Chapter 5 Page 33

July 4th, 2012, 9:48 am

From the Author

Why, hello again! I felt a little cheap doing just one pencilled page for the bonus update, since I'd said two pencilled pages would kinda count as one. So whether I do the rest in pencil or pen or not, here's the second part of the bonus update. Only fair.

Man I looked forward to doing this page xD Started wondering ages ago how the hell I was gunna lay this one out. But I'm pretty pleased with the result.

See y'all on Friday.

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That is honestly the best Onix I have ever seen.
*clap clap clap*

So what's this guy's nickname? :U

And this Onix shall be known as RumbleRusher, because it made the ground rumble and then shot out like a ninja.

Also, more penciled pages = yes please.

@pat15: Maybe it's Cuddles

Scary

Wow... that onix looks like he could 'fuck you up'.

Bad-ass Onix is Bad-ass. No he's a hands down BAMF!

Also I'm betting his name while be something like Mister Friendly, Captain Cuddlepuss or I AR MISTAH NICE GUY.

^^^ lol

called it! woot!

ABORT, ATTY, ABOOORT!

....... Perhaps its vision is based on movement? In which case, we should all stand stock still and not move at all.

PENCILED PLZ!!!!

Why hello Onix. Thank you for making my day.

I believe I predicted this last page, but I love it. It's absolutely wonderful. Way to go Onix. And the expressions at the top of the page are absolutely awesome.

This pencilled page is off the chain. Onix gonna give it to ya.

This would be a good time to run. Fast.

That Onix is awesome :D

Hands down beats any Onix I've seen in the game, manga or anime!

Most Badass Onix EVER!!! XD

Sure, tear down your roof.

Even though I'd love more updates, I do like the inked one mores for the sake of the art. ;3

Oh yes I love you.

Dat Onix.

...!
RED sent out BLASTOISE!

I bet his name is fluffy.

well, atticus is fucked.

I actually like these pages. You scanned them very well and the shading and depth made via horizontal pencil strokes looks great.

@Fluffyllama: If it cuddles, it kills!

@pat15: Fluffy!

Is it just me or... A) Does George look like she's doing a Snorunt impression

and B) Atty might be about to wet himself

@ISpamYou: That... kinda sounds like a name for a laxative -_-

Ya, this has got to be one of the more pants wetting moments of Pokemon that I'm surprised gets glossed over so much. I mean, there's a dragon flying over you... and then there's the ground splitting beneath you to admit a terrifying behemoth snake made of boulders to tower over you. If I was in Atty's shoes I probably would've ran screaming to the exit and pushed George behind me to slow it down.

Holy onix. O n O

...now, send in the pikachu! Oh wait...
xD.
That is one exceptionally beautifully drawn onix.

Hmmmmm.... the pencil pages seem softer, fuzzier. Real life isn't so hard edged.

But the inked pages feel cleaner, more uniform.

I do rather like the pencil pages tho, pencil art has always poked at something in me. Appeals to me aesthetically. I'd welcome the pencil pages even without promise of more updates, there's something to them.

/finally logging into SmackJeeves again. Totally your fault.

what a badass.

What I said when I saw this page: "Oh hell no."
No joke. DT will die :P

I love both the pencil and inked pages so I'll be happy with whatever you decide to do :) your work looks pretty either way.

Oh my that is one bad ass looking Onix!! How do you draw the Poke'mon so well!! I'm kinda freaked at what's gonna happen, especially since she's got a smug look on her face :S

i really wanna see dragon things reaction to the onix... xD

@AEternal: No, no... we must stand ROCK still.

That 4th panel is how Atty will talk to Dragonthing when it becomes a Charizard =D

Damn This is the first time I've seen a representation of an Onyx and thought that it actually looked intimidating. Kudos.

I wonder if one day you'll just humor us by not paneling everything perfectly. A GIRLBOYTHING CAN ONLY DREAM!

Might look intimidating, but still, only an onix~

I hope Stein scolds that girl for her behavior. The fact that she considered brutally and viciously tormenting another Pokemon as 'just playing' is pretty horrible. If he doesn't, I just can't respect him.

Is that Onix a female? 'Cause it just broke the Glass Ceiling.

Ba-dum, ts!
*cricket chirps*

DAT ONIX! You made that Onix look super!

