Chapter 2 Page 10

October 13th, 2009, 7:22 pm
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October 13th, 2009, 7:22 pm
I won't bore you with the details of my life that caused this update to be delayed, as that's not what you're here to read.

Whee, I got to draw a strong jaw! How refreshing. But it could be stronger. I've decided that from here on any random people who turn up I will make far more interesting and fun for myself to draw rather than the same old thing.

Poor Atty must feel like a broken record telling people to just leave him alone. If they don't get the message soon some day he's just gunna completely flip out about it I'm sure.

Whilst there's a lot about this one that I'm not all too chuffed with, I did enjoy drawing that dude's grin. I don't get to draw grins like that enough especially with Atty around. Maybe someday he will wear a grin like that.... Dear lord, can you imagine.
March 19th, 2018, 7:47 am
October 14th, 2009, 6:36 am
I think it's time for a few replies...

Chaosmark101: I do like lone wolf characters, but I can't let them be taken too seriously XD Angst is so done.

H2O: Wow, thankyou! That makes the time it takes to do it worthwhile.

Fishuu: Glad you like that, I like it too XD <3

Bailey_Del_Rosa: Just a note, it's not the same one as ran over the pidgey XD There's a few about. But yeah, I like this guy.

Crusty_Kris: Quite. If that pidgey was still alive it would be so dead.

Pat15: Now that would be funny.

Amante-kun: Of course they do! ... Hmm. I've drawn some pretty disgusting things there. Some day I'm gunna find that line and waltz across it, if I haven't already.

TinyDog: Glad to be of service =D

Chan Is No Longer a Guest: I'd be pretty traumatized too. I did quite a few drawings of Atty's face there trying to get the one I like, a broad range of horrified expressions, but the kinda quiet angry disbelief horror look won me in the end.

Supersayainblue: I couldn't say he was much of an inspiration, I don't really know much about Gaara XD...

.:Animetal:. : I lolled.

Seedless-acorn: If that can't get washed out of his jumper there'll be hell to pay...

FanFantasy: It would be interesting to see how they get such a look of horror on one of those lil' sprites.

KittyCHOMP: You can still be a man with a ponytail ;D Glueing the pidgey back together, now that would be interesting. Zombiemon.

BlackCatz: Ooooh... I do believe you've given me the start of a cunning plan...

Naivebeing: To be honest, the feathers is what I find most disturbing about that panel. Especially the one stuck in his cheek *shudders*

Jazeki: XD Welcome back? I wouldn't say I've been gone all that long, but thankyou... Yes, I imagine the only time he could grin like that would be when he skips to the other side of sanity.

Mr. Owl: Thankyou! I don't really like any of the others out there either so doing something that most people could enjoy, that was my goal.

Death-Destination: You're talking to the lawnmower man XD? He's not the same one as ran over the pidgey... Unless he can move at lightspeed.

Mr Aids: That's exactly what's gunna happen on the next page... Shoot, is he getting predictable.

wo_chibi_baozi: We all have to leave the nest and part from the safety of Oak someday. But I'm sure one day, one day... we'll surely see him again.

Yukiko168: Anytime.

Ichipowa: I'm not too keen on pidgeys, but at least they're easy to draw inside out.

KittyCHOMP: I would have figured that's a given...

Awana56: Whatever makes you happy dood.

*Suki*: That would be a nice end to the chapter.

Thanks for commenting guys!
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October 13th, 2009, 7:30 pm
XD that grin of his rocked and seeing atty's messed up look in panel 1 just makes me laugh.
it's like he had a demonic ravenous look lol and I love how atty is allways trying to be a smartass and stuff XD being the lone wolf that he is he is a pretty cool character :D
October 13th, 2009, 7:33 pm
Your dedication to detail and structure astounds me... YOU. ARE. A-FUCKIN-MAZING.
October 13th, 2009, 7:43 pm
Atty, you're such a sweetheart.

I really like the first panel <3 Not just because of Atty's face, but also that perfect juxtaposition XDD
October 13th, 2009, 7:56 pm
:D I like the lawn mower man :D
October 13th, 2009, 8:25 pm
atty:" kill...rising..."
October 13th, 2009, 8:30 pm
if i were atticus i'd throw pidgey intestines at the guy >.>
October 13th, 2009, 8:41 pm
Oh, everyone loves Pidgey gore!
October 13th, 2009, 9:07 pm
XD you made my day even better! Now my 4 favorite comics have updated all in the same day >w<
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
October 13th, 2009, 9:38 pm
...LMAO.....That first panel....I would be so traumatized.
LOLOL "I hope that also applies to bird intestines."
I guess we'll see, Atty. I GUESS WE'LL SEE.
October 13th, 2009, 10:38 pm
Animetal, I lol'd so hard at that xDDD

I love Atty's thoughts there, bird intestines!! xD
October 13th, 2009, 10:49 pm
Oh...Oh god......I'm imagining this in a pokemon game!
October 13th, 2009, 11:12 pm
"If you'd like, I can always...GLUE IT BACK TOGETHER FOR YOU." It might be interesting to see him try. (I don't really understand why that was the first thing I thought of. Does that makes sense...?)

