Chapter 1 Page 7

October 30th, 2008, 1:36 pm

From the Author

Y'know what... I actually rather like this page. I tried a few things out and they worked. Nice change, huh?
Although I really really do have to start using a ruler. Bahh I hate them so much though...

Atticus you little git. You're so much fun to write. Pleased that I finally drew a picture of him where he looks just how I wanted him to.

Thanks for your support guys I'm glad you're liking the comic so far. Hope I can keep things up, your support drives me to do better *sniff* (God that sounded cornier than it needed to.)

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First comment!

Woah, that shoe.. it's.. it's so good. D:

Did you erase this page for a while? I wanted to comment before but it didn't work.

Anyways, as I was saying, I really like the first panel... and the "eye" panel as well. You're definitely improving since More Than Blood.

Oh yeah... and Atti's sweater is love.

Zomiter: Heh thanks. I don't often do foot shots so I wanted to do a good job.

Sientjuhna: Yeah I'd set it to update but for some reason it came up earlier than it was supposed to... so then i deleted it... leading to awkwardness lol.

Ahhh you think I've improved? I'm so happy, that's what its all about.

Thanks for commenting!

omg, those shoes aren't appropriate for a pokemon journey!!! shame on u, atticus' mom!!!
lol he's so easily manipulated :)

UH-.......OH....

D; You're inking kicks ass

*cries cause mine doesn't*

Anywho! X3 Yey!

That is indeed one damn good shoe oAo

.:Animetal:. : Ah that would be nice... I'd like to think so someday, maybe, but with something that wasn't a fancomic.

Phantom_aura: He wears them all the time so they're pretty worn but clean (what with not being a big walker). And yes... easily manipulated.

*Suki*: Dun dun DUNNNNNN

LemurKat: Thanks a lot XD I liked doing the inking like this. I'll be doing it more.

xStarrii: For some reason I always had a clear idea of what Atty's shoes would look like...

Thanks for commenting!

Good Job I found this comic through a link from a forum, and I must say I'm pretty pleased with what you have so far. I never thought I'd actually enjoy a Pokemon webcomic, but here I am. Keep up the good work.

Pokemon Battle, Ready, GO! Is it already time for a manly fight with nothing but pride and pokemon on the line?

Guest: Oh really? Is that the link I left in the smackjeeves forum?

Hah I'm real pleased you like my work. I'll try keep it up.

Dynamic Blaze: Ahhh of course! Is there any other kind worth speaking of?

Thanks for commenting~

OMG! The art i love it, must steal it for myself. so. much. awesomeness.every. page.
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I feel that the following whatever-it's-called-yes-I-forgot-it's-name will be epic beyond words. And yes, that is a very nice shoe. I kid you not. :)

why WHY WONT HE THROW THAT THING AWAY ALREADY JUST HAVE HIM TOSS IT ON THE GROUND GAAAWD!

AFTER READING i read the comments and to the guy who said to sell it he cant do to copyright rules the internet has bad side too......SHMOKIN BAD!!

Kat/dog: A couple of things.

First of all, I'm not intending on selling this. It's a fancomic. It's for fun. I'm not an idiot. It was just a passing comment.

Second of all, did I ever at one point say 'smoking good'? I've shown baaaad things in my comic. Sue me.

You're welcome to your opinions but I appreciate you not jumping on your moral highground at me. It pisses me off.

Woot I've been paying regular visits to this comic since it started for a while and love it!
Keep up da awesomeness!

And just a comment, but Atticus's foot shot is really great but the shoes look like something prof. Oak would wear. lol.

Lucia: Haha I don't know, Oak probably has a better fashion sense than Atty. Atticus has a habit of dressing badly and like an old person because he thinks it makes him look alternative and subtly cool. When in fact it just makes him look like a kid who dresses as an old person.

Thanks for commenting!

My,my,my, now It's getting intese.

i get it i get it i just get crazy most of the time for anything... like drugs sex and beer ... okey the sex and beer thing thing is okay but drugs are bad kiddies ... i still like your comic anyway! ... cocane is bad XD sorry man its fun to say that DRUGS ARE BAAAAAAAAAD!!! XD

Kaffy: Oh ho, it gets better! ... If, that is, you consider further intensity to be better.

Kat/dog?: Okay. It's cool. It's just y'know repetitively posting more or less the same message without much relevance to the actual comic pages can seem pretty spammy. Don't worry about Atty and his smoking, it's only page seven. Give things time to unfold, for there are other matters at hand at the moment.

no seriously sorry for every thing after saying smokin bad after awhile it gets funny try it just yell at a distance and yell SMOKIN BAD!!! thet'll look and its funny LOLOLOL i tried at a Mc Ds( mc donalds) and it was funny HAHAHA!!!

Wow man, this art is lovely. Unoriginal yet very well done.

lol, his shoes are awesome!! xD

I don't know about anyone else, but I can't get this page to load.

D: No Atticus! Learn from Marty McFly's fouls in the Back to the Future films! <_< take the charmander & go! It only knows like 2 moves now anyway!

Shit my computer won't let me see the page TT_TT

It wasn't just your computer, thanks for the heads up =) fixed it.

The detail in your art is amazing. The backgrounds look very solid somehow, in a good way :]

missing page again

Light Yagami was reincarnated as a pokemon trainer...

You're welcome. Pretty nice page.

Aw, I loaded this page on all three of my web browsers, and not a one could load the image! Do you think you could re-upload it?

Lose! Wow, Atticus is kinda lazy, huh? Just gives up. Oh No He Didn't. Did that guy just say that that Atticus will lose? That's a fight on my block.
Atticus sure is a git. By the way, this comic is just plain awesome. You have my undying support! It's beautifully drawn, its funny, and it has a character that's actually *interesting*! Really, I've gotten ridiculously attached the guy. Keep up the awesomeness!

whisker line things So, I decided to re-read the series since it's been a while and I wanted to brush up on it. Then I realized something. Atty doesn't have the weird line/whisker/beard/sideburns/naruto/yougetthepicture thingies on his face!!!

oOOOOOOOOOOH daym thems fight'm words!!

I love Brent's shoe in the last panel :)

Okay, yeah, I would punch that guy in the throat and take BOTH pokemon away from him and leave him to rot at that point. I hate it when jackasses use the "Oh, you don't want to do it because you'd lose" or "You're scared to" or any of that bull...maybe he doesn't want to do it because he doesn't want to freakin` do it! I know this guy is supposed to be set up as all nice and kindhearted and all that nonsense, but anyone who'd pull that stupid manipulative crap like that is automatically a bitch-ass punk in need of a beatdown in my book. I'd feed him to my Gyrados.

And he just pushed Atticus over.