Author's Comments:

H0lyhandgrenade, 04 Jul 2012 09:48 am

Why, hello again! I felt a little cheap doing just one pencilled page for the bonus update, since I'd said two pencilled pages would kinda count as one. So whether I do the rest in pencil or pen or not, here's the second part of the bonus update. Only fair.

Man I looked forward to doing this page xD Started wondering ages ago how the hell I was gunna lay this one out. But I'm pretty pleased with the result.

See y'all on Friday.

User's Comments:

Reply SolaraHedgie, 04 Jul 2012 09:50 am

That is honestly the best Onix I have ever seen.
*clap clap clap*

Reply pat15, 04 Jul 2012 09:51 am

So what's this guy's nickname? :U

Reply ISpamYou, 04 Jul 2012 10:05 am

And this Onix shall be known as RumbleRusher, because it made the ground rumble and then shot out like a ninja.

Also, more penciled pages = yes please.

Reply Fluffyllama (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 10:15 am

@pat15: Maybe it's Cuddles

Reply Hero of Comedy, 04 Jul 2012 10:26 am

Scary

Reply Author Jakes, 04 Jul 2012 10:28 am

Wow... that onix looks like he could 'fuck you up'.

Reply Deonis, 04 Jul 2012 10:37 am

Bad-ass Onix is Bad-ass. No he's a hands down BAMF!

Also I'm betting his name while be something like Mister Friendly, Captain Cuddlepuss or I AR MISTAH NICE GUY.

Reply Stone_Merten, 04 Jul 2012 11:12 am

^^^ lol


called it! woot!

Reply ZaneZandell, 04 Jul 2012 11:29 am

ABORT, ATTY, ABOOORT!

Reply AEternal, 04 Jul 2012 12:02 pm

....... Perhaps its vision is based on movement? In which case, we should all stand stock still and not move at all.

Reply JakeTG (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 12:05 pm

PENCILED PLZ!!!!

Reply Demonic-Wanderer, 04 Jul 2012 12:10 pm

Why hello Onix. Thank you for making my day.

I believe I predicted this last page, but I love it. It's absolutely wonderful. Way to go Onix. And the expressions at the top of the page are absolutely awesome.

Reply remington, 04 Jul 2012 12:14 pm

This pencilled page is off the chain. Onix gonna give it to ya.

Reply The_mad_one, 04 Jul 2012 12:19 pm

This would be a good time to run. Fast.

Reply Inuzuka, 04 Jul 2012 12:19 pm

That Onix is awesome :D

Hands down beats any Onix I've seen in the game, manga or anime!

Reply Ryoko Son, 04 Jul 2012 12:26 pm

Most Badass Onix EVER!!! XD

Reply Jazzi, 04 Jul 2012 12:36 pm

Sure, tear down your roof.

Even though I'd love more updates, I do like the inked one mores for the sake of the art. ;3

Reply avian-reader, 04 Jul 2012 01:31 pm

Oh yes I love you.

Reply ToxicBreeze, 04 Jul 2012 01:34 pm

Dat Onix.

Reply Trainer Red, 04 Jul 2012 01:36 pm

...!
RED sent out BLASTOISE!

Reply Maiumaora, 04 Jul 2012 01:39 pm

I bet his name is fluffy.

Reply Spectre64, 04 Jul 2012 02:03 pm

well, atticus is fucked.

Reply melaredblu, 04 Jul 2012 02:33 pm

I actually like these pages. You scanned them very well and the shading and depth made via horizontal pencil strokes looks great.

Reply Sagat the Tiger, 04 Jul 2012 02:48 pm

@Fluffyllama: If it cuddles, it kills!

Reply zok4, 04 Jul 2012 02:54 pm

@pat15: Fluffy!

Reply zok4, 04 Jul 2012 02:58 pm

Is it just me or... A) Does George look like she's doing a Snorunt impression

and B) Atty might be about to wet himself

Reply Treason, 04 Jul 2012 03:57 pm

@ISpamYou: That... kinda sounds like a name for a laxative -_-

Ya, this has got to be one of the more pants wetting moments of Pokemon that I'm surprised gets glossed over so much. I mean, there's a dragon flying over you... and then there's the ground splitting beneath you to admit a terrifying behemoth snake made of boulders to tower over you. If I was in Atty's shoes I probably would've ran screaming to the exit and pushed George behind me to slow it down.

Reply AlkseeyaKC, 04 Jul 2012 04:05 pm

Holy onix. O n O

Reply Nurylon (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 04:19 pm

...now, send in the pikachu! Oh wait...
xD.
That is one exceptionally beautifully drawn onix.

