Chapter 1 Page 29

April 3rd, 2009, 10:13 am
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April 3rd, 2009, 10:16 am
Aaaand here it is. Not a lot to say here... Sorry about how slow I've been lately, but despite the amount of work I still have to do I do have some time off! So I shall get as much of this done as I can.

And anyone who's missing the funnies fear not. I'll be back to the gags soon. But remember this is a story based... story.

Oh and sorry to krazeh if I butchered your characters.

Hope you like it guys, be seein' yas again soon.
October 23rd, 2019, 8:33 am
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April 3rd, 2009, 10:21 am
WTF? all i know is that it is a moment of somekind but i dunno what for. fantastic *sarcasim*
April 3rd, 2009, 10:50 am
I love the dramatic lighting on Atticus and the smoke really adds as well. It makes you kinda feel better about the overall creepiness of him creepin' on the whole scene :]
April 3rd, 2009, 11:45 am
Lol, cheers. In his slight defence, the only reason he's spying on them is because the charmander did first.
Meepa (Guest)
April 3rd, 2009, 1:05 pm
Atticus? Expression? What's going on...?! >< Much love, holy!
April 3rd, 2009, 1:14 pm
Atty's feeling LONELY? fffff-
Awesometastic page. ;3; they're so cute together rawr rawr.
April 3rd, 2009, 1:20 pm
Is that a boy or a girl? =w=;; With the braid?
April 3rd, 2009, 2:29 pm
Tis a girl, the chest kinda gives it away
and even H0ly said it ^^
April 3rd, 2009, 2:41 pm
@H0ly: i was actually just kidding but i really didn't get it so thanks for clearing stuff up XD
April 3rd, 2009, 6:13 pm
Haha I love how atticus is wearing his old fashined granny- sweater, but he has a cigarette in his mouth!
That's strikes me as really funny!
But this looks wonderful, and don't worry, I got it. I'd cry too if my big brother was leaving off to start his pokemon adventure.... And I didn't get to go too...
you impress me <3
April 3rd, 2009, 9:14 pm
I really like this page. You have a great sense of timing with the panels <3
April 4th, 2009, 6:10 am
BK_1/VGKid: There's no need to be like that if you don't get it. It'll be made more clear on the next page, but if you must have it explained, Kahn has met his sister. She is not happy for some reason. He is comforting her but does not seem incredibly happy either. Atticus is watching. Atticus does not look happy.


Korrected: Lol, cheers. In his slight defence, the only reason he's spying on them is because the charmander did first.

Meepa: Urrrr I presume you are wondering as to where his standard scowl dissapeared to? It'll be back afore you know it I'm sure XD

krazeh: Heh glad I did it to your liking ^^

LemurKat: Girl... I won't be hurt because I'm aware I need more practice lol. I'll get it right next time.

Mitani: Lol I sure need more practice... It's a bad sign when the only way a girls identifiable is cuz of her boobs.

BK_1/VGKid: It's cool. Sorry. I kinda snapped a bit there, it's my fault anyways if a page dont make sense...

Natacia: Lol glad it amuses you. Yeah I'd be pretty hurt too... Glad you got it ^^

Fishuu: Thanks a lot ^^ I'm glad you like it. I quite like this one too.

Thanks for commenting guys!
April 4th, 2009, 9:42 am
lol XD The shirt does not give it away, it just looks like a fold or bend in the shirt.

@H0ly: XD That's ok, I was just double checking XD
July 7th, 2018, 7:24 pm
@LemurKat: I know this comment is really old, but, besides that ridge, the creases also show it's a girl. The reason being that a boy's shirt wouldn't crease because his chest is flat.
April 6th, 2009, 1:20 pm
At first it looked like it came a light up in that head of his, whats up? *w* crying girly?
Dark Dragon X80
April 8th, 2009, 4:29 pm
13 days and that's all...
also, I think that moment is actaully getting to him o.O
April 9th, 2009, 8:27 pm
...the sibs are adorable.. and ooo.. a spy! LOL

I love the way you set up the panels on this page... makes it so exciting!
April 10th, 2009, 7:38 am
Aww H0ly youre not that bad ^^
If you look at the eyes in the second to last pannel ish you can tell shes a girl there too ^^ hehe
Kitten meat
April 10th, 2009, 12:50 pm
but why is the sister crying? (me again! not spamming this time! only if dune comes! JK )
November 20th, 2009, 8:35 pm
Can't see it
Andrei (Guest)
December 15th, 2009, 6:18 am
colouring AAaaaaaarrgh.
More fantastic colouring (grey sorry) in the bottom of the page. Have you made any tutorials on how to shade and colour you could link me to? What do you use to colour?
AnifeR2 (Guest)
December 21st, 2009, 10:49 pm
hmmm... An Only child...poor atty...
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 3:08 pm
Oh. Khan has a little sister afterall. What he said was not a fib to get a second pokemon. Okay then but he's still a terrible monster that likes making charmander cry alot.
June 26th, 2011, 2:14 pm
Aww! Oh my, this is such a touching scene. Is that his sister? She seems like a nice person, especially how she cares more about hugging her brother than the bulbasaur. Sniff. So sweet. Atty is just watching them, like a creeper. He actually looks a little epic with the smoke. Poor guy, is he an only child?
Love the page, and I really liked the sentimentality you added in this page. Lovely!