Epic drawing skills makes any Onix look epic. Ok, Atty now Run, run like the freakin wind and try to reach the pokecenter before that thing eats DT...

@Fluffyllama: It's the Stig?

His name is Steve. And he's going to slowly rape you to death with his bind and harden :3

Wow, look at those eyes. Murder right there.

Okay, I think DT's going to die at this point...Onix is way too far..

My god. That Onix. I don't even know how to describe how completely boss level it is.

@Meta-Akira: nice *thumbs up*

It seems the battle will be intense, really looking forward to how George will handle this one.

Well, duh. If anybody's going to fight, it's her (or the Feraligatr guy). We know all of Atty's Pokemon and he's got no chance to even get a challenge accepted, with DT beaten to a pulp and Pikachu being ineffective against ground types.

oh man oh man. this comic is really well put together after all this time! I've always seen it as a top comic on smackjeeves and never read it because I haven't liked other pokemon comics very much. but liking your other comic I thought I'd atleast give this a shot and yeah, this is some good shit~~ I'm glad I took the time to read it all :3
thank you for all your hard work on this!! >0<

so yeah, totally looking forward to more ^^

I don't think that DT is gonna have to much luck with this one

that Onix is absolutely amazing.

If Pokemon worked on even vaguely realistic physics, Onix would be night indestructible...

Woah! To think I missed two updates! On regards to the ink/pencil poll, I think I'll wait until tomorrow's page. Kind of want to make a comparison. (Hint: more DT pweease :3)

... did that thing just land on dragon thing o_0;

while i'm like "whoo, more updates!" I really, really like your inking. so, my vote is for stick with what you're doing

So do they keep a glass ceiling at the top of the gym just so things can crash dramatically through it?

SO EPIC!!! :D

I love it! The way you drew the Onix's movements was perfect!!! X3

Crashing through the ceiling, curving at the last moment near the floor, and coiling up for a dramatic pose at a very intimidating height! Amazing!!!

GG, Atticus. It's time to go to the PokeCenter.

@zok4: So true. i didn't see that the first time when i viewed this.

That Onix is so badass looking. I love it.

Hm. I think, only now, does Atty realize the potential danger of sending either of his Pokemon up against this Onix.

I wonder what the nickname is... I think it should be Rocky :)

Onix rush. Terrifying. Wonderful as always H0ly.

I think inked pages look better, even though your penciled pages are very good.

But I also think one update a week is too slow. Is there any hope of Atty ever getting to the Elite 4?

So I'm for pencil, 2 updates a week. I can get used to it.

Anyway, awesome page, this Onix looks really cool.

In all reality, I'm more in support of 2 Penciled pages a week, as I do want to see the eventual conclusion to Atty's journey... Which, at the rate we're currently at, will be in like 100 years if we don't speed things along.
2 Penciled pages a week definitely.

Supreme Win > 3< Gosh I love this comic so damn much... Onix looks amazing and strangely cute... *glomps Onix's face* = 3=

Onix's thoughts: Nobody makes the young girl cry, grrrrr.

lol I couldn't resist xD
I love this comic

Onix looks so mean >.<

" My God, it's HUGE! " " Can... can I touch it? "

My prediction Okay, trying to make a habit of posting on webcomics, and starting with this since its my favorite.

My prediction for how this goes; George will have something useful against rock or ground types, and will trade for pikachu from Atticus when he loses/withdraws/gets-refused right now.

And then he'll have a pokemon who ISN'T naturally inclined to listen to him, unless he has badges... Knowing the damage he caused last time, this will probably result in a dam being broken and wiping out a city or something.

The coolest and most badass Onix ever right there.

Can't wait to see what big, bad pikachu is going to do against that.

GAAAH OH NO. i caught up this morning and didnt know i caught up! then i was gunna read more and found out there isnt any more D: im sad now

GOOD NEWS! There's more now!

@Iarei: That's what she said. ;)

LOL gorge's face XD

oh GREAT! now we need a new word for badass!

Not going to lie. I used to just be like "Oh Onix, that's cool, whatev" but that is p r e t t y intimidating. Also, I love Elle's (that's her name right?! I've missed a couple updates /o\) "my savoir is here" look. XD I prefer the inking, but this is great too! ^^

George's Face = Priceless She's missing a tooth on the last panel.

Terre: Guilty.

so cool