Chapter 7 Page 53

January 6th, 2014, 5:58 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
January 6th, 2014, 5:58 pm
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So, my tablet broke. Balls. Pain because I do my sketching digitally before I print it out to ink. ... But since I got impatient waiting for my new tablet to arrive, I thought hell to it let's try something new and just went straight into making some pages from scratch with pen. I'm pretty happy with how they turned out. Quicker, I'll tell you that...

See y'all soon.
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Ultimate Yoshi
January 6th, 2014, 6:00 pm
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Clefairies are creepy.
Ninja Kitten XP
January 6th, 2014, 6:01 pm
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OH GAWD NOT AGAIN!!!
RUN RAT RUN!!!!!
huntergorh
January 6th, 2014, 6:11 pm
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Rat's face just screams "oh, god no! Not again!"
Ryoko Son
January 6th, 2014, 6:15 pm
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You should be happy! They're good! I almost couldn't tell the difference! =D

And..... Oh No! It's the Clefairy!!! RUN!!!!! D=
Better yet, knock the pink bastard out with a pokeball... Or catch it, whatever... >,>
Caio (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 6:17 pm
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The art is pretty good, but it feels unfinished somehow. You can easily see the sketch lines in some characters, like Pikachu in the bottom left panel.

Also I had the same reaction as Rat. LMAO Creepy Clefaries.
Kevin (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 6:17 pm
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QUICK ATTY, CATCH IT WITH THOSE HYPER BALL-I MEAN ULTRA BALLS THAT ONE CHICK GAVE YOU!!!
Storyteller (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 6:30 pm
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I hope you'll try to do more pages with this tecnique, I really like the outcome. It's not really polished, but it's much... Sharper than before. Feels good for a battle scene. GO DRAGONTHING!
Demie (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 6:31 pm
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Damn Hiker, yo teef be grindin'.
DaNoggin (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 6:53 pm
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... RUN FOR THE HILLS!
Stranger (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 7:11 pm
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Neat-o!
Unclever title
January 6th, 2014, 7:16 pm
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The quality of this page is good enough for me. I don't mind sketch lines. But I'm not exactly high standards with things like this in the first place.

Prediction: Rat bumps Atty. Atty looks down. Sees Clefairy. Freaks out. Drops a pokeball. Catches Clefairy in the middle of a battle. Ends up looking like a pokemon trainer virtuoso. Hiker forfeits the match. Starts following Atty. Hiker becomes the new George.
Tips for sale (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 8:20 pm
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@Unclever title: OH GOD, I HOPE SO! Hiker George would be the best! I mean, if Ash can have TWO gym leaders following him everywhere, Atty should be able to have two Elite Four members tailing him trying to attain a millilitre of his awesomeness (cuz you measure that shit by volume, of course). Since they're far off, I'll settle for a Hiker.
Graham (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 9:13 pm
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I always feel bad for Rat.
Mythee
January 6th, 2014, 9:24 pm
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Page looks great!
Psonic98 (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 9:37 pm
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Rat's reaction is perfectly priceless! XD Amazing job!~
me (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 9:42 pm
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'DAAaWWwwWW rat looks sooo disappointed, then he looks terrified in the next panel
qazox
January 6th, 2014, 10:09 pm
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Oh shit... RUN rat, RUN!
Ziliath
January 6th, 2014, 10:53 pm
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Oh i like where this is going!, clafiry used metronome?, clarify used hydropump?!
(If only hydrocannon was a valid outcome :P)
UndeadOranges (Guest)
January 6th, 2014, 11:19 pm
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The pen style still looks awesome. Less polished, but it works well for action scenes. If it's quicker, then I say stick with it!
HaikenEdge
January 7th, 2014, 12:11 am
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Rat's reaction is perfect.
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
January 7th, 2014, 12:18 am
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Rat: GEH!?! Dat clefairy. If he catches it, I vote for the name "Stalker".
JC_Mraz
January 7th, 2014, 12:25 am
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You do your work the exact opposite of me. I sketch each panel on paper before I ink with my tablet lol Love reading Mokepon :)
Lyathali (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 1:15 am
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... and the next time there's color, Rat's fur is stark white from the shock/OMGWTF of the creep-fairy
+bird+ (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 1:50 am
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Looks good! Rat's face in that last panel, haha. He goes from so depressed to so shocked...got some anxiety issues, buddy? Hang in there!
That freaking Clefairy. You're not leaving the Mt. without one, Atty, they're all over you!
Bartimaeus (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 2:33 am
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[sung to the trololol song]

Fairy-ry-ry-ry, ry-ry-ry, ry-ry-ry, Fai-ry-ry Cle-fai-ry...
Merrsharr
January 7th, 2014, 4:03 am
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I kinda like the pencil art
Signah (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 4:04 am
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Thought done without a table I will admit that I didn't notice until reading your statment on the matter, take that how you will and keep up the work.
Jonathan (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 5:52 am
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If this were the Gen II series, you could do the same thing with a Delibird.

