Chapter 5 Page 39

July 27th, 2012, 7:21 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
July 27th, 2012, 7:21 pm
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I think Atty might be hitting his wall. I also think I'm starting to get better with pencils. Though I've essentially started using them nearly like ink pens xD; I'm terrible at saving myself time... Fortunately still a bit faster than actual inking.

This page is slightly longer than the others. It follows a more typical comic page size. I think I might start sticking with this... Jury's still out on that one.

See y'all soon.
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SolaraHedgie
July 27th, 2012, 7:24 pm
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If there was a wall in front of him, it would already have a dent of his face in it.
Chasyn
July 27th, 2012, 7:25 pm
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Woooot! Go Atty! Or do what I do. Run back to the Pokemon center really quick to heal, and THEN beat him.
Foxblaze
July 27th, 2012, 7:25 pm
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Omg, I'm first?! ^^

Atty is right, that is totally not fair!

-EDIT- Darn it! Nvm.... at least I'm 3rd...
AngelicLily
July 27th, 2012, 7:29 pm
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@_@ Oh boy...I hope he does well.
Guest
July 27th, 2012, 7:49 pm
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Come on Atty!
Give him the finger, and go to the Pokecenter and GTFO.
necrolichmon
July 27th, 2012, 7:59 pm
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this comic is so much win!
Pharaoh Man
July 27th, 2012, 8:06 pm
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So are these guys like the Benkei of jumpers?
ArchiosLukos (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 8:09 pm
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Poor Atty. He will probably have to fight anyway.
Zelkova
July 27th, 2012, 8:18 pm
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Don't believe in yourself, believe in me who believe in you!
The/Doctor
July 27th, 2012, 9:06 pm
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the penciling looks great, no worries
AlkseeyaKC
July 27th, 2012, 9:27 pm
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Awww poop. Zelkova beat me to it! XD

You can do it Brent!
undeadoranges (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 9:28 pm
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I believe in you, Atty!

((And sorry for nitpicking, but in the title text it should be "write," not "right." For some reason it really throws me when the two get mixed up.))
Botanist (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 9:39 pm
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irn tail It's OK just have Pikachu use iron tail on his pokemon.
it would be a total upset, and I for one would be smiling :)
oh and he seems to be missing his black eye when did that go away?
LilyLackLuster
July 27th, 2012, 9:49 pm
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Atty has really nice eyes in that 4th panel but, what happened to his black eye, or does he just heal fast?
Tailikku
July 27th, 2012, 9:51 pm
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ATTICUS.

Show your true power! You must secretly be a genius and devise the perfect ploy to defeat your opponents!

...Stop smoking and listen to me!
H0lyhandgrenade
July 27th, 2012, 9:55 pm
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@LilyLackLuster: ? I put it there... Is it too unclear?
Ultimate the Hedgehog
July 27th, 2012, 10:28 pm
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@H0lyhandgrenade: nope. its not there.
Tailikku
July 27th, 2012, 10:54 pm
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The black eye is definitely there, but maybe some people are looking near the bottom instead of near the top of the eye
Mythee
July 27th, 2012, 11:13 pm
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The black eye isn't super obvious but I'm ok with that because his face injuries are making me cringe with owch
anon (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 11:20 pm
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@H0lyhandgrenade: the blood from a black eye pools under it not above. i think that is what throws us off. it looks like shading more than a bruise
Liana (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 11:37 pm
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Come on guys atty has to win. the story can't stand to make atty lose something as important as his jumper! that's crazy! He has to win! :P
Connor (Guest)
July 27th, 2012, 11:59 pm
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If he's lucky his smokes will set off the sprinkles (and kill the onix).
Guest
July 28th, 2012, 12:00 am
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New theory. Atty's about to lose, when officer Jenny bursts in to arest these two for scamming trainers in their gym.
qazox
July 28th, 2012, 12:30 am
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@ Guest: Sound about right.

Other than there might not be an Officer Jenny...
Z2 (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 12:35 am
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So you hate writing those words, eh? Well right here they're as appropriate as they've ever been. Stein is supposedly the top official in a government sponsored organisation possessing many iterations that all heavily focus on RULES. Stein practically ordering an ordinary citizen to gamble for a chance at something Stein is supposed to offer for free is completely unacceptable. "That's not fair and this tool should be fired for it," is probably the appropriate sentence.

