Chapter 5 Page 34

July 6th, 2012, 6:25 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
July 6th, 2012, 6:25 pm
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...

*Cough*

What? Who DOESN'T ride their onix when they're going out grocery shopping? I know I would...

This is the aforementioned Stein. You might remember him from the chapter cover. He's one of my characters and he's.. Well he's here ='D Let's all be nice and not judge him just because he's different, okay? Man, drawing him for is gunna be an interesting change... I've never put muscles in a comic before. Or nipples.

This has been a crazy week for updates huh xD? I've enjoyed it. See y'all soon.
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Losech (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 6:27 pm
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Haha! This is like, the best page ever.
Shaggy9342
July 6th, 2012, 6:35 pm
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Game Over Man Well...that's it. Atty's screwed. He has a half-dead Dragonthing and a brand new Pikachu. I have a feeling that's not going to be enough.
CaptainDJ
July 6th, 2012, 6:37 pm
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Atty's face is quite similar to my face when I saw this fellow. Gracious, he is intimidating. X3
ChocoRess
July 6th, 2012, 6:38 pm
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Atty, you're boned. Completely and utterly screwed.
... Is Stein blind? I don't remember that being mentioned before, but it should have been because that's fucking awesome.
Jay (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 6:45 pm
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:O Meep! RUNN! What irks me so much is that these kids never change their clothes. =,= so nasteh lol /shotshot
Vertous
July 6th, 2012, 6:47 pm
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OK A BA onyx and a guy whos eyes receded to the back of his head...

atty...
Demonic-Wanderer
July 6th, 2012, 6:48 pm
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One. Is he blind? Cause that'd be awesome.
Two. So he DID go grocery shopping. That's wonderful. If I had an onix, I would take it grocery shopping every day.
And three. Have fun, Atty. :)
Djoing
July 6th, 2012, 6:52 pm
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He looks more like a ghost type user.
The_mad_one
July 6th, 2012, 6:54 pm
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"I've never put muscles in a comic before. Or nipples."

