Chapter 10 Page 10

June 5th, 2015, 4:07 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
June 5th, 2015, 4:07 pm
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Dragonthing does sleep a lot lately. I think it's cuz she's in her teenage stage.

Also, that is one huge bed. ... Buuut this WAS meant to be Abel's room, and he's a damn tall man. Maybe he asked for a custom large one. ...This is what I told myself rather than redrawing it at a more correct size when I noticed.

See y'all soon.
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PJSam
June 5th, 2015, 4:10 pm
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Rat looks so damn old when he(?) gives that smile.
Takai
June 5th, 2015, 5:55 pm
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@PJSam: Tired. Posing for artists is a pain in the ass at times. Some get real twitchy if you move a hair.
heliumsquid
June 5th, 2015, 7:00 pm
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@PJSam: Most people generally look/feel older when they've been through a lot of pressure or trauma.
Rat has been slapped out of an arena building, barely survived an immense cave-in, and has an owner who was in the equivalent of the mafia, so who knows how old he feels right now?
RubberyParts
June 5th, 2015, 9:42 pm
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@PJSam: Yes, Rat's a male. You can tell by the tail
Merrsharr
June 6th, 2015, 12:08 pm
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@PJSam: Rat's not old, he's just been trough some rough shit.. mainly the rock gym and generally life with Atty
Harangue (Guest)
June 7th, 2015, 8:31 pm
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@PJSam: Rat isn't used to not getting beat up on or totally ignored. He's probably physically and emotionally drained.
varsaigen (Guest)
June 7th, 2015, 11:51 pm
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@PJSam: Oh its probably the ear infection talking.
... Atty should probably get it looked at.
Ninja (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 4:13 pm
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PHOTO BOMB~! WHOOOOOOOO~!
King_Kindred
June 5th, 2015, 4:14 pm
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Art within art. Artception.

Who knew Atty was an artist as well? No wonder he has so much passion and a battle connection to his Pokemon.
Robinson3938
June 5th, 2015, 4:21 pm
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@King_Kindred: Well his artistic ability was touched on quite a bit earlier in the story.
Sagan (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 4:43 pm
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@King_Kindred: Masterly sarcasm, sir
ace229 (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 10:01 pm
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@King_Kindred: not inception, recursion.
Recursion makes sense, inception doesnt.
(Guest) (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 4:15 pm
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Water Pokemon just love ruining DT's day, don't they?
Koranos (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 5:21 pm
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Well also, in regards to the big bed, it IS a fancy cruise ship, maybe all the beds are luxury large sized. I mean who wouldn't want a nice huge bed to snuggle into on such a trip.
Hero of Comedy
June 5th, 2015, 5:26 pm
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I can just imagine Atty having a "Holy S#!$" reaction to Magikarp's evolution.
Leafy (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 5:56 pm
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@Hero of Comedy: ROTFLMAO OMG that is the best image ever! *unending laughter and ends up unable to breathe* XD XD XD

Also, Dragonthing's face in panel 4. XD XD XD XD

Overall, this page and the comments have made my day. :D
Takeshre
June 5th, 2015, 5:57 pm
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Rat's adorably exhausted face. Amazing.