Reply Kilroywuzheere, 04 Jul 2012 04:28 pm

Hmmmmm.... the pencil pages seem softer, fuzzier. Real life isn't so hard edged.

But the inked pages feel cleaner, more uniform.

I do rather like the pencil pages tho, pencil art has always poked at something in me. Appeals to me aesthetically. I'd welcome the pencil pages even without promise of more updates, there's something to them.

/finally logging into SmackJeeves again. Totally your fault.

Reply crazybob, 04 Jul 2012 04:33 pm

what a badass.

Reply Moo Moo, 04 Jul 2012 04:52 pm

What I said when I saw this page: "Oh hell no."
No joke. DT will die :P

Reply chaos-of-vinnie, 04 Jul 2012 05:11 pm

I love both the pencil and inked pages so I'll be happy with whatever you decide to do :) your work looks pretty either way.

Oh my that is one bad ass looking Onix!! How do you draw the Poke'mon so well!! I'm kinda freaked at what's gonna happen, especially since she's got a smug look on her face :S

Reply StalkerCat (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 05:11 pm

i really wanna see dragon things reaction to the onix... xD

Reply AlexYoshida, 04 Jul 2012 05:18 pm

@AEternal: No, no... we must stand ROCK still.

Reply Aura-Alora, 04 Jul 2012 05:20 pm

That 4th panel is how Atty will talk to Dragonthing when it becomes a Charizard =D

Reply Djer (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 05:21 pm

Damn This is the first time I've seen a representation of an Onyx and thought that it actually looked intimidating. Kudos.

Reply mosama, 04 Jul 2012 05:33 pm

I wonder if one day you'll just humor us by not paneling everything perfectly. A GIRLBOYTHING CAN ONLY DREAM!

Reply GenOne, 04 Jul 2012 05:43 pm

Might look intimidating, but still, only an onix~

Reply Mouko, 04 Jul 2012 06:56 pm

I hope Stein scolds that girl for her behavior. The fact that she considered brutally and viciously tormenting another Pokemon as 'just playing' is pretty horrible. If he doesn't, I just can't respect him.

Reply Meta-Akira, 04 Jul 2012 08:51 pm

Is that Onix a female? 'Cause it just broke the Glass Ceiling.

Ba-dum, ts!
*cricket chirps*

Reply ZachLight, 04 Jul 2012 08:52 pm

DAT ONIX! You made that Onix look super!

Reply Soul Moony, 05 Jul 2012 12:50 am

Epic drawing skills makes any Onix look epic. Ok, Atty now Run, run like the freakin wind and try to reach the pokecenter before that thing eats DT...

Reply gte225 (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 03:51 am

@Fluffyllama: It's the Stig?

Reply Sparky The Fox, 05 Jul 2012 03:55 am

His name is Steve. And he's going to slowly rape you to death with his bind and harden :3

Reply nuttyjigs, 05 Jul 2012 05:11 am

Wow, look at those eyes. Murder right there.

Reply Lady Darkrina, 05 Jul 2012 08:21 am

Okay, I think DT's going to die at this point...Onix is way too far..

Reply Mr Whippy (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 09:59 am

My god. That Onix. I don't even know how to describe how completely boss level it is.

Reply Guest, 05 Jul 2012 01:00 pm

@Meta-Akira: nice *thumbs up*

Reply eworm, 05 Jul 2012 02:30 pm

It seems the battle will be intense, really looking forward to how George will handle this one.

Well, duh. If anybody's going to fight, it's her (or the Feraligatr guy). We know all of Atty's Pokemon and he's got no chance to even get a challenge accepted, with DT beaten to a pulp and Pikachu being ineffective against ground types.

Reply jonasfx, 05 Jul 2012 02:43 pm

oh man oh man. this comic is really well put together after all this time! I've always seen it as a top comic on smackjeeves and never read it because I haven't liked other pokemon comics very much. but liking your other comic I thought I'd atleast give this a shot and yeah, this is some good shit~~ I'm glad I took the time to read it all :3
thank you for all your hard work on this!! >0<

so yeah, totally looking forward to more ^^

Reply daimakaichoko, 05 Jul 2012 03:00 pm

I don't think that DT is gonna have to much luck with this one

Reply silverparpar, 05 Jul 2012 03:20 pm

that Onix is absolutely amazing.

Reply Master Morality (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 05:28 pm

If Pokemon worked on even vaguely realistic physics, Onix would be night indestructible...