But the nipples are just ovals. :P

You've done ovals before! :D
Mr Whippy (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 6:58 pm
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My god, it's been ten minutes and I'm still laughing at it. THE EYES. THE UNBLINKING EYES.
Iarei (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 6:59 pm
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Seeing eye to eye. You're required to do battle if the other trainer catches your eye. Unless he's blind. Free pass then.
Pencil Artisan (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 7:07 pm
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Obvious Reference Alert Dear God, he's a BLIND EARTH BENDER! It's already too late, Atty. He can see you. And probably smell you, all things considered.
Falconer
July 6th, 2012, 7:14 pm
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Them muscles, man. THEM MUSCLES.
Pharaoh Man
July 6th, 2012, 7:15 pm
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Inb4 he turns out to be the nicest guy ever.
cool king (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 7:35 pm
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why is Beo wolf in pokemon?
Asj
July 6th, 2012, 7:38 pm
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He... doesn't have irises. Is he a zombie?
Well, his clothes seem to be in shreds, and there's bandages on his limbs, and he looks kind'a dirty.
But he has nice hair. :D
Timm (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 7:39 pm
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He almost looks as if he could be Atty's father.
korpollo (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 7:40 pm
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What a charming fellow.
jameswolf100
July 6th, 2012, 7:52 pm
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Look at dem eyes!
godmoderncommander
July 6th, 2012, 8:00 pm
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I'm scared. *sweets like crazy*
kate (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 8:04 pm
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inb4 he's actually gym trainer no. 2 (:
RayleneQuinn
July 6th, 2012, 8:15 pm
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For not putting muscles in a comic before those are some really nice muscles owo
RASP
July 6th, 2012, 8:55 pm
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@Pharaoh Man: XD I would LOVE that! :D
Kafrin (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 9:24 pm
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He looks an awful lot like Atticus.
blol (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 9:27 pm
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lol "GYM LEADER DOVAKHIM WOULD LIKE TO BATTLE!"
DT_Fan (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 9:50 pm
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Hmmmm.... Ok, I'll admit, Onyx shopping made me laugh a bit xD But no DT in this page makes me sad :( I wanted to compare a newly inked DT with the previous penciled one... Which btw I didn't like so much :/ Maybe it was just the position or angle. Either way, I'm more inclined towards inked pages. They usually look better imo, and if it means I get to see unevolved DT for a bit longer, I don't mind weekly updates :P
Meta-Akira
July 6th, 2012, 10:21 pm
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If he turns out to be a really, really nice guy, I'll laugh.
bluesox
July 6th, 2012, 10:21 pm
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DUDE! x'D <3
Rose (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 10:38 pm
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If that was the rock gym leader I'd quit being a trainer forever HOLLY JEEBS *dies*
ApaFox
July 6th, 2012, 11:25 pm
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.... this just got real.
dingdong (Guest)
July 6th, 2012, 11:36 pm
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nipple
Kokuji
July 6th, 2012, 11:38 pm
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... Yummy.
pwii
July 6th, 2012, 11:59 pm
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I literally just said "Oh, crap." out loud to myself.
nuttyjigs
July 7th, 2012, 12:02 am
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Of course, one must make a literally SMASHING comeback after returning home from grocery shopping! And obviously, manly men totally go to the supermarket topless. Need ta show off those abs!
Lockmaster24 (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 1:16 am
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Right now, all I can think of is Toph from Avatar.
Treason
July 7th, 2012, 1:17 am
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Why was Kurt Russell riding an Onyx? Did he just rescue the U.S. president from the Duke of New York or is this how he escaped from that antarctic base infested by aliens?
Ozimul (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 1:20 am
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Going to the Pokemart.
*You are now imagining a spastic Stein and Onix*
Andromeda Lazuli
July 7th, 2012, 1:32 am
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This chapter is now probably gonna be under my "Most Favorite From This Comic So Far" list! XD
Spectre64
July 7th, 2012, 1:41 am
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Dammit Elle, I go out for 10 f**king minutes to buy some cheeze-its and you made holes all over my gym floor.
Akuto (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 2:36 am
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Atty, send out your Pikachu...and aim for the sprinklers
Kyle Moses
July 7th, 2012, 2:44 am
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@Akuto: No, he can just light up a sig, take a smoke, and set off the alarms. Or have DT set them off.
Blable
July 7th, 2012, 5:21 am
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@Treason: FFF yes to all *manly tear*


I'm so glad I wasn't the only person who thought "Kurt Russell" when seeing this. Still though, he's pretty legit BD unf, those muscles~
zok4
July 7th, 2012, 5:24 am
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Does anyone else think that Atty's next word might be "Dad?"
Loopy-Lass (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 6:09 am
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@zok4: That would certainly give George a shock xD
Raichi
July 7th, 2012, 7:00 am
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wtf that guy has no PUPILS OR IRIS
Treason
July 7th, 2012, 7:36 am
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Big Trouble in Little Pewter @Blable: Right? I mean, he's only one eye patch away from being Snake Plissken. Hell, give him a wifebeater and send him off to the pokemon equivalent of Chinatown and he'd pass for Jack Burton.

Possible post-chapter epilogue? Cross your fingers!
Volkspanzer
July 7th, 2012, 8:07 am
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He may very well be blind! If anyone hasn't noticed, the third panel isn't only displaying a firm, set jaw, but it is also indicating a movement and flaring of his nostrils. I do believe he is sniffing the air to locate his prey, as he does not rely on sight!
hellfire14
July 7th, 2012, 8:29 am
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You see those eyes?
Those are the eyes of a murderer.
Deonis
July 7th, 2012, 9:44 am
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I bet Stein is a rock solid kind of guy!

