, 9:36 pm
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Whoo! on to chapter 4!! ^o^
..the masked guy's mask is on the billboard...he must be like the victory road champ or something....eh who knows? o.o;;
there should be a Mokerap! XD
hlhaskett
February 14th, 2011, 12:05 am
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Oh man, the "to be continued..." at the end. EPIC WIN, my friend. :3
Cityface Fan (Guest)
February 14th, 2011, 12:49 am
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This page definitely brings back some good memories of watching Pokemon as a child :)
Guest
February 14th, 2011, 1:44 am
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How many cancer sticks has he smoked by now? Just curious, I lost count.
Tostificer (Guest)
February 14th, 2011, 4:22 pm
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You totally have to do something with the "cut" trees in the games. It will be hilarious.
pwii
February 14th, 2011, 6:03 pm
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MOAR COMICS. I DEMAND IT.

:reads author comment:

Oh, so you weren't serious about quitting. Cool.
NOEZ!! (Guest)
February 14th, 2011, 10:33 pm
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Teh' Curly Wurly!! D:
Poor Dragonthing.... XD
Guest
February 14th, 2011, 10:43 pm
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Still doing well, but you haven't beaten that panel about two chapters ago with the lawnmower and the Pidgey.
kaei
February 15th, 2011, 12:20 am
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fffffffff
Charmander is so cute.
and i like how he gives it the stuff, and then Char doesn't get to eat it. xD
Andromeda Lazuli (Guest)
February 15th, 2011, 1:37 am
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YAY! XD You posted the next part!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Justaguy
February 16th, 2011, 12:05 am
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I see hurt in Attie's future. When Dragon thing evolves there will be a reckoning...
werekitty13
February 16th, 2011, 5:28 pm
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This. Is at least my fourth time through the archives. And it's all still funny. And I'm sad because there's not another page.
hellfire14
February 18th, 2011, 5:36 am
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at least I know now that his heart may be not as cold, crusty and stoney as I thought.
ExoFox123
February 21st, 2011, 5:43 pm
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Good Work! Surprise us with a random probably traumatizing for Atty [maybe turn into ash.........nah, he's too much of a *BLEEP*up to turn into that.] ending that will leave us staring in sheer horror. and hellfire14, U STOLE MAH AVATUR WIT CUlUR INSTED! >:( Well, almost anyways. Head is at a diff angle.
NanaTheFurret
April 1st, 2011, 1:34 pm
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lol the sign VICTORY-in road form.
Guest
April 22nd, 2012, 1:30 pm
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You should animate it!
Copperwolf
December 2nd, 2014, 10:50 pm
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I read the endings in the narrator from pokemons voice
Also victory in road form is just plain genius
Guest
October 23rd, 2015, 3:47 pm
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Looking at this four years into the future, it's amazing just how much h0ly's confidence in her ability to follow through has improved
Razz (Guest)
August 23rd, 2016, 3:59 pm
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Ohmygosh,yes. This is so good. Atticus is slowly starting to like Dragonthing! yes!