Chapter 6 Page 77

April 25th, 2013, 4:34 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
April 25th, 2013, 4:34 pm
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...? What? What're you looking at me like that for.

I was in the mood to try something different okay xD; In a bit of a slumpy art mood. So I went and did this page all digital just for a change. It was fun to do but I'm not sure it quite fits the tone of the comic... I'll be going back to normal after this xD I might use a style like this in a different comic someday. After a lil' more practice that is.

'Bob' is the best name to be shouting dramatically.

See y'all soon.
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CardinalRed
April 25th, 2013, 4:40 pm
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Oh nice, update on my birthday!

About the style, I like it, maybe more than the usual, but it doesn't really fit.
Nekomata-chan
April 25th, 2013, 4:40 pm
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I like it! xD You should consider doing page like this more often. Adds a nice dramatic effect. xD
An Endless Voyager (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 4:43 pm
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? Could I be first? I don't see any comments...
Anyhow, I agree. This is an interesting style to try, but give a slightly edgier feel than this comic has. However, if you were ever to do a cyber-punk comic, or something like that, who knows.
ZK1717 (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 4:45 pm
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BOB!! and bob is down.
Firecat1311
April 25th, 2013, 4:48 pm
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@An Endless Voyager: so close, yet so far.
w0lfh4wk (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 4:48 pm
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I think... That this is an excellent style for this page and I really really like it. You should definitely drop this kind of style into the comic every now and again - but I think the main style of the comic should definitely stay.
pringerpx
April 25th, 2013, 4:48 pm
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Copic markers? :D

Intentionally (or unintentionally) adds to the intensity of the situation.
Guest (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 4:51 pm
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Why do I feel like Bob is going to suddenly get up and smash DT like he did when she was a Charmander? Oh wait, it's H0ly, that's why XD
Humanplague (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 4:53 pm
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The style is good, but it's to intense and dramatic, fits the page but not the story. It would look a lot better on something more serious.
Hadam10Rose
April 25th, 2013, 4:56 pm
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Go Dragonthingy :)
BurstThrough
April 25th, 2013, 5:07 pm
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I won't comdemn Atticus for doing what he did cause while playing I've done the same by accident sometimes...
Former DT_Fan (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 5:15 pm
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Interesting change. Not bad, though it's too big of a contrast with the usual style. Not quite sure how to describe it, but I feel like it has more shading but less detail.
melvin2898
April 25th, 2013, 5:24 pm
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I like the other style way more. Maybe use this for a really dramatic scene?
LandenMaster
April 25th, 2013, 5:32 pm
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Cool I wish Bob death George!
J.A.K.
April 25th, 2013, 5:37 pm
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I like this. real dramatic but I have to agree. Change back to the original style but don't give this one up!! I say keep it for later use.
Cave
April 25th, 2013, 5:51 pm
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I like it, but I LOVE your traditional pen and paper drawings more. :) /traditionalist
XXUD1Xx6920
April 25th, 2013, 6:00 pm
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YAY DT :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Tabbycat (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:05 pm
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Wait, so are we sure he doesn't have more than one pokemon? Because Dragonthing doesn't look like she could take much more fighting.
Purple (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:18 pm
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@H0ly so is that "one extra update coming" thing legit or is it lying to me?
WhoWhatWhere (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:20 pm
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I really liked the new style.
SaviourInDistress
April 25th, 2013, 6:20 pm
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AWW she looks so proud of herself. as for the style it looks epic but a little bit too serious for this one, just means you are going to have to come up with a whole new comic XD
varsaigen (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:25 pm
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With how much he's yelling Tackle, it might as well be Struggle, the lack of moves.

The style of this page certainly makes for an intense, gritty atmosphere. Really dark. Reminds me of dead.winter comic's style. Especially on the eyes.
C.Olimar788 (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:46 pm
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When suddenly...

Gym Leader STEIN used a FULL RESTORE!
razz (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 6:47 pm
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Stein: Good job Bob return
Atticus: So do I get my jumper back.
Stein: Not yet you still have to beat my next pokemon.
Atticus: What...
Stein: I choose you *insert creative name*
George: Oh my god its a Golem!
Atticus: Am I really never going get my jumper back?
therz14
April 25th, 2013, 7:01 pm
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this is a cool style.
Magma (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 7:21 pm
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@razz: something like Tom. Or Bill. Or Gary xD
Unclever title
April 25th, 2013, 7:45 pm
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I like it. I love seeing artists experiment in their comics.