I'll be in the corner.
Whitespirit
July 7th, 2012, 12:11 pm
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So that's what Toffs real father looks like!
Akuto (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 12:16 pm
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@Kyle Moses: lol, didn't think of that!
Kitleena
July 7th, 2012, 12:18 pm
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He's sniffing... nothing dangerous about a man who can smell where you are.
Merrsharr
July 7th, 2012, 1:07 pm
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Not having eyes is a requirement for being the leader of this gym.
HornplayerKC (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 1:08 pm
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I'm calling it now: He smells the smoke and is going to tell Atty no smoking indoors.
Merrsharr
July 7th, 2012, 1:09 pm
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btw, shouldn't there be a leek sticking out of one of the bags? It's always there when people carry their groceries home...
ZetaMaxR (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 2:25 pm
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.....They're boned
anonymous (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 2:48 pm
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Holy crap, he's gonna die.
HornplayerKC (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 2:54 pm
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Then after Atty is told off for smoking indoors, he could make a snippy remark about how they aren't indoors anymore! At which point the gym leader will say that it's his damn gym, tell them they have to follow his rules then introduce himself! It's so perfect!
Mr. Henry
July 7th, 2012, 3:06 pm
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Reminds me of a slightly younger Nier.
Rabethany
July 7th, 2012, 3:07 pm
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. well, I think the nipples are successful. well done :D
SmackJeevesNinja (Guest)
July 7th, 2012, 8:19 pm
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@Volkspanzer: Atty must be really easy to locate, with that cigarette sticking out his mouth.
tylerguzo
July 7th, 2012, 9:17 pm
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Any one else think atty should turn around back to the poke-center.maybe catch another Pokemon then come back. because other wise there's like literally no chance.i mean he mine as well be fighting an Arcues with a Magikarp.
psychedashell
July 8th, 2012, 2:25 am
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Damn... Look at all the extra feedback.
Oh wait, no pupils...does this mean he's a bit crazy like Super Trunks or is this the actual reason Brock's family stay squinty? I would be squinty too if my pupils were nowhere to be seen.
Neon-J
July 8th, 2012, 8:38 am
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.. Herobrine in disguise.
Nitrogen
July 8th, 2012, 9:09 am
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lmao who knew Chuck Norris was a gym leader too...
Mr.Lazy (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 11:20 am
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Hmmm, not sure if Bruno or if a badass Brock...
Guest (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 11:22 am
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I think now's about a good time for Dragonthing to level up and learn metal claw...
Cris (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 1:55 pm
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Dude. 8-pack. Hot.
chaos-of-vinnie
July 8th, 2012, 2:52 pm
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This guy looks like he's about to kick some serious ass!!
I'm gonna assume that he's blind due to the blank eyes? Well I always take blank eyes as a code for the character being blind :)
Actua (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 6:15 pm
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Hello, son.
Murhdock (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 7:29 pm
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I would have loved to see the grocer's face at check out
PLQC (Guest)
July 8th, 2012, 9:55 pm
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He looks a bit too badass for a guy who probably has like level 10 pokemons.
KirtiMiko
July 8th, 2012, 10:26 pm
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See that bag at his waist?
It contains the shattered dreams of his enemies.
Soul Moony
July 8th, 2012, 11:20 pm
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Ok Atty, time to RUN for your DT life. And I bet he is blind and use the mighty power of his huge Onix to "see"... and yeah, who would not ride his onix to the grocery store? I would ride my Dragonite xD
Connor (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 2:29 am
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This would be an OH SHIT moment *slowly backs away*
WiddleWade
July 9th, 2012, 4:21 am
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This is like the first time I have anything to complain about in this comic but, I just can't see him jump like that off Onyx, and land on his knee like that with those bags in his hands. Actually performed, it would look more stupid and awkward than cool. I don't want to tell you how to draw, but I just mean that sometimes you gotta think about the whole movement and not just cool panels? I sound like a douche. But I'm saying because you're awesome and awesome needs to be more awesome ^^
Unclever title
July 9th, 2012, 10:21 am
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Looks like he's got his white eye contact lenses in!
Master Morality (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 10:27 am
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He's certainly got the whole intimidation thing down.
Kuuchan
July 9th, 2012, 10:53 am
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Hello, Brother. XD
Missa (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 11:37 am
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Mmmm Doesn't anybody else totally want to jump Stein's bones? Mmmm, hello sexyman. <3
JakeTG (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 12:01 pm
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PENCILED x 2 PLEASE
Art work is slightly better this way, but i come here for the story, the art comes 2nd
Lulu (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 1:49 pm
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Umm @Missa: um YUS o_o
swish (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 5:06 pm
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-whistles- Nice muscles. Veeery nice muscles .____.
icestorm3 (Guest)
July 9th, 2012, 7:07 pm
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Where's Stein's pupils? He looks like a Tarzan zombie...
paper or plastic?
apparently this dude doesnt give a shit about the world xD
Guest
July 9th, 2012, 10:20 pm
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oh my gawd its atty dad
wr4ith0
July 10th, 2012, 1:47 am
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and now we know why brock never opens his eyes... pewter city gymleaders are born blind.
interspark
July 10th, 2012, 3:52 am
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is he... undead?! O.o
Jolt99 (Guest)
July 10th, 2012, 5:27 am
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The eyes and the name stein itself to me suggests a more undead theme rather than rock. Is he a temp from the johto ghost gym? =p. Kidding, he does look awesome, but damn those eyes are freaky.
Z3TSU91 (Guest)
July 10th, 2012, 12:40 pm
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HHEEEE-MMAAAAAANNNN Bad-ass blind man is bad-ass... and blind.
CATman4L
July 10th, 2012, 1:34 pm
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whats with the silance D: thats two pages now without anything being said, i'm worried. (also blindness ftw)
Artemis (Guest)
July 10th, 2012, 1:54 pm
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I know where you took the name for Stein, it comes from the game Dragon Age, doesn't it?
I mean ... I think so :D
midnull (Guest)
July 10th, 2012, 11:00 pm
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hum He's blind.
kinda. maybe. (Guest)
July 11th, 2012, 10:20 am
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mole! he reminds me of a mole.. kind of because hes all blind and stuff...
Barn0wl
July 11th, 2012, 3:27 pm
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Wow Loved the pencils, but love all of your work so far. Spent a while going back through your whole archive past few days. Love it that much, yep. And a belated "pure awesomeness" on the previous page for your Onix. =-o

