Chapter 2 Page 1

July 4th, 2009, 11:02 am
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July 4th, 2009, 11:02 am
Start with a Scream Aaaaand here we are with chapter 2. If you're not sure as to what's going on or where he might be, don't worry, Atty doesn't know either. And as he's the one there he has far more reason to worry. He'll be sure to find out in a moment though.

I would be scared waking to that too.

OH and on a side note... If I was to start doing commissions over this summer, might anyone be interested? It's just a thought. I imagine they would be rather cheap.

Lookin forward to whats coming up to write and draw in this chapter... Hope you'll enjoy it too. I'll see you guys again soon.
July 5th, 2009, 5:08 am
I'm coming in earlier with the replies this time so I can do them in smaller doses XD

BlackCatz: Aww you would XD? Thanks, I'll try get it underway. And... Yes my friend. Let it be known by all that BlackCatz achieved first comment... ... Until I post my next page and someone else does that is.

Krazeh: Let's see if I can get Mana right over this next few pages... I-I won't let you down!!

Crusty_Kris: As you do. Or maybe there is no Rattata at all. Maybe it's plaguing him in his mind.

Kinny-Man: In answer to your question; Yes. Yes, that iz sum Rattata.

Korrected: It is rather. It scares me a bit to be honest...

Kirlin: It is XD? Awesome, thankyou.

Three-legged-cow: Your icon serves you well, you naughty minded person you.

P!K: Apparently Atticus didn't think so cute judging by his reaction...

Vanpaia Naito: Yeah it creeps me out and I drew the blasted thing.

Kitten meat: Ahahaha- Well spotted. Either it's a very large and unfortunate spot or it's a mark from where the pokeball smacked him.

PsytheShuppetMaster: It lovz you too =D

Epic Chibi: I wonder if it would have been funnier if I'd sent Mana flying too.

Konstan_tina99: Yeah my lil sis wasn't happy about it she said it scared her. Which is weird. All the monsters and crap I do is fine with her, but stick a few eyelashes on a rat and she's running.

Sai: Me too, actually >w< See, he can be sweet... ... He just has to be unconscious.

BaldDumboRat: Don't look behind you.

You'd buy one? Awesomeness =D I'll put a notice when they're on.

Tophatt: Aye it could... Well, I sure hope so or I'm going to have a lot of dissapointed readers.

Sanatonya: It has to be a nightmare, Atty. It has to be.

Endz Beat: His cheeks are indeed very squishy and pinchable XD Which he doesn't approve of people doing, I'm sure. Mana's a lucky girl.

Yuy_Ren: Yup. Which he's going to be chuffed to hear, I'm sure.

O.K.METRO: I know I would. But then again many a morning I just tend to scream at the top of my voice upon waking up WITHOUT people staring at me... ... Oh, though that's a different story.

Sosenka_va: He has a cute lil' face when he's not scrunching it up in a scowl XD I shall keep supplying the shading.

Blue Tomoshibi: Atty taught him Fly and he's not even evolved yet. Impressive.

ApaFox: Unless... She WANTED that outcome. The fiend.

Ketswordman: Hahaha I'm glad you think so. ... Really. I do worry when I draw her.

Mr Aids: Oh Gods that would have meant someone would have undressed him. Safe to say he would NOT like that. And he would be screaming.

Pat15: Well there's always time yet...

Natacia: It's not so often you might see him so serene. Doesn't take long for him to snap back to his usual self though, making a new aquaintance or not, as we shall soon witness I'm sure. One page, comin' right up.

Gizumimipichu: ...Dammit... And I was sure I'd made her look like a girl this time.

Fishuu: Aww D8 ... ... Maybe we can arrange something >.> Come into this shady back alley and we'll talk.

KittyCHOMP: Y'know what, you're the second person I heard that from. I haven't seen that film in like... years and years, so I can't remember that scene- I hope this isn't too similar.

Gizumimipichu: It's cool XD Manga is generally known to be a place where the line between genders is blurred, I suppose...

Toboe 059: Maybe he's lucky. Maybe this is the last time it'll follow him. Maybe he's not haunted. ... But then I can't help but ask myself the question, wouldn't it be funnier if he was haunted? Time will tell.

Emruki: I showed her a tiny lil' bit in the previous chapter XD But yeah. First impressions aren't one of Atty's strengths. Or any impressions at all, for that matter...

Polly: Somewhat cute lol. I wonder what he'd be most offended by- The 'cute' or the 'somewhat'.

Chan Is No Longer A guest: It has to be the same Rattata. Not many have such well maintained eyelashes. And that is a bulbasaur. And that is his dude's sister. And congratz on your no longer a guest-ness!

Ichipowa: Cheers XD Glad it's going down well. I can never tell with these things until they've gone up.

Ammy_theera: I could do you a commision of the Rattata if you like... ... Nah.