I actually quite like this style. It's appropriate for the scene the less defined lines give the impression that this scene was fast, intense, and dangerous.

Though really that's mostly because it's different from the normal style you use. So in that sense it is a definite departure of the comic's typical tone. Aside from the dramatics in general everything here feels a little more three dimensional. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of it. Ultimately, of course, it's up to you so draw what you feel is best/just really want to draw at the moment.
Ultimate the Hedgehog
April 25th, 2013, 7:47 pm
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Nice
Blitz3124
April 25th, 2013, 8:06 pm
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just... wow :o
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
April 25th, 2013, 8:20 pm
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I dunno about this style for this comic. Looks a little... clumpy. Or... something. I dunno it feels off.
I rather liked the pencil'd style.
Also, I've never known an onyx to take so long to go down, but then, I know better than to use FIRE MOVES on it.

First playthrough is always the hardest, Atticus!
Medieval-Sparrow
April 25th, 2013, 9:02 pm
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I think this particular style makes it seem more dramatic. It wouldn't suit the regular tone of the comic but for a finishing move it's perfect.
Lovey
April 25th, 2013, 10:03 pm
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This style is perfect for moments like these.
MasterOnion (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 10:27 pm
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The art style you used today feels better for darker, more dramatic moments. It's very good but I don't think it goes well with a more comedic comic like this one. Very good comic!
SmackJeevesNinja (Guest)
April 25th, 2013, 10:40 pm
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As much as I love this new art style (and I really do love it) it's a bit too dramatic and dark for this comic. But WHOO GO DT!!!
qazox
April 25th, 2013, 11:06 pm
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I like what DT's possibly thinking in the last panel...
wr4ith0
April 25th, 2013, 11:26 pm
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I have seen some really cool uses of this and similar styles (Twilight Monk, Wake up Deadman, and samarai gengi... although these all tend towards the art end of the art vs. story spectrum). That said, I agree that it's probably not the best fit for this comic.
discrider (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 12:27 am
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New page looks okay, but it lacks the definition and solid shading of your previous pages.

Maybe only use when DT's using lots of flame attacks because charcoal?

Ooh, or only for the fire gym! Different style on entering each gym! XP
Silverware (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 12:43 am
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Awesome Okay, I actually prefer the art this way.
Been reading since like 10 pages in, this comic is awesome.
cres0055
April 26th, 2013, 1:01 am
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Whoa Whoa cool page. Great well, everything.
jonasfx
April 26th, 2013, 1:06 am
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wow! now this is a surprise :D it does look more dramatic and darker. maybe the style would fit a serious comic (H0lyhandgrenade goes NOIR!? ^.~)
Winterous (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 1:55 am
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Now... What's his next pokemon? Surely he doesn't just have the Onyx :P
Sol
April 26th, 2013, 3:29 am
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You probably won't get this reference, but... Game Over. The User Wins.
crazybob
April 26th, 2013, 4:41 am
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Bob is down! next is a geodude.
PepperTenSoup
April 26th, 2013, 4:49 am
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I definitely prefer the usual style to this one. Your normal style is clean, fun, and cartoony, and fits the world of Pokemon much better than the art on this page.
Nalatos
April 26th, 2013, 5:00 am
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DT's expression in the last panel made me smile. You caught her little charmeleon emotions very well. Good job DT! Way to go!
Kamashari (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 5:53 am
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This... Is... EPIC!!! Yes, all of my yes to this style. It makes it all the better for me and I would highly recommend continuing it as you see fit. It would be great for epic moments, and did I mention it's epic?
Treason
April 26th, 2013, 7:00 am
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Digital you say? Kinda reminds me of a cleaned up oil pastel or charcoal drawing. Not sure about action scenes, but this seems really appropriate for depicting flash backs. Or perhaps the post battle scenes of big fights where it focuses on the trainers surveying the aftermath. You know, pages where a lot of strong emotions has to be condensed to a few panels and time takes on a more intangible quality (i.e. cheering/crying scenes after the big battle is won/lost). Definitely good for chapter ending scenes with the characters walking off into the sunset and such, or dramatically entering the gym for a final showdown.