Also, what'll happen when Atty's Pokemon evolve and become massive? Will he still have them follow him around outside their Pokeballs? And the whole prospect of a Charizard having black eyes like H0ly draws on Charmeleon still freaks me out...
Decimatrix5 (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 9:17 pm
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@Takeshre: that image terrifies me.*shudders* But hey, when I see that, I will think of DT's face as Magicarp flopped onto her...why does it feel that that came out wrong? XD
leo_dragon_knight
June 5th, 2015, 6:40 pm
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Rat has been acknowledged that he exists, he is happy.
Guest
June 5th, 2015, 7:21 pm
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Draw me like one of your french pokemon ;)
Jphyper (Guest)
June 5th, 2015, 8:12 pm
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@Guest: When you think about it, they're actually dressed for the part. Rat's the only one wearing anything, and even that's just on his ear.
StrengthHonorLove
June 5th, 2015, 7:48 pm
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lol I Love this page. This would totally be me in the Pokeverse.
Unclever title
June 5th, 2015, 8:07 pm
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And Rat's life transitions to a different kind of suffering... and then snaps right back.
SOABS
June 5th, 2015, 8:14 pm
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awwww I hope rat gets some extra love in this chapter, and oddish too, I always liked oddish :3
qazox
June 5th, 2015, 10:18 pm
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Fish is like: NOTICE ME NOW!!!!
Tijopi11
June 5th, 2015, 10:32 pm
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Artist problems: don't move, don't move!! Crap, do you think you can return back into that exact position again? No, that's a smidge different, it'll ruin everything!
Lyathali (Guest)
June 6th, 2015, 12:08 am
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and once again, Karp makes everyone hate it
disastermaster
June 6th, 2015, 12:13 am
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Just don't kick it Atty! If I remember correctly... wasn't there a magicarp on the M.S. Anne in the Pokemon anime too?
And it turned out very well for everyone!
Artufex
June 6th, 2015, 12:25 am
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That alt text is so relatable...
MoogleSam
June 6th, 2015, 4:35 am
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@RubberyParts

Actually Holy has stated that the Pikachu tails would all look the same regardless of gender in this comic - but yes Rat is male as Holy has called him such in comments.
SoraIndigo
June 6th, 2015, 5:51 am
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drawing pokemon. this is already being set up to the boat sinking either the feraligatr guy does it or fish evolves and he wrecks the ship
someone (Guest)
June 6th, 2015, 7:38 am
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Atty grew a biker stache in that third panel. I know it's an open mouth but I can't not see it as a stache.
RandomInternetStranger (Guest)
June 6th, 2015, 11:12 am
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You know, h0ly, you are quite skilled at what you do. In fact, I completely forgot this was even technically fan fiction.
yaoi4evandnevayuri
June 6th, 2015, 12:56 pm
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Wait, he's tall? How tall is he? I imagined him to be like 5"9 or something. xD
interspark
June 6th, 2015, 12:58 pm
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Loving those glasses.
Guest
June 6th, 2015, 7:24 pm
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A thought just occurred to me.

It was the SS Anne Episode in which James's/Kojiro's Magicarp Evolved to Gyrados...

hmm....
birb jesus (Guest)
June 7th, 2015, 3:00 am
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@Guest: oh my god

has Atty secretly been James all along
Takeshre
June 8th, 2015, 10:31 am
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And Make it Double! @birb jesus: Yes, this is the story of how a young man goes off on a Pokemon adventure, joins Team Rocket, dyes his hair purple, shaves his Naruto sideburns, changes his name to James, and starts using feminine mannerisms, all so he can go back in time to when Ash was still alive to steal his Pikachu because Rat is obviously defective. Can't even sit still for a drawing!
Broktus (Guest)
June 8th, 2015, 12:00 pm
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@Takeshre: I'm... just... not going to point out the flaws in that. Have fun with that.
sacridshadow (Guest)
June 7th, 2015, 3:04 am
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It's kind of sad, really. Technology has gotten us so used to instant results, that we forget how to be patient. It used to be that if a family wanted a portrait, it'd take hours. Then we got cameras, and it took minutes. Now it's just a few seconds. Amazing results, really, but I always wondered what people at conventions were thinking when they asked artists to draw them.
TheGreenOne
June 7th, 2015, 6:03 am
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I really hope Rat gets a good ending someday, he/she's such a good pokemon...
Snow7L
June 8th, 2015, 3:00 pm
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Panel 4--that is definitely a "notice me" face. XD
OMG. (Guest)
June 26th, 2015, 1:00 am
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ATTY IS HAWT WITH GLASSES.