Chapter 12 Page 73

April 17th, 2017, 4:59 pm
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April 10th, 2017, 4:55 pm
I think Allie and Abel forgot that there's another story with different characters going on. Who's invading who here.

See y'all soon.
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April 11th, 2017, 4:45 pm
Atty's face at the bottom. Perfect I can read and feel exactly what he's thinking XD he also resembles what I imagine Squall looks like under that never ending face palm he seems to love.
Yumi (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 5:04 pm
Not Really Helpful? George...I'm not sure that's really going to help since that means you were in his house...
April 17th, 2017, 5:07 pm
@Yumi: OH SHIT did not think about that when i first looked at this
FarceDawn (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 6:22 pm
@Yumi: You know how some say the truth will set you free. Well somehow George told the truth but that is not going to explain why a 14 year old girl was in Abel's house touching his stuff in the first place :/ (unless Allie mistakes George for a guy)¯\_(ツ)_/¯.
RatFan3991 (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 6:15 pm
When George stepped out there I was immediately afraid for her well-being. She's going to get hurt and I really can't imagine this ending smoothly.
April 17th, 2017, 6:56 pm
Well this is getting interesting
April 17th, 2017, 7:09 pm
"You.. You! You left me for a little girl!?!"

That's totally what's going to happen next, ain't it? Because there's no way that any conflict in Mokepon will ever be resolved in a peaceful, rational, and logical fashion, especially when the potential for misunderstanding is so explosively rich.
April 17th, 2017, 8:15 pm
@Evilbob_dA: Especially since it's all in the wording. "I took it!! It was on his table and I took it" suggests that she did NOT break-and-enter and did NOT steal it... that Abel was willing to consort with a little girl (instead of his spurned lover) and invite her to his house (where she took something).

A more appropriate phrase to deflect blame from Abel (as well as be fully honest) should really have been "I stole it!! I broke into his house and stole it!" lol
Graf Saecula (Guest)
April 18th, 2017, 4:55 am
Oh, I don't think Allie will assume that George's Abel's secret lover. She'll believe George no questions asked, and the same thing will apply to Abel himself... except that this won't be a good thing at all.

After all, Abel doesn't just miss a ticket, he misses an Eevee too. Looks like he's going to believe that George's guilty of its disappearance as well, and Allie will confirm it - she saw with her own eyes that it was GEORGE who threw the pokéball containing the Eevee into the gym battle.

End result: George is now wanted for being part of the criminal syndicate referred to as "Team Rocket". Wonder how she'll deal with THAT.

At least that's my theory.
thegreatcomment (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 8:47 pm
if only atty's parental instincts weren't kicking in he'd have taken this opportunity to make like a roman general and leg it
April 18th, 2017, 12:00 am
@thegreatcomment: Nice! I'll need to remember that one.
April 17th, 2017, 9:36 pm
Now Atty is free of George!!! Lol
Dr Meme (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 11:00 pm
To be fair this is a world where kids can go into private rooms on a cruise ship and dig through people's belongings to just take their stuff.
Amphigouris (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 11:45 pm
Inb4 Allie accuses Abel of having a 14-year old girl as one of his other side chicks.
Visitor (Guest)
April 17th, 2017, 11:59 pm
Atty's face says it all.

Alas, poor George, may flights of angels sing thee to thy rest.
Kite (Guest)
April 18th, 2017, 12:38 am
Damn it... I reached the end. Now what do I do with my life?

On a more serious note, will the higher eeveelutions appear? We've only seen the Gen 1 ones so far. ...Not that I think Atty actually could. There's no Glaceon or Leafeon evolution areas in Kanto, and the other three? Good luck... As much as I love Sylveon, and as much as it would be hilarious if Atty got one, I just really can't see it happening.
April 18th, 2017, 3:02 am
Reply I the only one who is actually proud of George for claiming responsibility for her actions?

It's more than Atty has ever done, that's for sure.
Bram (Guest)
April 18th, 2017, 3:10 am
I like that there are stories going on between characters other than our main ones. It gives the impression of a larger world, one that doesn't just stop when the main characters aren't paying attention. A+
April 18th, 2017, 9:49 am
Atty gonna talk. He will save abel.
April 18th, 2017, 3:16 pm
Abel looks like he cant tell if she is going to die of if both of them are going to die
hey (Guest)
April 18th, 2017, 3:24 pm
oh boi I get the feeling that George will get off easy. They'll forgive her but then realize that Atty stole the Eevee and since he didn't own up to it he's the REAL bad guy here.
Ultimate the Hedgehog
April 18th, 2017, 5:46 pm
And like that Atticus just feels like shit.
April 19th, 2017, 12:59 am
@Ultimate the Hedgehog: lol bout time
April 18th, 2017, 7:08 pm
Atty's face has to become a meme lol.
April 18th, 2017, 7:39 pm
I'm proud of George for owning up to it, but also super immensely worried because to Allie there's no indication that she and Atty had broken in to take it and weren't just invited over ;____; PLEASE LET GEORGE BE OKAY
April 18th, 2017, 8:17 pm
there goes their chance to get away unseen
April 19th, 2017, 1:04 am
Is Atty thinking that he should do the same about the Eevee? Confess he stole it? ...I mean.. 'took it' xD Or is he thinking 'what a stupid girl!'
Let's see..
Riverfox237 (Guest)
April 19th, 2017, 11:46 am
You're the real hero, George. It takes guts to fess up to something you did wrong, especially when doing so is dangerous 'cause one of those people is an angry lady with electrical powers who was recently trying to kill you.
Riverfox237 (Guest)
April 19th, 2017, 11:47 am
Also if Atty steps out next and offers the eevee back I'm gonna be so unbelievably proud of him, please oh pleeeeeeeeeease let that be what happens.
April 19th, 2017, 4:47 pm
I somehow feel that even if he gave the pokemon back, that he would just tell him to keep it or something. The guy seriously just gives off the air that he's just done with this type of shit and doesn't care about hardly anything anymore.

In short, he's just so burnt out on this whole situation, which in a way would mean that Allie is right about him not knowing how to care anymore.

I actually feel kind of sorry for the poor guy, he didn't mean for any of this to happen, but he's still being yelled at as if everything were his fault. If I were in his position, I would just opt on taking the "fuck everything" stance and shut everyone out, while shutting myself in, so in a way, I see a bit of myself in Abel, a lot more than I'm proud to admit...