Chapter 5 Page 33
04 Jul 2012 09:48 am
H0lyhandgrenade, 04 Jul 2012 09:48 am
Why, hello again! I felt a little cheap doing just one pencilled page for the bonus update, since I'd said two pencilled pages would kinda count as one. So whether I do the rest in pencil or pen or not, here's the second part of the bonus update. Only fair.
Reply SolaraHedgie, 04 Jul 2012 09:50 am
That is honestly the best Onix I have ever seen.
So what's this guy's nickname? :U
And this Onix shall be known as RumbleRusher, because it made the ground rumble and then shot out like a ninja.
Reply Fluffyllama (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 10:15 am
@pat15: Maybe it's Cuddles
Reply Hero of Comedy, 04 Jul 2012 10:26 am
Reply Author Jakes, 04 Jul 2012 10:28 am
Wow... that onix looks like he could 'fuck you up'.
Bad-ass Onix is Bad-ass. No he's a hands down BAMF!
Reply Stone_Merten, 04 Jul 2012 11:12 am
Reply ZaneZandell, 04 Jul 2012 11:29 am
ABORT, ATTY, ABOOORT!
....... Perhaps its vision is based on movement? In which case, we should all stand stock still and not move at all.
Reply JakeTG (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 12:05 pm
Reply Demonic-Wanderer, 04 Jul 2012 12:10 pm
Why hello Onix. Thank you for making my day.
This pencilled page is off the chain. Onix gonna give it to ya.
Reply The_mad_one, 04 Jul 2012 12:19 pm
This would be a good time to run. Fast.
That Onix is awesome :D
Most Badass Onix EVER!!! XD
Sure, tear down your roof.
Reply avian-reader, 04 Jul 2012 01:31 pm
Oh yes I love you.
Reply ToxicBreeze, 04 Jul 2012 01:34 pm
Reply Trainer Red, 04 Jul 2012 01:36 pm
I bet his name is fluffy.
well, atticus is fucked.
Reply melaredblu, 04 Jul 2012 02:33 pm
I actually like these pages. You scanned them very well and the shading and depth made via horizontal pencil strokes looks great.
Reply Sagat the Tiger, 04 Jul 2012 02:48 pm
@Fluffyllama: If it cuddles, it kills!
Is it just me or...
A) Does George look like she's doing a Snorunt impression
@ISpamYou: That... kinda sounds like a name for a laxative -_-
Reply AlkseeyaKC, 04 Jul 2012 04:05 pm
Holy onix. O n O
Reply Nurylon (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 04:19 pm
...now, send in the pikachu!
Reply Kilroywuzheere, 04 Jul 2012 04:28 pm
Hmmmmm.... the pencil pages seem softer, fuzzier. Real life isn't so hard edged.
what a badass.
What I said when I saw this page: "Oh hell no."
Reply chaos-of-vinnie, 04 Jul 2012 05:11 pm
I love both the pencil and inked pages so I'll be happy with whatever you decide to do :) your work looks pretty either way.
Reply StalkerCat (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 05:11 pm
i really wanna see dragon things reaction to the onix... xD
Reply AlexYoshida, 04 Jul 2012 05:18 pm
@AEternal: No, no... we must stand ROCK still.
Reply Aura-Alora, 04 Jul 2012 05:20 pm
That 4th panel is how Atty will talk to Dragonthing when it becomes a Charizard =D
Reply Djer (Guest), 04 Jul 2012 05:21 pm
Damn This is the first time I've seen a representation of an Onyx and thought that it actually looked intimidating. Kudos.
I wonder if one day you'll just humor us by not paneling everything perfectly. A GIRLBOYTHING CAN ONLY DREAM!
Might look intimidating, but still, only an onix~
I hope Stein scolds that girl for her behavior. The fact that she considered brutally and viciously tormenting another Pokemon as 'just playing' is pretty horrible. If he doesn't, I just can't respect him.
Reply Meta-Akira, 04 Jul 2012 08:51 pm
Is that Onix a female? 'Cause it just broke the Glass Ceiling.
DAT ONIX! You made that Onix look super!
Reply Soul Moony, 05 Jul 2012 12:50 am
Epic drawing skills makes any Onix look epic. Ok, Atty now Run, run like the freakin wind and try to reach the pokecenter before that thing eats DT...
Reply gte225 (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 03:51 am
@Fluffyllama: It's the Stig?