I like this man. This man and his ponytail.
October 13th, 2009, 11:24 pm

*shivers* I read your comment, HOly...and I got kinda creeped out by picturing Atty with a grin like that... that's seriously creepy.

As always, HOly, your art is sublime, and your attention to detail is awesome, truly awesome.

Edit: you seriously should think about doing an grinning Atty for a Halloween special.. that'd be freaky ;D
October 14th, 2009, 3:01 am
At first I thought it was dirt till I saw the feathers. Hopefully, the other Pokemon won't end up like him...

Atty with a smile? That'd be a miracle. XD
October 14th, 2009, 11:45 am
Welcome back and perhaps on the day Atty flips about people not leaving him alone, he will grin like that.
mr. owl
October 14th, 2009, 1:08 pm
So, I found this comic about a week ago, when I was bored and looking through all the pokemon comics I could find. I normally don't like them, I just read them because for a laugh, but I really like what you have done with this one. And it has become my favorite comic on smackjeeves.
October 14th, 2009, 2:21 pm
OMG! Yuo killed a Pokemon *Shocked face*
But I love him so much! *glomps*
Mr Aids
October 15th, 2009, 2:15 am
I heard bird intestines does wonders for your complexion. Atty should be thanking lawnmower guy.
October 15th, 2009, 9:42 am
Awwww I miss Professor Oak....
October 15th, 2009, 6:34 pm
Screen covered with coffee.

October 15th, 2009, 6:41 pm
<.< I hate lawnmowers.
I <3 pidgeys
October 15th, 2009, 8:01 pm
I choose to believe that this man's ponytail is a sentient life form on its own.
October 17th, 2009, 9:21 pm
xD Let's just hope that Atty doesn't blow up.
October 18th, 2009, 2:29 pm
Hahaha~ Atty's PO'd expressions always make me smile. x'D

Although, Lawnmower Guy's a jerk, killing a birdie for his own amusement. D< Beat him in a battle, Atty!
October 18th, 2009, 9:45 pm
rotfl! this is the best pokemon comic i have ever seen. and atty's opinion on how the pokemon world works is so true. 'let's harm innocent animals!' =_=;;; u make pokemon fun.
October 18th, 2009, 11:03 pm
His grin made me grin. :D
October 19th, 2009, 2:29 pm
October 22nd, 2009, 2:59 am
Is that d00d the same d00d who was so happily mowing the grass at breakneck speed and in so doing causing most of the wildlife hiding within it to turn into minced meat a page ago?

He's far too happy about it. He and Atty might actually get on like a house on fire. X3
October 23rd, 2009, 7:54 am
Oh god XD lol

That has to be the worst day in the world. XD Poor Atticus and young...taken out by a lawnmower XDDD

shading skills are amazing btw ^^
October 25th, 2009, 3:48 pm
Hahaha... I never thought that I'd get into a Pokemon doujinshi but you've got talent, H0ly~ Good job!!
MattM (Guest)
December 5th, 2009, 6:38 pm
Light? Is it just me, or in panel 1 does Atti look kinda like Light Yagame from the anime Death Note?
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 4:03 pm
Fun page *punches new person in the jaw for laughing at Atticus*
That Home-Stuck Guy (Guest)
April 6th, 2011, 1:32 pm
...I am now calling the lawnmower guy... BROCKTAGON MAN!
...'cuz y'know... octagons'n'shit... Brock's head... *cough*
Suiyuki (Guest)
May 17th, 2011, 3:03 pm
I just went 'waaaagh D:' irl. That poor pidgey ;^;
June 27th, 2011, 11:27 am
Endeavor! Oh my, all over him. That's gotta make him gag a bit. And Lawnmower guy just smiles. I love Atty's comebacks, he's so grumpy. Lawnmower guy doesn't seem to get the hint that Atticus just wants to get be alone. I do hope Atty can get those stains out.
Poor Atty, as much as I've gotten attached to him, I really wanna see him flip out. Oh my, Atticus grinning? Breaking the laws of psychics there. Lovely page, very nice!
Shelboo (Guest)
March 15th, 2012, 12:39 am
I have so much love for the first and third panels. The way he just sits there, petrified, but keeps on casually.

I'm also just realizing two chapters in that both Gary and Ash are dead here.
My childhood. It hurts. ;o;
ravage kitty (Guest)
February 4th, 2015, 7:30 am
oh ma god that guy killed a pokemon! D*:}