Christen Banks: Don't worry D8 I think not many people have much money... ... Like us people trying to do commisions for it. There should be a lot of cheap stuff XD ... Yeah let's hope Atty didn't have a lil' accident as a result huh.

Fishuu: Oh you beautiful person you, that was just what I was dragging you down the dark alley to ask you XD Psychic link maybe. Or maybe we're both just too damn cheap to pay for art off someone else. Yesss yes I would love to.

Amante-kun: That anyone might notice such a thing makes me pleased. That anyone might also appreciate such a thing makes me very happy XD

NightmareGaze: Thanks so much XD Aww that makes me so happy to hear, I am glad I made your laugh.

LXA: Thankyou very much. As for why I'm just working on a fancomic, it's explained in my profile... I have plenty of original stories but I don't want to waste them as a piddly lil' webcomic at a time when I don't think I'm as good as I need to be to do them credit. So I'll continue on this aside from my serious works where I can just hone my skills and have fun.

And despite it being a fancomic I hope you find it to be a somewhat original take as it's told in my own style with my own characters.

Vampirecheetah: He's only human afterall.

Subterfuge: Ha D= A video of me drawing? What an unsual request XD I doubt anyone else would be interested... My drawing process is terribly dull I'm sure. Oh but fanartz D8 You are too kind thankyou very much =D *excited*

Antilocapridae: Have a nice trip~

Liros Noir: Haha, Jigglypuff style. Shame... She could have got away with that afore poking him and he'd never know. He'd look so good with a curly moustache.

ShayneZee: Will do =D Don't worry, things can't be bad for DT ALL the time... ... Surely...

ZengQunAn: Hmm, you mean Atty and the girl? We shall seeee...

Metalicar67: You think YOU got it bad D8 I had to sit shading the dern thing whilst it leered up at me. That things gunna be etched into my brain.

Irrisorie: Hah XD Thanks. I'm still having fun so far so there's not much worry of me quitting yet.

Korin the Blue Fox who is Being Lazy: Cheers, thanks for the heads up. I'll go fix that.

Thanks for commenting guys!
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July 4th, 2009, 11:04 am
Awesome page ~ lol ~ I would do the same if I had so many eyes *staring* at meeee ~ and I love that panel too...they're adorable!

Yeah, I'd buy a commission from you *huggles you*

Edit: *jitters* I'm first comment?! This is weird... oh the honor...I don't deserve it!
July 4th, 2009, 11:10 am
Kyahhhh This page is greattt XD. Atticus looks so cute when he's knocked out. <3 Manaaaaaaa
July 4th, 2009, 11:11 am
wow, they brought the ratata in...and they're all staring at him.
July 4th, 2009, 11:15 am
O¬O . . . Iz dat sum Rattata???
July 4th, 2009, 11:19 am
Lol that is definitely the girliest/happiest rattata ever. Love the fourth panel :D
July 4th, 2009, 11:21 am
Hahahah xDD funny page :3
July 4th, 2009, 11:22 am
And Kahn is under the covers... >:3
Kitten meat
July 4th, 2009, 11:42 am
whats on his head?
Epic Chibi
July 4th, 2009, 12:36 pm
and the pokemon go flying xDD
July 4th, 2009, 1:03 pm
Haha, awwww, I kinda wanna cuddle sleepy!Atticus. XD
July 4th, 2009, 1:14 pm
I would totally buy a commission D:

And that rattata... I'd be terrified if I woke up to that thing staring at me T ^T
July 4th, 2009, 1:46 pm
Oh, it's Khan's sister!
.... this could get interesting...
July 4th, 2009, 3:20 pm
OHMIGOD LIZARD, UGLY GIRL, RAT, AND DINOSAUR IN MY FACE @_@!!!!! idk it came to mind *favs comic*
Endz Beat
July 4th, 2009, 4:38 pm
Atticus has such squishy and soft-looking cheeks *o* -wants to pinch cheeks-
July 4th, 2009, 5:07 pm
lol, he's at kahn's house? xD
July 4th, 2009, 7:12 pm
I think I'd scream, too. XD
July 4th, 2009, 8:40 pm
oh gawd, Atty is so cute when he sleeps C:
can't get enough of your shading >u<
Blue Tomoshibi
July 4th, 2009, 8:47 pm
Lol, Dragonthing gets sent flying
July 4th, 2009, 9:02 pm
Let that be a warning, don't poke the sleeping.
July 4th, 2009, 9:49 pm
Mana is hot. I wouldn't mind waking up to that.
Mr Aids
July 4th, 2009, 9:54 pm
I was half expecting Atticus to be in pajamas.

July 4th, 2009, 10:13 pm
i was expecting that Atticus would wake up and be arrested for public destruction or something while his "rival since birth" ran away honestly >.>
July 4th, 2009, 10:43 pm
Oh wow! this page is really pretty!
Atticus is cute when he sleeps!
And I see we're about to meet a new character =]
bring on the next page!
July 5th, 2009, 12:13 am
At least we know that the Rattata is a girl. I like your Bulbasuar. Who is that cute boy? (Must know!) His little brother? ^_^
July 5th, 2009, 12:53 am
I would scream at Rattata's face too :D

I don't have paypal or any cash, but I would commission you if I did :(
July 5th, 2009, 2:17 am
I gotta say, that Rattata is a bit freaky.

