Chapter 1 Page 22

February 2nd, 2009, 6:49 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
February 2nd, 2009, 6:54 pm
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Hmm...

Three things.

ONE- Sorry for being late with the update. I haven't been slacking- I spent the most part of the last week on a chaotic trip in London... and by the time I got back when I was intending on updating it took me all this time to try to remember how to draw again. Still working on it.

TWO- I'm a lil dubious about this page. It looks different, I know, thats cuz for the first time in ever I hand inked it. Wonder how obvious that is. Next one should look better- my pens are a lil' rusty.

THREE- Way to make a UK exclusive gag, H0ly! But between Top Gear and wonderful incredible adventures... Well, it's a no brainer. Jeremy Clarkson ftw. If you don't know what Top Gear is, here is everything you need to know. It's a tv show, and its awesome.

So. Yeah.

Hope you like it. Next one coming soon and I intend it to be grand~ ... As I always intend, admittedly.
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Natacia
February 2nd, 2009, 7:32 pm
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Im very happy about this page.
Haha but your your own toughest critic
Because I think this is great.
... I didn't notice the hand inking. =D
I think atticus is so rad. (excuse my outdated slang)
chobi_chi
February 2nd, 2009, 8:16 pm
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Yay update.
I feel for poor Dragonthing,
being swung around like that.
Must be awful.
D=

p.s: I prefer the term Dragonthing.
lol
xkrazydog
February 2nd, 2009, 8:18 pm
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Oh god, Atty looks SO great in the third panel. I kid you not. His expriession is priceless lol.
and Kahn looks so cute XD. Evil bastard =|.
Seedless-acorn
February 2nd, 2009, 8:32 pm
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...*is one of those people who would rather be watching Top Gear* xD
Hyde_n_Psyc
February 2nd, 2009, 8:39 pm
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Y'know what you need to do? You need to put up an Extras section with those sexy Oak icons. :D I LOVED the one where he's sideways.
Dune (Guest)
February 2nd, 2009, 9:17 pm
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*swoons for you* To "kat/dog?": *facesmack* Oops. I didn't even know you responded to my review. I normally only pay attention to important things like the artist and the artwork. And I'm not abusing anyone--Abuse is not the threat to abuse, it's the consistently bad grammar, lack of punctuation, and the overabundance of capslock. ;) Anyway, I say -relax- dude. There's no need to get worked up over little old me. ...Huh. Now THIS is a late comeback.

Anyway, I'm starting to think that Kahn (that IS where the 'h' goes, right...? o.o) has some pretty thick skin--he's got the patience of a saint! If Atticus wasn't so awesome, Kahn'd be my favorite character. Dragonthing is a bit odd in the first panel, but its expression in the second is somewhere adorable in the saddest way (it's the squiggly mouth, definitely). I'd squee if I were able to.

And DT in the last panel? Having Atticus yank him by the tail, you're/he's so terrible and I love it! XD The poor thing, and I can't stop laughing at it! Seriously, Dragonthing is TOTALLY going to be the toughest Pokemon on the block... if it survives.

...Abuse is good for character?

Much <3, h0ly!!
venion
February 2nd, 2009, 9:32 pm
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Top Gear? What, was Buzzcocks not on?
BK_1/VGKid
February 2nd, 2009, 11:36 pm
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DragonThing is scared of Attic so bad. Just look at its face XD TOp Gear yeah whatever it is i'd watch it too
GothicVampireGirl
February 3rd, 2009, 12:32 am
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TOP GEAR FTW
I mean COME ON
HAMMOND PEOPLE.
HAMMOND <3
and Clarkson making me laugh all the time with his idiocy >_>
Amaranth
February 3rd, 2009, 12:59 am
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Just thought I should pop in, say hello, and shower you with praise. This comic is awesome. Srsly. Also, I now want to start up a new Pokemon game, use Charmander as my starter, and name it Dragonthing.
Purple$ubstance
February 3rd, 2009, 2:45 am
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plot?? noooo he accepted dragon thing
you gave the story a plot
lame, every stories has one of those

x]
good job
and goodnight
*passes out*
Snix
February 3rd, 2009, 3:20 am
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Pretty sure too many people in this world know about Top Gear - it's apretty damn awesome show
allyoucaneater
February 3rd, 2009, 4:49 am
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lol Top Gear! I love that show~! I rather be watching Top Gear too ;w;
SirDerangedReindeer
February 3rd, 2009, 5:54 am
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xD Lol. I love Top Gear. The Australian version was lame though...

