Chapter 12 Page 96

July 7th, 2017, 4:59 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
June 30th, 2017, 3:26 pm
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I drew a lot of things on that page before I put the text in.

Well... There we have it for Chapter 12. Moving onto chapter 13 (unlucky for some). I enjoyed this chapter a lot, I think it's been one of my favourites. Thanks for reading, thanks for your comments, and thanks to my patreon supporters. You guys help me keep going. I'm going to be taking a couple of weeks off before the next chapter starts, I look forward to seeing you there! I think this next chapter might be. ... Interesting.

If you enjoyed the chapter, please consider supporting me on Patreon! All support is greatly appreciated.

See y'all soon.
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June 18th, 2018, 1:04 am
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Vapor (Guest)
July 2nd, 2017, 6:21 pm
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Oh shit! Dragonthing! D8 Ruuuun, Atty. Ruuuuun~

Actually, scratch that, heal your other Pokemon first. THEN run. XD
Driftingwolf
July 8th, 2017, 11:49 am
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@Vapor: he did that already so just run
Vapor (Guest)
July 8th, 2017, 3:08 pm
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@Driftingwolf: When? XD He declined going into the Center so he could take a smoke break first, lol. Just like two pages ago.
kurolothgarian
July 10th, 2017, 10:04 pm
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George did it for him.
Cave
July 3rd, 2017, 10:30 am
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oooohhhhh deeearrrr

dun dun DUN
chaos-of-vinnie
July 3rd, 2017, 3:31 pm
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I wonder if they underlined 'one' on purpose to really emphasise the coming on your own XD

Enjoy your break!
Sushi (Guest)
July 7th, 2017, 5:31 pm
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I feel like this is something the Rocket Dude would write. Thad was it ?
Amphigouris (Guest)
July 7th, 2017, 5:34 pm
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Magikarp Salesman is back for another round.
HaikenEdge
July 7th, 2017, 5:37 pm
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It's gonna be that gym leader he got tossed in jail, isn't it...?
mewrose (Guest)
July 7th, 2017, 6:00 pm
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Important question: How close is it to midnight right now? Atty may not have much time to get there.
Broktus (Guest)
July 7th, 2017, 9:44 pm
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Who the hell calls him "Chimney"?
AnonymousBloop (Guest)
July 7th, 2017, 11:01 pm
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@Broktus: Probably the houses he's slept in. XD
Guest
July 8th, 2017, 12:05 am
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@Broktus: Perhaps because he smokes?
Guest
July 8th, 2017, 5:18 am
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@Broktus: I was wondering the same!! Is it supposed to be a clue?
Lone_Garurumon (Guest)
July 8th, 2017, 12:21 am
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Ooooooh DAMN
DT's in trouble!
sonics1030
July 10th, 2017, 7:11 pm
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@Lone_Garurumon: Atty to the rescue!
Guest
July 8th, 2017, 12:39 am
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I'm trying to decide what's making the writing look off. Did you... did you write this with your non-dominant hand?

Perhaps to emulate a certain character with one arm?
someone (Guest)
July 8th, 2017, 5:04 am
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@Guest: the writing is kind of shaky. Like the writer suffers from Parkinson's, or perhaps just drank too much coffee.
IcyPheonix (Guest)
July 8th, 2017, 11:41 pm
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@someone: Or just someone with really bad handwriting.
Kamikazekid (Guest)
July 12th, 2017, 7:11 pm
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@someone: Probably the coffee thing
NatsFan
July 9th, 2017, 6:57 am
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@Guest: The character might also have been deliberately writing poorly/shakily so that it wouldn't match their own handwriting.

I'd rather it be the one-armed character, though!
MilkyTea
July 8th, 2017, 8:42 am
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Well, crap. :(
AyoWolf
July 8th, 2017, 8:46 am
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I loved the chapter and sooo looking forward to the next one!
qazox
July 8th, 2017, 9:28 am
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Thad n Trixie have DT.....
VelvetRainbow
July 8th, 2017, 9:58 am
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HOSTAGE SITUATION
GEST (Guest)
July 9th, 2017, 3:25 am
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Oops Low-key read that as "Diglett's Café" and thought that was pretty neat.
owlerhouse (Guest)
July 9th, 2017, 3:36 am
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@GEST: diglett's covfefe
Cunning (Guest)
July 9th, 2017, 7:08 pm
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Oh no! Someone has kidnapped Fish!
ChaosSorceror_Davidicus
July 10th, 2017, 2:54 pm
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I feel like this page lends itself to a Caption Contest.
Alpha (Guest)
July 10th, 2017, 3:25 pm
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Jokes on you, he doesn't HAVE any friends!
kurolothgarian
July 10th, 2017, 10:03 pm
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Does this mean Atticus will have to deal with the Snorlax in front of the cave? Also, since this world is a twisted version of the games (primarily), and others have taken this path before, where do all the Snorlax come from? Are they Flown in by a Pidgeot, or get Teleported by an Abra? If so, is it done on a whim, or is it a job? 'Hey Mike, looks like the Snorlax is gone again.' 'Abra.' 'Yeah, I know how you feel, but it's a living.' 'Abra.' 'Take your time, we're in no rush. Just remember: Don't call the Snorlax Fat.' 'Kedabra.' '... Where'd you get those sunglass?'
SoulRaider116
July 24th, 2017, 6:36 pm
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@kurolothgarian: Does Mike proceed to reach out and grab ya?
AShinyFemaleEevee
July 11th, 2017, 10:11 am
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NUUUUU DRAGONTHING
JohnnyLumpkins (Guest)
July 15th, 2017, 6:15 pm
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This sounds mighty suspicious *crumples up paper and walks away*
OH SHIT! FISH IS MISSING!
Mr. Man (Guest)
July 23rd, 2017, 3:04 pm
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@Running out of atticus brent pun

Haha!
Oly-RRR
June 14th, 2018, 5:15 pm
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Team Rocket deciding to punish Atty their way after all. D:

I remembered the stolen pokeball and thought it might come out during the battle but I was also thinking - if Atty was scared and wanted to hide his tracks he could have traded it or even left in some nook for a lucky trainer to find (not sure if that counts as animal neglect in pokemon world, it proooobably does) but him feeling guilty explained that. If he gave that pokeball away he would never be able to fix the situation. Lol, everyone calling Atty an asshole and me thinking of a more cynical escape strategy - must be my own fictional assholes rubbing off on me. XD

Abel talking about some pokemon being forgotten for years and not being missed must have given George some food for thought (for me that moment kinda mirrored the conversation Atty and George had during their battle).

AND THEN RAT'S BIG MOMENT!! Some character growth for everyone this chapter. <3