Also, I gotta say, the first thing that came to mind is that scene from Back to the Future. With Marty's mom. Is Khan's sister gonna start inching towards him, eyelashes a-flutter now?
July 5th, 2009, 6:45 am
She's a girl?! Opps, my bad. *heh heh* Well, she would make a cute boy! ^^
July 5th, 2009, 9:52 pm
i love this! *favs* lol, evrywhere Att goes tht ratta is around..and id wake up scream'n 2 if so many pplz were stare'n at me lol
July 5th, 2009, 10:14 pm
Is that a new character? :'D LOL, screaming in her face... Atticus just doesn't make very good first impressions on people, does he?
Polly (Guest)
July 5th, 2009, 10:49 pm
Atty sleeping face is somewhat cute :3
Rattata is win XD
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
July 5th, 2009, 11:01 pm
Oh is it that one dudes sister? XD
LMAO WTF ATTICUS...I love him in the last panel.
July 6th, 2009, 12:16 am
July 6th, 2009, 1:48 am
i'd want a commission.

i love that rattata
but it would scare me too. XD
Christen Banks
July 6th, 2009, 3:10 pm
Heck yes I would be intrested in buying a commission from you. But it would have to be um, not expensive. :] *hides ashamedly*
Also, probably the scareist thing to wake up to, a large purple rat with buck teeth. I would probably wet myself in fear.
July 6th, 2009, 8:44 pm
Ffft, oh baby, I hope you've got the goods XD

Actually, I was wondering ... if you're not too busy sometime, would you care to do an art trade? :3

Edit: Yesss we are so amazing like that. I've sent you a dA note about it :)
July 6th, 2009, 10:38 pm
I love the mark that's still there from when the pokeball struck him in the face
July 6th, 2009, 10:47 pm
I love your comic, its funny and makes me laugh. ^^

This would have to be my favorite page so far, because it immediately made my laugh. ^^
July 7th, 2009, 2:34 pm
Amazing Artwork. You've got amazing Artwork and drawing. Its just that, Manga on here, its not original, at all. 99% of the comics on here are very similar. I'd recommend with your artistic skills, to think of a more original comic.
July 7th, 2009, 3:58 pm
Ratata with eyelashes right in your face...yeah, I'd scream too.
July 8th, 2009, 2:05 pm
pfff lol omg pokemon *nostalgia*

your art makes me happy *u* i shall now proceed to read from the beginning :)
Liros Noir
July 8th, 2009, 7:06 pm

If it were me, he'd have punched my face in; I'd have been drawing on his face with sharpie markers.
July 8th, 2009, 11:19 pm
This is awesome!! But I feel kinda bad for Charmander. . . or Dragonthing. . . you know what I mean. Keep it up!
July 9th, 2009, 11:43 pm
I guess they'll be partner, huh? This will be interesting.
July 10th, 2009, 3:36 am
That Rattata really just... frightens me... I worry for nightmares about
July 10th, 2009, 8:27 am
These pencil pages are very well done :3
I'm looking forward to reading this.
Here's to hoping you won't get sick of doing them :P
Korin the Blue Fox (being lazy) (Guest)
July 12th, 2009, 12:08 am
Lotsa coments o.o

BTW, somepast comics are not working, like chapter 1 page 5.
July 12th, 2009, 1:52 pm
wait how did he get all of those pokemon that fast ;-;
Dragonthang used smokescreen
dragon thandg and atty fled
July 12th, 2009, 3:07 pm
Somehow a poke + Pokemon (double Pokey maybe?) seems like the best way to wake up.

And Dragonthang keeps getting cuter as this goes. A+!
July 13th, 2009, 12:44 pm
man, ur art is absolutely amazing, and ur able to make a funny comic out of it :D
July 15th, 2009, 11:59 pm
Ohh, you got a point... I must remind myself not to draw any Ratatta....
January 23rd, 2010, 12:30 pm
o.o I would scream too, if rape-ata was staring at me in that way...
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 3:49 pm
We all like the page.
June 26th, 2011, 4:42 pm
Augh! Oh my, for being such a grump when he's awake, Atty is rather cute when he's asleep. Looks almost peaceful. Then I remember it's Atticus and peaceful is the last thing on my mind. Who would dare poke that sleepy face of doom? Oh dear lord, a sea of faces. I would freak too. I-it's the rattata. It scares me. I never, ever catch those. I hate them.
Wonderful page again, and I'm exciting to see what happens in this chapter!
October 13th, 2011, 5:12 pm
Great comic doooooood
September 28th, 2015, 7:31 pm
Aw, such a cute girly Rattata