It's just not good without Jeremy Clarkson, Hammond and James May...
Bobcheese400
February 3rd, 2009, 11:44 am
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Oh Top Gear, everyone loves you.
Naya
February 3rd, 2009, 12:27 pm
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Hes so abusive to that sweet charmander! D:
TheWhiteWabbit92
February 3rd, 2009, 1:07 pm
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TOP GEAR GAG = ULTIMATE WIN. :3
zomiter
February 3rd, 2009, 2:38 pm
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Not UK exclusive.
It's here in Australia too. :D The UK version, that is.
The Australian version sucks.
fishuu
February 3rd, 2009, 3:49 pm
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Atticus clearly has his priorities all straightened out XDD And little dragon thing blob ;___;

I really like how you ink <3
Mitani
February 3rd, 2009, 5:09 pm
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hehe topgear plugs and tail tugging trainers ^^
Meepa (Guest)
February 3rd, 2009, 6:46 pm
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I don't live in the UK, but let it be known that NO tv show is exclusive when you've got the internet and fleets of internet pirates! (yaaarr)

When you've got Atticus, who needs pokemon? Dragon thing is an accessory. Atticus can beat pokemon up all by himself! I mean, he's already ready to beat *his* from the looks of it.

Atticus FTW!
xx_dark_desires_xx
February 3rd, 2009, 9:41 pm
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Amazing I Love Top Gear!!!! It's amazing! I knind of feel sorry for Charmander in this page though...that's gotta hurt! =3
Kat/dog?
February 4th, 2009, 5:53 pm
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WHY in such mood??? just trying to be funny (yes im banned from furoms) which means i cant privete message! I'd thought something else would happen!
H0lyhandgrenade
February 4th, 2009, 6:00 pm
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I deleted your other comments Kat/dog. Why? Because to be blunt I'm in an unamusing mood and you're pissing me off.

On a different note, thanks for commenting guys. I really appreciate it. I'm thinking I'll try doing my replies on the following pages for a while.
onecoolc
February 5th, 2009, 3:26 am
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Does it make me a terrible person because I giggled at Dragonthing in the last panel? xD <3
Pikaseel
February 6th, 2009, 10:07 am
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:( I feel bad for the poor Charmander. Or, I guess, Dragonthing XD
Kat/dog?
February 6th, 2009, 7:01 pm
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HEY H0ly! sorry i edited! But now that i remember what i was going to say!Why in such mood???
Nabi
March 22nd, 2009, 3:35 pm
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If I hadn't read the comments I probably wouldn't have noticed the change. xD'

Also- Top Gear is win. I really want to watch it now. Just to watch some caravans being smashed or or Clarkson getting a speeding ticket on the french motorway or something.
ColonelStudmuffin (Guest)
May 26th, 2009, 2:22 am
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Ah... I watched Top Gear a few times with my bro. Had to stop because some of the cars were making me drool. -w- *vroom* <3
hedeghog101
July 3rd, 2009, 4:25 pm
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Poor Charmander, it hould sue Atticus for tail pulling! =D
I love Top Gear! I watch it all the time!
langstrumpf89
July 17th, 2009, 10:28 am
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*gaspeth* Top Gear! It's on here, in the Netherlands, every Friday evening. It rocks ^^ and of course, also on BBC on Sunday =3

Anyway, started reading your comic today, and I absolutely adore it already. Keep up the good work!
Yuoaman
December 28th, 2009, 6:00 am
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You spelled 'Opportunity' wrong... Otherwise, the comic is just fantastic. :D
DramaticHorses
January 25th, 2010, 1:48 am
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TOP GEAR.

I LOVE YOU.

O hai, I'm not a creeper at all. Pfft, fool.

