Chapter 1 Page 36

June 10th, 2009, 8:47 am

From the Author

END OF THE FIRST CHAPTER YAAYYY!! ... Yikes this page took longer to do than you'd think... Time flies when you're drawing bushes. Actually it doesn't. It drags by with excruciating pain, you would not believe. I never want to shade a bush again. But sadly we don't always get what we want...

I figured there was a cheesy end to the first episode... Couldn't have prepared myself for exactly quite how cheesy when I rechecked it out.

Phew... Hope you like it guys! And I'll be seeing you with the second chapter, where things really start to get rolling... real soon. I can't wait.

Slightly late, but here comes the replies people. Hold onto your hats.

Uchoha: *Looked back at the episode again* Doh I should have put it more to the left under the picture... Shoot... I wonder if anybody will notice.

Rokka_jilla: I'm looking forward to the next chapter too XD I plan things pretty loosely but from what I can see I think it's gunna be fun.

Yoowl: Thanks =D It's more work but I'm not doing this comic to halfass on effort.

Chaosmark101: XD; ... I appreciate it but I doubt I am. There's some real awesome talent on this site. But thankyou very much nonetheless.

KenTexan: Just when you thought it was safe to fall unconscious.

HaruBaru: *punches air* Making people laugh is win.

Blue Tomoshibi: We know you did it Kahn. With your mind.

Chaos: I did wonder if people would notice XD

Vosailyn: I sure hope so o3o I will do my best to ensure it is.

ApaFox: Charmeleon Wartortle Mewtwo Tentacruel Aerodactyl! ... Yeah it's sad that I remember that. What can I say. Pokemon had brainwashing tendencies.

Fishuu: Cheers XD Woot someone appreciates my bushes ;w; They took so long. And I thought Oak's lab was boring to draw.

BlackCatz: Thanks =D Let's hope it's a good one.

The Being: D8 Lol no way am I perfect. But cheers XD You flatter me way too much, I'm only one sorry being.

Gracifer: I did want this comic to be a little drop of nostalgia XD... Looking back on something we all enjoyed as kids. And what some people still do enjoy, from the sound of things.

Three-legged-cow: Arise D8 You shouldn't bow to me. And when you're a three legged cow I would think it would be best to not tempt gravity.

u_fido_u: Thanks XD Man you guys are being kind to me here. I'm gunna have to keep at doing what I'm doing.

Pat15: Ohohoho it can only get better.

NeonCarrot: Glad you like =D I'll get on it when I can.

Natacia: Heheh XD I tacked on this last ending really quickly. Originally it just kinda ended when Atty was making his resolve (the first shaded page I did), and he didn't throw the pokeball. But I looked at it and thought... This is boring. So I sat and brainstormed until I came up with something most ridiculous. It made me giggle so I knew it must be something kinda stupid and immature so I was kinda unsure but I'm glad I went with it... Oops I'm babbling.

Tezzle: You know it. Stay tuned.

Pat15: o3o I couldn't say as I never watched dragonball. Oh wait I did for a bit, some fight that went on like fifty episodes where everyone increased their power every other five minutes and seemed to die but come back every four... Yeah... Either ways I'm sure Dragonball didn't have a pokerap.

KittyCHOMP: We all like a lil' drop of nostalgia now and again. Amd thankyou very much ^^

Contego: We got a rattata instead, what more could you want.

BK_1/VGKid: Cheers XD I hoped it would be funny. I didn't know if it would be. I'm glad you found it so.

Mr Aids: HA you're right looking at it again it really does XD cheers dude your comments always make me laugh.

ChibiC16: Sweet =D Thanks a lot.

LemurKat: Oops... I claim no responsibility.

Marzipan: Although it has made me realize that I do like to end my chapters with people unconscious... First Bart now Atty. Poor boys.

Sega-tendo-com2.0: Lol it was your will that made it happen my friend.

Bigbangboy: Sorry dude, i totally appreciate the sentiment but for some reason ur long comment was really screwing up how the page worked XD Thanks all the same though.

Meepa: Glad you like =D Glad the time paid off.

Ichipowa: Oohoohoo time will tell. A little trouble is welcomed in my stories also.

Oh, and just so you know... To anyone who's still reading this (well done if so, btw) I've got a kinda big project I need to work on this week. A three page comic, gotta get it done fast, so please be patient with me for the next update. I'll try get some lil' thing up to fill the time, m'kay? If you wanna see said comic when it's done, you can check it out here - http://h0lyhandgrenade.deviantart.com/ - along with other miscellaneous works of mine.

Thanks for commenting guys!

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1st comment! lol i miss that to be continued sign

Soooooo good! Can't wait for more!!

I like. >w< . The shading is amazing !

totaly awsome you have incredible drawing skills,the shading is great and I think this is the best drawn comic on smackjeeves from what I have seen! ^_^The comedy is fucking genius! and Awsome!^_^

OH GOD the displaced Rattata is back!

BEST EVER you make me lol so hard. D;
i love this comic <3
faaaave'd.

Hah! His look is like "Shit, I gotta get out of here before they make me pay for that"

The Rattata has returned :)

Oh man this is gonna be interesting xD! <333

o0o Okay everyone, it's time to Pokerap!

KAHN'S FACE. THE NARRATION. XDD You, h0ly, are a genius :3

Also, those bushes look hardcore @__@ I envy your patience with backgrounds!