Reply Sparky The Fox, 05 Jul 2012 03:55 am
His name is Steve. And he's going to slowly rape you to death with his bind and harden :3
Wow, look at those eyes. Murder right there.
Reply Lady Darkrina, 05 Jul 2012 08:21 am
Okay, I think DT's going to die at this point...Onix is way too far..
Reply Mr Whippy (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 09:59 am
My god. That Onix. I don't even know how to describe how completely boss level it is.
@Meta-Akira: nice *thumbs up*
It seems the battle will be intense, really looking forward to how George will handle this one.
oh man oh man. this comic is really well put together after all this time! I've always seen it as a top comic on smackjeeves and never read it because I haven't liked other pokemon comics very much. but liking your other comic I thought I'd atleast give this a shot and yeah, this is some good shit~~ I'm glad I took the time to read it all :3
Reply daimakaichoko, 05 Jul 2012 03:00 pm
I don't think that DT is gonna have to much luck with this one
Reply silverparpar, 05 Jul 2012 03:20 pm
that Onix is absolutely amazing.
Reply Master Morality (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 05:28 pm
If Pokemon worked on even vaguely realistic physics, Onix would be night indestructible...
Reply DT_Fan (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 05:40 pm
Woah! To think I missed two updates! On regards to the ink/pencil poll, I think I'll wait until tomorrow's page. Kind of want to make a comparison. (Hint: more DT pweease :3)
Reply Vi (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 07:45 pm
... did that thing just land on dragon thing o_0;
Reply O11O1 (Guest), 05 Jul 2012 11:21 pm
So do they keep a glass ceiling at the top of the gym just so things can crash dramatically through it?
SO EPIC!!! :D
@zok4: So true. i didn't see that the first time when i viewed this.
Reply Zakiax (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 01:04 am
That Onix is so badass looking. I love it.
Reply NuzlockingMagma, 06 Jul 2012 02:50 am
Hm. I think, only now, does Atty realize the potential danger of sending either of his Pokemon up against this Onix.
I wonder what the nickname is... I think it should be Rocky :)
Reply Jaktik (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 07:25 am
Onix rush. Terrifying. Wonderful as always H0ly.
Reply Caio (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 07:47 am
I think inked pages look better, even though your penciled pages are very good.
Reply Kyle Moses, 06 Jul 2012 09:17 am
In all reality, I'm more in support of 2 Penciled pages a week, as I do want to see the eventual conclusion to Atty's journey... Which, at the rate we're currently at, will be in like 100 years if we don't speed things along.
Reply Hybriddragoness (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 09:32 am
Supreme Win > 3< Gosh I love this comic so damn much... Onix looks amazing and strangely cute... *glomps Onix's face* = 3=
Reply Loopy-Lass (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 11:14 am
Onix's thoughts: Nobody makes the young girl cry, grrrrr.
Reply miserablemaria, 06 Jul 2012 11:29 am
Onix looks so mean >.<
Reply Iarei (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 11:44 am
" My God, it's HUGE! " " Can... can I touch it? "
Okay, trying to make a habit of posting on webcomics, and starting with this since its my favorite.
The coolest and most badass Onix ever right there.
Reply Azander (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 03:19 pm
Can't wait to see what big, bad pikachu is going to do against that.
Reply walkin_talkin_apocolyps, 06 Jul 2012 05:26 pm
GAAAH OH NO. i caught up this morning and didnt know i caught up! then i was gunna read more and found out there isnt any more D: im sad now
Reply Iarei (Guest), 06 Jul 2012 06:56 pm
GOOD NEWS! There's more now!
@Iarei: That's what she said. ;)
Reply hikaru (Guest), 09 Jul 2012 05:34 pm
LOL gorge's face XD
Reply interspark, 10 Jul 2012 03:51 am
oh GREAT! now we need a new word for badass!
Reply +bird+ (Guest), 11 Jul 2012 11:18 pm
Not going to lie. I used to just be like "Oh Onix, that's cool, whatev" but that is p r e t t y intimidating. Also, I love Elle's (that's her name right?! I've missed a couple updates /o\) "my savoir is here" look. XD I prefer the inking, but this is great too! ^^
Reply Terre_The_Zangoose (Guest), 24 Mar 2013 09:40 am
George's Face = Priceless
She's missing a tooth on the last panel.