Oh ... oddly enough, it wasn't until just last night that I discovered the "alt-text" on your pages! LOL. You'd think I'd be looking for that since quite a few on-line comics use it. It adds a nice chuckle to the laughs.

Thanks for all the hard work on Mokepon!
glaxx (Guest)
July 11th, 2012, 10:43 pm
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updates a regular one would be nice...kinda shitty without one id say
+bird+ (Guest)
July 11th, 2012, 11:22 pm
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...Stein looks like a caveman/DBZ version of Atty in a few years. But I look forward to learning his character!

Also, dat Onix. That ain't gon' fit in no pocket! `0`
GlennJeffrey
July 12th, 2012, 7:23 am
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That's It as Fred responded I didnt even know that anyone can earn $7015 in a few weeks on the internet. did you see this website N u t t y R i c h.cOm
Vi (Guest)
July 12th, 2012, 10:36 pm
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and he's all like 'you'd better have won that match! how else am I supposed to afford to fix the glass ceiling all the time?' (or his onix would be stuck outside lol)

he does it because the doors aren't big enough, his onix is claustrophobic so can't use dig, and hates its pokeball
Wolfie-Cat (Guest)
July 13th, 2012, 5:10 pm
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I love the fact that his name is Stein. I'ts awesome, and fitting:3 Perfect for a rock / ground gym leader.
Guest
July 18th, 2012, 7:33 pm
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wait...wheres the only black man in the country?
mikirisoul (Guest)
July 21st, 2012, 8:06 am
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@Jay: actually they have closets full of the same outfit.So they do change their clothes.
Air Man1 21
July 22nd, 2012, 12:54 pm
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@Akuto: Already forgetting the glass ceiling he smashed on his return.
Draconickitty
August 24th, 2012, 11:04 am
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omg mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that body <3
Ash Ketchup (Guest)
November 11th, 2012, 5:34 pm
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@Shaggy9342: AIM FOR THE HORN!!!
FerreTrip
March 16th, 2013, 1:00 am
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Holy shit, it's Conan....

...wait, he's....

...*dies laughing*