Chapter 10 Page 22

July 3rd, 2015, 4:30 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
July 3rd, 2015, 4:27 pm
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Don't you just hate when chicks do that.

See y'all soon.
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Z (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 4:32 pm
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Covarr
July 3rd, 2015, 4:41 pm
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Disappearing like that? She just went full Zubatman.
Z (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 4:43 pm
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How do The Vent Siblings feel about having Atti on their team?
heliumsquid
July 3rd, 2015, 5:25 pm
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Just like Batman.
EncrE (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 6:00 pm
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Atty do look a bit like a young Jim Gordon.
Flare (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 6:18 pm
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It suddenly occurs to me that Estelle is likely around Atty's age. I never put that together in the earlier chapters.

It ALSO now occurs to me that she's going to be the last gym leader, much like Giovanni was, and that's why she's warning him about it right now.

I like this.
sacridshadow (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 6:37 pm
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@Flare: That makes a lot of sense, since I doubt Atty will go around fighting Team Rocket, even if he weren't a member.
beru (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 6:38 pm
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Move your body close to miIiIiIine!
Ninja (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 6:55 pm
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SHE USED TELEPORT~! SHE HAS A DAMN ABRA.
Zandra
July 3rd, 2015, 8:49 pm
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She reminds me of my dad!

The way she disappears without a trace...
Guest (Guest)
July 3rd, 2015, 8:54 pm
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@Zandra: I laughed perhaps a little too hard.
qazox
July 3rd, 2015, 10:04 pm
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Did Atty just imagine her??? ;)
DankMemeLord (Guest)
July 4th, 2015, 1:37 am
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@qazox: I don't think so. Kahn saw her too, remember?
Bumber (Guest)
July 4th, 2015, 5:25 am
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@qazox:
Shitty twist ending: Atty was dead the entire time. Kahn never saved him from the cliff and is tormented by the guilt.
RazorD9
July 4th, 2015, 1:40 am
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All the time. Like I take them out to a nice restaurant, they go to the ladies room, and I wait over an hour, and it turns out they escaped. Didn't see her come out of the bathroom, there are no windows in the bathrooms, and tunneling would take more than an hour to do.
Guest
July 4th, 2015, 11:58 pm
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@RazorD9: She probably had another set of clothes somewhere. Females are, usually, known to have hordes of stuff, nearly unimaginable how they keep it all, in their purses. -- They are the masters in the art of disguises.
Eliza (Guest)
July 5th, 2015, 4:25 pm
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@Guest: It's because our purses are actually interdimensional portals that contain a miniature pocket dimension in which we have access to any item of our choosing.
Broktus (Guest)
July 6th, 2015, 11:17 am
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@Eliza: So... all females are Time Lords?
Guest
July 4th, 2015, 9:09 am
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Wait is she a gym leader? was that foreshadowing.
disastermaster
July 4th, 2015, 12:19 pm
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Hold on a sec what was the official job of the rocketboss in the original again...?
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
July 4th, 2015, 1:46 pm
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Just once! Just once I'd like to see exactly what they look like when they skedaddle like that!
interspark
July 4th, 2015, 2:21 pm
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Yeah alright, Batman.
chaos-of-vinnie
July 5th, 2015, 12:59 pm
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Lol she Batman'd outta there.

She also clearly knows or is suspicious of what he's up to.
Magicanus (Guest)
July 5th, 2015, 4:46 pm
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@Eliza: I f***ing knew it. XD
Mr. Henry
July 7th, 2015, 3:41 pm
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lol, she Batman-ed on him! XD