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December 29th, 2014, 5:33 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
December 29th, 2014, 5:39 pm
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Don't you dis my Jeremy, Lady.

See y'all soon.
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Snow7L
December 29th, 2014, 5:43 pm
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To be honest, I'll bet Atty can relate to the way she's feeling. :P
Tassit (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 5:46 pm
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3..2..1.. I'm going to laugh like crazy when he says, "Tough shit, get up."
Evilbob_dA
December 29th, 2014, 9:19 pm
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Tough Shit, Get up. @Tassit: LOL. "If you were really taking a day off you shouldn't be sitting here collecting your salary. Shoulda stayed home"
Orphaes (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 5:49 pm
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I like her already.
Takai
December 29th, 2014, 5:50 pm
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I don't blame her, swimming pools are a terrible sin.
BattleStarX
December 29th, 2014, 5:58 pm
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Hey, Rattata's the Beedrill's knees. Don't be dissin' those super Rattata.
hadherhad (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 6:19 pm
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He obviously needs to win her over with the power of cigarettes
Critic
December 29th, 2014, 6:37 pm
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Joey: But... But... My Rattata is top percentage! Even when its a Raticate, it's still a top percentage Rattata!
IcyPheonix (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 7:06 pm
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Lorelei perhaps?
(I probably spelled her name wrong). But the hair reminds me of hers, and her comment about 'icy exterior', Lorelei uses ice types.
The_mad_one
December 29th, 2014, 8:00 pm
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I'm pretty sure telling people to take their top percent rattata to the rock gym is the worst advice she could possibly give.
MilkyTea
December 29th, 2014, 8:10 pm
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@The_mad_one: Depends on the intended result. If they die out there, she won't have to fight them.
Tijopi11
December 29th, 2014, 8:17 pm
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You seem to enjoy causing rising suspension by hiding character's faces from us...
andwhyisit (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 8:50 pm
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Atty should point out that Jeremy is on vacation, mount moon has collapsed, and that quite frankly, he is the last trainer she is going to battle for at least a month and he isn't able to go anywhere in the short term.
Draexzhan (Guest)
December 29th, 2014, 9:56 pm
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Do the Rattatas own the every five minutes? because that's what that apostrophe is telling me.
A Demonic Presence
December 30th, 2014, 1:03 am
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is it wrong that i want him to just pull up a chair and say, "you too, huh?"
(Guest) (Guest)
December 30th, 2014, 1:25 am
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Holy... can it be... a sane person?
But don't you be dissin' my top percentage Rattata!
Chelvo
December 30th, 2014, 1:47 am
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Can it be!? ... Do I spot true Soulmates!?
MilkyTea
December 30th, 2014, 9:05 am
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@Chelvo: Plot twist, Atti's adopted, and that's his real mom. 8D
Cathon (Guest)
December 30th, 2014, 10:49 am
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soulmates? @Chelvo: you may be right, I believe I see some ruffle, to go with Atti's...what ever English people call sweaters. at any rate both fashion senses seem to be slightly odd.
XlvMckaydvlX
December 30th, 2014, 1:52 am
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Sounds like somebody has an ice cream headache.
SeriousJupiter (Guest)
December 30th, 2014, 5:40 am
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Hmm, this could be interesting. We all know that eventually she'll agree to battle him, but I just wonder how Atty will convince her. Will she notice DT and think that kicking Atty's ass would somehow brighten up her shitty day? Will Atty reason with her, taunt her or even *gasp* tell her the reason why he needs to battle her ASAP? Would Artemis care that Atty's a Rocket? She seems to hate her job, so maybe she wouldn't care if all of Kanto got burned to the ground if it meant that she could go back home to Johto. Maybe she'll make a deal with Atty or something - she'll battle him if he promises to keep up the bad work in Kanto. Or is that too Farfetch'd?
Psonic98 (Guest)
December 30th, 2014, 10:46 am
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@SeriousJupiter: Aww....awww.....I agree'd with everything you said.....up until the last sentence.....aw.....Good set up for it though, have to admit. XD
Takeshre
December 31st, 2014, 12:54 pm
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@SeriousJupiter: If you ask me, Wynaut?
HaikenEdge
December 30th, 2014, 7:05 am
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Watch it turn out to be the sister he didn't know he had.
Cathon (Guest)
December 30th, 2014, 10:45 am
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Do I sense a Brock or a Misty? It could be fun, if we had an Atti Sr. for George to have to offset! So, twice the inane shenanigans form team George, and twice the Meh from team Atti! Also an extra tag along could be fun, you know, change up the dynamic and all.
Kitleena
December 30th, 2014, 12:26 pm
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Grapes of Poliwrath I imagine that book is some sort of whirlpool poliwrath romance novel.
Lyathali (Guest)
December 31st, 2014, 4:48 am
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does a chain smoking 14 year old count as 'snot-nosed'? Of course, Atty could always point out that he just wants to go home and watch TV. that he's only doing this because his mother THREW HIM OUT... and he doesn't even have a Rattata.

or, ya know, someone could kick Rat into the pool, causing him to panic and discharge electricity into the water, killing maybe hundreds and adding that mess to the accidental forest fire of total destruction
Guest
January 1st, 2015, 10:25 am
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I know it's minor but "persistant" should be "persistent"
Drewbie (Guest)
January 2nd, 2015, 3:55 pm
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Atty is going to plonk down beside her and ask if she has seen the latest episodes of Top Gear.