I love this page... Kahn's face is classic~ so WTF?!

And your shading is awesome *bows down in homage*

Congrats on the chapter end...here's to the next! :D

*sighs*
The way you draw...
It's so....perfect!
So amazing.........
0_o
If only i had half that talent!
0.0

Nostalgic ...Makes me miss my old gameboy.

>8_[

Congrats on finishing chapter one! Can't wait for chapter two. <3

I bow to yur amazingness

You're art is totally amazing.

a knocked out kid, a busted statue, a freaked out kid and a whole lot of pokemon! that pretty much is a regular day in mokepon >.>

Yayz!! I can't wait for the next page. This story is most excellant!

oh gosh i love how you ended it!
haha Way to stick to Traditions!
I am really excited to see what happens next.
Atticus let loose on the world...

I CAN'T WAIT!

(And Atticus Is Still my Favorite!)

Anyone else hear the old Pokemon narrator's voice as they read & the music they'd always play in the background as the episode was ending? STAY TUNED FOR THE POKERAP!

when i try imagining the pokemon narrator saying that i hear a dragon ball z to be continued like thing >.>

I totally heard the narrator's voice. Nostalgiaaaaa.

Beautiful page, like always. Just felt like pointing that out.

shoulda shown officer jenny pulling up in that last panel

lol OMG that litle line from pokemon is so hilarious and so lol

It looks like Charmander is feasting on his corpse.

Mmm, delicious cancer-filled Atticus.

>x< *tries not to laugh*

*implodes* XD

The end of this chapter is the beginning of A LEGEND!!!!

Hahahaha! The statue fell over! I was hoping that would happen!

Bigbangboy: Sorry dude, i totally appreciate the sentiment but for some reason ur long comment was really screwing up how the page worked XD Thanks all the same though.

This page is pretty gorgeous! <3

lmao xD Just like the good old shows xDD to be continued o.o I wonder if they're gonna get in trouble <.<.. I'd book it if I saw that thing fall. xD

*0_0* i luv the way you shade....LOVELY!

Smoking? Yeah, so cool. I know this is not our world etc etc, but portraying a 14 year old -smoking- makes it look you're trying too hard to make the character look cool. Sincerely? It's plain stupid.
Othan than that your work is pretty good and I look foward reading to the rest of it.

Oh my, heh. I'm afraid you may have me mistaken. But it's cool, I've already had this.

At what point have I said smoking is cool. WHERE HAVE I SAID SMOKING IS COOL. How much have I tried to make Atticus look cool, and say, "hey kids, smoke like atty, be cool like atty". He's pissing unconscious after bonking himself out with a pokeball for christsake. HE'S A FOOL. If people WANT to think smoking is cool they are completely welcome to, but Atticus is a smoker. And he is fourteen years old. Sometimes you get fourteen year olds who smoke. Even if that's not very nice. It happens. Deal with it.

I'm posting this here because I hope you see it. Do not call me stupid. And do not make presumptions about me or what I'm planning with my story, especially when your presumptions are based on nothing. It pisses me off.

...Phew. You met me in a bad mood today. But my point remains. Wait and see how things turn out.

Well said H0ly, seems like some people just can't get over the stereotypes. I had a few young smoking characters and I never, not even for a split second, thought that cigs were making them cool/manly/etc D|' And Atti is MOST DEFINETLY not a role model, come on, even I'm smart enough to know that. Oh well, sorry, I just got a little carried away :x

Now on to the real comment~
I adore the way you shade, especially noses *^* And your style is really nice and clear. I also love your sense of humor, the page with the "-dragon...thing... -charmander -whatever" made me laugh out pretty damn loud, and I don't do that very often XD And your version of Oak is just hilarious XDD Oh, and if you're wondering who gave Mokepon that 100000001st fave, that was me :B

oh my god, i didn't see the full page, but just reading the first little sentence, i heard the pokemon announcer guy's voice. XDDD

dang, 36 pages in one chapter! damn good job! *epic high five*

Wow... Just wow... Haken.
Please take a moment to 1. Learn to read, 2. Learn to read parody, 3. Go outside and look at all the misguided foolish teens that smoke 4. Get brain surgery if the above 3 fails.

Cuz if you think Atticus is supposed to be portrayed as cool, then the entertainment and media industry has failed horribly, and you should return to the deep cave of ignorance.

I love that "To Be Continued" logo. It brings back lots of memories.

I'm planning my own pokemon comic, maybe I'll borrow that from you. :B

Oh God, I shouldn't read your stuff when I'm tired. I've been giggling non-stop for a long time now, making these really embarasssing noises xD

Love your draw, it's beautiful<3

why are there two charmanders?

If you're referring to the one sat on the statue, thats Ash's stony charmander that DT was sat next to.

Fantastic chapter. Fantastic episode.

Continued! Oh Atty. Kahn just has this 'why me' expression that I just love. Aww, Dragonthing is so devoted. He actually goes back to help Atticus. Wait, is that a Rattata on the bottom there? Is that the same Rattata from before? Now, that is stalking.
End of the chapter! I commend you on your dedication, this entire chapter has been a wonderful read. I really think that this ending had just the right about of cheese! Lovely, as always.

Haha, so charmanders name is gonna be dragonthing through the whole comic it seems LOL xD

This page is amazing!! *0*

Started this comic again recently. Forgot about the endings. Always read them in the anime narrator's voice.

*Roundabout starts playing*