Nice work on the lines; I don't mind seeing line art like this, since it shows off an artist's technique, which goes into helping others develop their own styles by seeing if what you do works for them.
teh_fish (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 7:14 am
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This Clefairy has nothing to do . . .
Lady Darkrina
January 7th, 2014, 7:59 am
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Naaw cute clefairy as usual hee hee ^^
Antikha
January 7th, 2014, 8:00 am
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*shreeks* I want to adopt Rat. I just.. the poor thing ;;n;;.
DreamParadox01
January 7th, 2014, 8:36 am
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I think I've never said this but I SERIOUSLY LOVE HOW YOU DRAW TEETH.
Guest
January 7th, 2014, 9:44 am
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Oh lawd, Rat's expressions are gold.
Pyrophoricity
January 7th, 2014, 12:09 pm
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dat pikachuu face xD
jubedi
January 7th, 2014, 3:57 pm
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Of course, posing is the most fun part of a battle^^
Hiker's teeth appear a bit strange to me though... aren't they usually pointed and a little ziggzagg? well, at least my one are^^ maybe I need to see some human reference again...
Zoal
January 7th, 2014, 5:22 pm
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Mewtwo Oh my god when i first saw this page (out of context) I totally thought that was a Mewtwo fighting an onix! lol!
Zoal
January 7th, 2014, 5:24 pm
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Yes @ChaosSorceror_Davidicus: I concur!
Fruanc J.H. (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 5:35 pm
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abandon all hope? DEAR GOD IT'S A CLEFAIRY, ABANDON YOUR POSTS! RUN WHILE YOU CAN!!! . . . . . Before Mt. Moon is sealed forever. Or kill it quick before it has a chance to detonate.
Fruanc J.H. (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 5:40 pm
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Clefairy Names @ChaosSorceror_Davidicus: Stalker is good. Or bombshell, perhaps
Rotten Luck
January 7th, 2014, 8:12 pm
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First time poster long time reader. Okay that look on Rat thing's face had me laughing so much I had to post! LOVE IT!
Aamon (Guest)
January 7th, 2014, 11:13 pm
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The ultraball that failed to catch the hiker will be run into by clefairy and atty will pick it up and give the creepy pokemon to the creepy girl.
Timothy Wafflehanger (Guest)
January 8th, 2014, 12:31 am
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He'll probably call it "Pink thing"
How much you wanna bet he catches one, and the girl happens to get one on her own and lets him keep it and he's just like "NO PLEASE ARCEUS WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN ME?"
Feartheswans
January 8th, 2014, 1:23 am
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I still stand by that Woman who gave him the Pokeballs is actually that damned Clefairy!
Aamon (Guest)
January 8th, 2014, 3:32 am
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He will likely say dear god why have you forsaken me. Are their animals other than pokemon? He lack knowledge of pokemon but knows what a rat is. Remember the bubble of doom.
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
January 8th, 2014, 2:30 pm
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Looking back at it... @Zoal: I could see how you came to that conclusion. DT does resemble a mewtwo from the back.

... and I support the idea that Atticus' main psychic type being Mewtwo. Because only Atticus wouldn't realize the significance of having a Mewtwo in the timeframe of Gen 1!
chaos-of-vinnie
January 8th, 2014, 7:07 pm
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I like the look of this one, just pen looks cool :)
Lol oooh *a wild Clifairy appears* everyone run!
Jolt99 (Guest)
January 8th, 2014, 8:47 pm
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Clefairy-ex-machina in one form or another. I'm guessing either random metronome interference, or it's caught mid battle and used. I guess DT could just win normally as the onix is likely weaker than the gym leader's, but that's no fun and involves no torture of small cute animals, so H0ly would never do that =p
littlekirby61524
January 8th, 2014, 10:47 pm
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this is the most comments i've seen on one page Too bad he didn't let Dragonthing eat the rare candy
Tsumeken (Guest)
January 9th, 2014, 12:22 am
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@Zoal: I'd agree somewhat but Mewtwo's features are much rounder then DT's and the pointed tail mostly stops me from seeing it.

@ChaosSorceror_Davidicus: I think a Slowpoke to Slowbro would be more his speed, or even a not-so-psychic psychic Pokemon like Psyduck. A Mewtwo would be too odd for Mewtwo's own character more then Atticus' IMO.
Mong (Guest)
January 25th, 2014, 12:05 pm
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Pikachu has a heart attack.
Pikachu can't fight anymore.
Do you want to... oh, wait, magikarp, ehrm...
...
Do you want to start from your last save?