Reply DT_Fan (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 05:40 pm

Woah! To think I missed two updates! On regards to the ink/pencil poll, I think I'll wait until tomorrow's page. Kind of want to make a comparison. (Hint: more DT pweease :3)

Reply Vi (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 07:45 pm

... did that thing just land on dragon thing o_0;

while i'm like "whoo, more updates!" I really, really like your inking. so, my vote is for stick with what you're doing

Reply O11O1 (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 11:21 pm

So do they keep a glass ceiling at the top of the gym just so things can crash dramatically through it?

Reply RASP, 05 Jul 2012 11:29 pm

SO EPIC!!! :D

I love it! The way you drew the Onix's movements was perfect!!! X3

Crashing through the ceiling, curving at the last moment near the floor, and coiling up for a dramatic pose at a very intimidating height! Amazing!!!

GG, Atticus. It's time to go to the PokeCenter.

Reply CriesCrow, 06 Jul 2012 12:11 am

@zok4: So true. i didn't see that the first time when i viewed this.

Reply Zakiax (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 01:04 am

That Onix is so badass looking. I love it.

Reply NuzlockingMagma, 06 Jul 2012 02:50 am

Hm. I think, only now, does Atty realize the potential danger of sending either of his Pokemon up against this Onix.

Reply GONE, 06 Jul 2012 05:53 am

I wonder what the nickname is... I think it should be Rocky :)

Reply Jaktik (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 07:25 am

Onix rush. Terrifying. Wonderful as always H0ly.

Reply Caio (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 07:47 am

I think inked pages look better, even though your penciled pages are very good.

But I also think one update a week is too slow. Is there any hope of Atty ever getting to the Elite 4?

So I'm for pencil, 2 updates a week. I can get used to it.

Anyway, awesome page, this Onix looks really cool.

Reply Kyle Moses, 06 Jul 2012 09:17 am

In all reality, I'm more in support of 2 Penciled pages a week, as I do want to see the eventual conclusion to Atty's journey... Which, at the rate we're currently at, will be in like 100 years if we don't speed things along.
2 Penciled pages a week definitely.

Reply Hybriddragoness (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 09:32 am

Supreme Win > 3< Gosh I love this comic so damn much... Onix looks amazing and strangely cute... *glomps Onix's face* = 3=

Reply Loopy-Lass (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 11:14 am

Onix's thoughts: Nobody makes the young girl cry, grrrrr.

lol I couldn't resist xD
I love this comic

Reply miserablemaria, 06 Jul 2012 11:29 am

Onix looks so mean >.<

Reply Iarei (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 11:44 am

" My God, it's HUGE! " " Can... can I touch it? "

Reply Valatros, 06 Jul 2012 11:48 am

My prediction Okay, trying to make a habit of posting on webcomics, and starting with this since its my favorite.

My prediction for how this goes; George will have something useful against rock or ground types, and will trade for pikachu from Atticus when he loses/withdraws/gets-refused right now.

And then he'll have a pokemon who ISN'T naturally inclined to listen to him, unless he has badges... Knowing the damage he caused last time, this will probably result in a dam being broken and wiping out a city or something.

Reply perikink, 06 Jul 2012 12:19 pm

The coolest and most badass Onix ever right there.

Reply Azander (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 03:19 pm

Can't wait to see what big, bad pikachu is going to do against that.

Reply walkin_talkin_apocolyps, 06 Jul 2012 05:26 pm

GAAAH OH NO. i caught up this morning and didnt know i caught up! then i was gunna read more and found out there isnt any more D: im sad now

Reply Iarei (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 06:56 pm

GOOD NEWS! There's more now!

Reply qazox, 07 Jul 2012 11:51 am

@Iarei: That's what she said. ;)

Reply hikaru (Guest), 09 Jul 2012 05:34 pm

LOL gorge's face XD

Reply interspark, 10 Jul 2012 03:51 am

oh GREAT! now we need a new word for badass!

Reply +bird+ (Guest), 11 Jul 2012 11:18 pm

Not going to lie. I used to just be like "Oh Onix, that's cool, whatev" but that is p r e t t y intimidating. Also, I love Elle's (that's her name right?! I've missed a couple updates /o\) "my savoir is here" look. XD I prefer the inking, but this is great too! ^^

Reply Terre_The_Zangoose (Guest), 24 Mar 2013 09:40 am

George's Face = Priceless She's missing a tooth on the last panel.

Terre: Guilty.

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