Maybe I'm just being greedy, but I also would've liked those zoomed out shots of DT and Bob staring down each other at the end to have taken up the full width of the page for added emphasis and to have gone on for more than two panels to lengthen the tension (e.g. if this were a printed comic then the first five panels would make up the left page and the zoomed out shadowy panels would take up the majority of the right). To me, the new art style really does a good job of depicting those standoff panels.
Anon3636 (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 8:38 am
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Stein looks rather odd here. On another note, in a game battle, DT would be dead many times over.
Xweetke
April 26th, 2013, 9:11 am
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Aww yeah kill that stone thing! xD
About the style, I do like it. But I think it might sooth a more dramatic story. Or you could do it for fun if you have some dramatic parts in the story.
So for short, I like it, but it doesn't fit the comic :P Just like you said XD
Pareidolia
April 26th, 2013, 10:09 am
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I really dig this digital look. It is a pleasant changeup :) Also super easy to colour if you are bored on a Friday afternoon.
http://imageshack.us/a/img29/3295/mokcolou.png
ShanaFlareon
April 26th, 2013, 4:48 pm
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it looks really cool, but its too dark for the style of this comic.
Caio (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 5:45 pm
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It doesn't really fit the style of the comic, so I wouldn't do this often if I were you, but this style might look good for dramatic moments, like this one. Good job!
varsaigen (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 7:08 pm
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@C.Olimar788: I know, right? XD
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
April 26th, 2013, 9:54 pm
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About the name of geodude/golem: @razz:
@Magma:

I call the name "Phil"! Phil the Golem!
Eternity Everest (Guest)
April 26th, 2013, 10:36 pm
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@Sol: Reboot!

Like the style. I think it's a bit jarring for an abrupt switch, but it doesn't look bad. If ye do another comic, this would be most totally fine to use as a style, I'd say.
Kelloe
April 26th, 2013, 11:02 pm
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onix return.
GO ONIX #2
teh_fish (Guest)
April 27th, 2013, 1:08 am
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And this is why they gave Charmander Metal Claw in the 3rd generation games.
Vi (Guest)
April 27th, 2013, 3:22 am
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Panel one for nuzlocke comic style perfection. Awesome... but totally not in theme with the current comic.
Firos_of_dark (Guest)
April 27th, 2013, 5:23 am
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@Sol: reboot... nice...
@H0ly: been reading for a while now, nice art, nice story, nice characters...

You've officially got me playing pokemon "Atty style" now... Huzzah! have a grand day.
hellfire14
April 27th, 2013, 7:36 am
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Shade, shade, SHADE!
Workingchef2
April 27th, 2013, 10:39 am
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And now for something completely different. I always read that sentence in John Cleese's voice. Lol! Monty Python, good times.

Oh and about the change. I love it, but I agree with most everyone else, its good for dramatic moments or another comic.
Someguy (Guest)
April 27th, 2013, 10:52 am
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Insert copypaste of everyone else saying the style is good for dramatic events when used sparingly but not for the overall comic here.
Guest
April 27th, 2013, 3:29 pm
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@pringerpx: Digital
Luxatrum
April 27th, 2013, 7:33 pm
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Oh my I think I might be in love with the way this page looks. Be still my beating heart. I suppose asking for a tutorial on how you managed to come up with this is unlikely? (Yes I know it's digital I could probably guess) I only do digital work and I've never seen let alone done anything like this.
Death By Spaghetti (Guest)
April 27th, 2013, 8:07 pm
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@Xweetke: Stone thing.... *internal screaming*
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
April 28th, 2013, 8:44 pm
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Oh gods, reboot! @Sol: I only vaguely remember it, anymore. We found it on netflix a while back, not sure if it is still there.
The lady with the mask face STILL haunts my nightmares, tho I respect her love of chaos and insanity!
Flannigan (Guest)
April 29th, 2013, 1:06 am
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Eh, it's nice, but so's the other art. But it's a lot darker and more dramatic. Probably should only be used in this comic for comedic effect.
Eshidoodle
April 29th, 2013, 3:51 pm
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I really like this style. Maybe save this especially for battles? It makes everything look so dramatic. <3
chaos-of-vinnie
May 3rd, 2013, 11:56 am
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The change defiantly went with the dramatics of the page.
Aww that smile at the end, that's pride right there :D