Fave tele show, for sure. And I live in Oregon. Which is i the western US. *is shot* No one actually cares about Oregon, so whatevar. *shot again*


And I must say, I love this take on Pokemon. It's been forever since I've seen something original with them. And your art style is refreshingly wonderful.
Oasaka45656
March 5th, 2010, 4:03 am
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NO WAY!!!!!!!! Richard hammond FTW~!!!!!!!! ^^

Anyhoo: I IS LOVE YOUR ART~!!!!!! ^^
xseleon
March 6th, 2010, 8:53 pm
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Top Gear is awesome!
salthegemini
March 30th, 2010, 7:44 pm
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Richard is definately where its at! Then Jeremy...
whitewillow
May 5th, 2010, 8:45 pm
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Richard, then James, then Jeremy. Always.;-)
constant_boredom
May 27th, 2010, 6:11 pm
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HOMGZ TOP GEAR REFERENCE!

and I am in fucking love with this story (pardon mine swearing =D I'm hyper from laughing so much xD) Like borderline psychotic obsession...PURE AWESOMENESS!
drew6464
June 27th, 2010, 6:16 pm
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Where'd the Pokeball go?
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 2:55 pm
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Good job.
Teapotofdoom
December 2nd, 2010, 6:41 pm
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I love Top Gear. :) Richard Hammond is my favorite. :)
Celtia (Guest)
December 18th, 2010, 12:47 am
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Go Top Gear! I live in Australia, and Top Gear's pretty big here, so it's far from UK exclusive. Some countries in Europe, perhaps most notably the Netherlands, it's also quite popular.

Pity the "Top Gear Australia" made here is...pretty bad.

Anyway...yeah, go Top Gear, go Richard, Jeremy and James. ^^'
Nessa (Guest)
December 28th, 2010, 7:26 am
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TOP GEAR FOR THE WIN
kaei
January 2nd, 2011, 9:02 pm
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Hahahahahahaha...
/feels bad for poor Charmander ;u;
Ninth Doctor (Guest)
January 11th, 2011, 11:16 am
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LOVE Top Gear.

But Doctor Who is better.
MurdTuffin
February 19th, 2011, 3:35 pm
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Why do I need a title? What is this I dont even Ha, Top Gear's popular even in Kanto! Amazing xD
fringe friend (Guest)
March 23rd, 2011, 3:02 pm
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top gear NO way!!! a comic that makes references to my favorite show?!?! I am soooooo Happy!
your mockery of pokemon and what would happen if someone didn't really want to go on an adventure is what drew me in, but your top gear reference and main character portrayal will keep me coming back and back.
J>F> (Guest)
April 7th, 2011, 1:03 pm
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OH NO!!! CHARMANdER is experiencing pokemon abuse!!!
DaydreamingDaisy
June 26th, 2011, 1:25 pm
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Top Gear! Oh lord, Kahn goes off on a whole inspiring lecture. They guy's a sadist and a saint. Atticus is abusive! I have a feeling Dragonthingie would rather be with Kahn in that last panel.
This page looks amazing, like always. Never heard of Top Gear, but I'll ask around on it.
Malph (Guest)
July 12th, 2011, 3:13 pm
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Top Gear reference FTW!

I have to empathize with the Aussie. I live in the US, and our Top Gear is basically the UK version without most of the stuff that makes it good. It's mostly used in the event you go into withdrawal in the absence of BBCA.
splashy 48 (Guest)
September 18th, 2011, 12:49 pm
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I lol'd so hard when I saw the way he grabbed dragon thing. I'm glad i decided to check this comic out.
Akito Kaiba
September 24th, 2011, 2:39 am
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AHA. My theory is confirmed!! British!!!
Only a brit would call a boss sweater like that a "jumper"... and Top Gear! Aha!!
Whitespirit
March 1st, 2012, 2:42 pm
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I'm dying so bad to see this page but it won't load for me QAQ
Whitespirit
March 1st, 2012, 2:43 pm
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@Akito Kaiba: lmao! this is so true!
I'm British so I didn't really notice XD
kittycatcupcakes
November 3rd, 2012, 4:11 pm
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hahaha Atty is such a dork "I could be missing my show"
Guest
December 31st, 2012, 12:43 pm
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Dimwit what part of charmander is on fire the tail what part does he grab the tail good thinking there atticus
willky7
September 16th, 2014, 1:54 am
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from the stig yeah, australia gets top gear a year late! but its not exclusive to UK. TG australia never actually made it to our screens. just watch it for the laughs.
jtubbesi
November 16th, 2016, 1:17 pm
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TOP GEAR I just discovered your comic 11-16-2016 and I think I am going to spend all day getting caught up. I miss Top Gear! So far I identify more with Atticus than any official Pokémon hero.