Chapter 13 Page 27

November 17th, 2017, 4:59 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
November 10th, 2017, 4:55 pm
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Originally when I wrote the end of this scene, after Atty offered Bart the cigarette Bart said 'Why not just cut out the middle man and push me off the pier" as he walked off. But as I finished writing the scene (things get planned out of order) I actually realized... No, he wouldn't... After the conversations they've had they kind of... Like each other? I was shocked.

Also I wouldn't feel too bad for him. He did manage to get Atty's Hawaiian shirt.

Ah'll sithee later.
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roacher27
November 17th, 2017, 5:01 pm
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First! Great timing! Love you H0ly!
zaceron
November 17th, 2017, 5:14 pm
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I was almost expecting the rich snob to be kicked of the pier. That's the direction I would have gone^_^
Chickeneverland
November 17th, 2017, 5:14 pm
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he can sell it back to atty
Evilbob_dA
November 17th, 2017, 5:38 pm
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So dark and edggyyyyy
PJSam
November 17th, 2017, 5:50 pm
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All that's missing is Atty kicking a puppy.
RazorD9
November 17th, 2017, 7:18 pm
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@PJSam: Dude, considering that the puppies of the pokeworld can breathe fire, shoot lightning or are made of rock, kicking a puppy is more of a sign of being a badass/dumbass than of being a villain.
PJSam
November 17th, 2017, 8:21 pm
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@RazorD9: I'd fit Atty's character either way.
RazorD9
November 17th, 2017, 9:17 pm
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@PJSam: Huh, true enough.
Zelkova
November 17th, 2017, 6:07 pm
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Not sure how many soccer moms you would get on a Pokemon based web comic but I think if someone would be offended it would be when you had a Pidgey ran over with a lawnmower or when you burn down a forest filled with animals to burn to death. Like I am pretty sure you pass the point where someone who would be offended would even still be reading anyway.

Not sure what a bum kid would do with a cigarette beside smoke it but I would feel he took it because it is literally better than nothing and more importantly to reinforce the mindset of being evil.
Unclever title
November 17th, 2017, 6:41 pm
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Thanks for the advice, strange homeless orphan child.
The_mad_one
November 17th, 2017, 8:41 pm
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People get upset over everything. Or at least claim to be. Don't let their mental weakness be used as power over you or your art.
SoulRaider116
November 17th, 2017, 8:58 pm
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If you're worried about upsetting/offending folks...I think cigarettes should be banned, and this isn't offensive to me. Hope that eases concerns.

I like the "acting like a villain already" quip. It's perfect for the characters, and the act of giving a small child a cigarette.
Notbt5
November 17th, 2017, 11:54 pm
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Giving children cigs... adaquit offer
woolysox123
November 18th, 2017, 6:37 am
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Okay, so he gave the kid a cigarette, but will he really hold his nerve long enough to steal something?
qazox
November 18th, 2017, 9:18 am
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and thus Atty's corruption of the young began in earnest....
Osmostrix (Guest)
November 18th, 2017, 7:07 pm
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This is pretty amazing!
Lone_Garurumon (Guest)
November 20th, 2017, 12:30 am
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Clearly Atty is the greatest of all evils.
Codyislong (Guest)
November 20th, 2017, 7:27 am
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I have a suspicion that this kid is actually like the leader of Team Rocket.
chaos-of-vinnie
November 26th, 2017, 3:53 pm
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Hey if kids are smoking they're giving it to other kids, at least it happens a lot in England anyway.
Zed (Guest)
December 8th, 2017, 4:51 pm
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That last panel just might be my favorite for the whole comic thus far.