Also, I sincerely hope your character who hated the words 'Not fair' wasn't supposed to be anything like sympathetic. Yeah, maybe life isn't fair, but the PURSUIT of justice and parity and objection to the lack thereof is the driving force behind countless heroes REAL and fictional.
Treason
July 28th, 2012, 6:33 am
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Just to be a dick, Atty should probably have DT set the jumper on fire if he loses and is forced to hand it over.
AtoriCoture
July 28th, 2012, 6:44 am
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Something To think about Atty. I beet Brock, when he was Gym Leader there, with a pikachu (aka Rat Thing).
Captain LeBubbles
July 28th, 2012, 9:40 am
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Stein is being a massive bag of dicks here. Not only is he doing all the things Z2 said, but he's also forcing Atty into a battle using a Pokemon that has already been through one battle recently, that he nearly lost. It's true Atty started the battle with Elle thinking she was the gym leader, but when he did his Pokemon was at full health, NOT in the red.
eishiya
July 28th, 2012, 11:44 am
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I find the usual size easier to read, since they fit on my screen and these don't D:

/getsbricked
Jay (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 12:18 pm
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Ahh Atty save urself! You get so much depth from your pencil technique. I like it!
Soul Moony
July 28th, 2012, 12:39 pm
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Ok no worries Atty cant lose his jumper is almost necesary for the story to continue xD ok jokes appart... Atty, now is time to heal DT or to try to beat an onix with a massive underlevel and with type disvantage Rat thing. GO ATTY!
IcyGwyn (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 1:29 pm
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Rat used Iron Tail
+bird+ (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 5:19 pm
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I like the darker shading! Also, I get your weariness...I remember Ikuto from Nagasarete Airantou and his trigger word "impossible". Good luck Atty! >/\< Also, seeing Elle casually wave after getting him further into a wall pissed me off! I still like her though. XD
tektonik
July 28th, 2012, 6:41 pm
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Pencils still look good. I'm surprised the page looks clean even after you've used pencils and scanned it. :D
Blable
July 28th, 2012, 7:45 pm
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Pfft, Atty should totally be like, "F this sh...I'm out =3=" That jumper is to godly to just give away to a mere mortal BD.

Though...I get a sort of "..about to cry?" feels from Atty in the last panel. I mean, here you have a guy who didn't want to do this in the first place being trapped by both the gym people but George as well.

If that were me, I'd do the "...I'm out" thing.

But yes...this would be a good opportunity for Pikachu to make an appearance, it is a super power pokemon after all BD...
Quin (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 7:48 pm
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Send your weaken and beaten up fire type against that giant soul crushing rock snake.
Iarei (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 8:09 pm
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I think you'll find my counter-offer fair and reasonable; If I win I get your left nipple. Wait, if sand-slash girl conceded defeat, shouldn't she be giving Atticus money? If she isn't, then why hasn't Atticus blacked out from sheer confusion yet?
Blooper (Guest)
July 28th, 2012, 8:16 pm
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This'll probably sound really weird, but i have an irrational love for the last panel. The perspective is amazing. Great job.
Redrafter
July 28th, 2012, 9:19 pm
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Okay, but seriously, what's with everyone and his jumper? It's like the top currency, like a level 1 mew. (I love references).
GenOne
July 28th, 2012, 9:44 pm
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Don't liek Stein, being such an unsporting dick~

Oh and Blable, the only super Pikachu be Red's Pika~
fallenskye (Guest)
July 29th, 2012, 2:15 am
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@Pharaoh Man:

Heeeeey, I actually got that reference. Sweet. XD
manny082
July 29th, 2012, 4:28 am
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I hope that Holyhandgrenade makes brent's jumper available to buy after this arc is finished :D
chaos-of-vinnie
July 29th, 2012, 2:34 pm
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NOOOOOO DT has had too much conflict today! Let the poor guy rest!
Guest
July 29th, 2012, 11:28 pm
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i hope George used a Potion or two on dt wean atty was not looking
Master Ash (Guest)
July 30th, 2012, 1:19 am
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I see a evolution coming up!
HKim
July 30th, 2012, 8:07 pm
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I don't know what I would do in this situation.
Inuzuka
August 2nd, 2012, 7:36 am
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3rd Panel How is Elly holding her Sandslash in her lap without getting torn to shreds by the spines on it's back?
tdog199
August 3rd, 2012, 5:54 pm
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IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR! It's not F-A-I-R FAIR! How many green jellybeans does Stein get? 5! How many green jellybeans did Atty get? 2! It's not fair, it's not fair, it's not fair!
Stone_Merten
August 12th, 2012, 11:38 am
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ellie please don't do that with sandslash... its kinda creepy.....