Chapter 2 Page 13

November 15th, 2009, 12:14 pm
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H0lyhandgrenade
November 15th, 2009, 7:50 am
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I love doing pages. They're great practice and I learn a lot each time, be it from the mistakes I make or otherwise. For example, on this page I learnt what I need to do to make the shading look as pretty as it did on the previous page (unlike this one) and most of all that I really despise tiles.

OMG FANSERVICE!! ATTY'S NEKKID!!! ... In a sense. For him. I assure you, this will NOT happen often. That jumper's his second skin.

I believe some of you call it a laundromat. See y'all soon.
H0lyhandgrenade
November 16th, 2009, 9:56 pm
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Replies all round~

Yamataro: I think it's more a case that the daycare consider their business far more important than any dangerous criminals out there.

Czar Squid: True it's not exciting, but I think there needs to be a breather from time to time XD

BlackCatz: Thanks XD I haven't been in one for many a year but I tried to catch the feel of it I could remember... Might have been more cheerfull a memory if there'd been candy there.

Kitten meat: So you want him to sit practically in the nuddy as he washes his pants too? You saucy devil~

Skwinky: I love my sexy ellipses XD And ho shyt, don't worry, I need to comment on yours more too D8 let's make a pact ;D

emruki: Thanks XD I love doing backgrounds I do. Especially when it doesn't just consist of trees and bushes.

geegs: I am most afearfull. We shall see~

LeLapin: Me neither, after a terrible incident inspiring me to write that...

Nashira: Mebbe they are, mebbe they aren't :3 Okay they are. But I'm not saying how long ahead its foreshadowing for.

supersayainblue: I doubt he'd want to put so much effort into something like that XD He's not the most 'go-get-em' kinda guy.

RyoSoulreaper: Indeed, I doubt he's ever travelled much further than this...

Jazeki: I'm glad it made someone other than me laugh XD

Chura_Mai: I have quite a patience when it comes to working on pages. Maybe because I like to kinda zone out. And yeah... I put in that exact change sign even though it pisses me off. Everyone hates that sign.

Floo Phantom: It would appear so. Wouldn't like you guys to get tired of his overuse. But don't worry, DT shall return afore the chapter is done :3

Fishuu: It's also the method I use to draw rays of light :D I'm such a technique whore.

Waiting For Your Whistle: After much re reading of your comment I still can't quite understand what you mean but it sounds brilliant ;D

Drawkill: Kinda cliche... But I wanted to draw them. I'm baaad.

Zerosignal: Mmm sometimes XD I used to not bother with backgrounds at all, but one day I just decided to... Bother. And I've never looked back~

FreD-Zexx: Thankyou =3 And yo, that's how pokemanz should be XD

Chan Is No Longer a Guest: Fortunate that I have more patience than Atty XD Though admittedly my patience was pretty damn thin too when I was doing those tiles.

GreenNin93: Perhaps, perhaps~

Pat15: Now that would really make his day. And I'm not sure how well the big mac story relates but I like it regardless XD

Floo Phantom: If you'll read the second line below where it continues you'll see it actually reads "Theft, Murder and being a little tit".

Ichipowa: Pretty much XD But still ought be aknowledged.

Marly: I love detail, I so do~

Mr Aids: I didn't notice that. That's pretty creepy.

Davo: *salutes* I shall very much endeavor not to!

Tozz: You fiend D8 Jumperless is as good as you get XD

Piano-kun: Either that or learn how to cooperate with Dragonthing. Viridian Forest is going to be... Fun.

Whiteflamedkitsune: Thankyou XD I shall work hard to update quickly.

Idene: D8 You tell me. I'd be curious to know. Someday I promise I shall put my own number on a page like this (not saying which one though), just for kicks ;D Hope if anyone does dare try it though they live in the UK or their bill will sky rocket.

Tozz: Haha, alright XD I wasn't worried for a second. *puts phone down* I kid =3 You're not a pedo, just a pervert ;D

Davo: Eheh XD As much as it might seem otherwise, I'm not actually a person who's really into pokemon. Weird to be doing a comic I know but it's mostly based on my memories of it as a kid.

Gizumimipichu: Nice... hmm... Well, time will tell and I'm sure people will be able to make their own minds up XD ... Though I don't think anyone could ever describe Thad as nice.

NotchedEarPichu: Thankyou very much XD How do I make it? Pfft... Work hard, never give up and always eat your vegetables I suppose...

Idene: Ahh the Vents, what haven't they done. Trix isn't really jailbait, I just put that there because I couldn't think of anything as much to put for her in comparision to her brother, and I figured that only a select few would read it XD Whereas Thad on the other hand really is just a little tit.

ZanTheMonk: Would figure for it to be a monday... And although classes can be a good help if you find a good one, mine isn't. I think most advancement you make is from sitting and just practicing XD

xwx101: He's inside... I don't really understand how it could look like he's outside. He is surrounded by washing machines and has a roof over his head. About as inside as one can get.

Thanks for commenting!
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Yamataro
November 15th, 2009, 12:20 pm
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A day care posting over a Wanted sign?
Are they wanted BY the daycare? If so, What did they do?
Report card says, "Doesn't play well with others, Convinced everyone that they were 3 when they were 21, and tried to catch 5 year olds in pokeballs. .... Well... That's funny...
HOW COULD THEY ENROLL AS 3 YEAR OLD!?!?!
BlackCatz
November 15th, 2009, 12:33 pm
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I love the laundromat...it's so brilliantly done.. it reminds me of my hometown's laundromat... ^^; It was also the local candy shop (how's that for multitasking?)
Kitten meat
November 15th, 2009, 12:51 pm
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wait didnt atty's pants also get splattere with pidgey gore?
Skwinky
November 15th, 2009, 12:53 pm
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Your storytelling and sense of space is always awesome. (And I need to comment more. FFF I will be better now promise. D:)

ALSO. Sexiest ellipsis ever? Hells yes.
emruki
November 15th, 2009, 1:41 pm
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Aww, the adventure's not going too well for Atty, is it? :(

But wow, I love the attention to the background. <3
LeLapin
November 15th, 2009, 1:58 pm
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LMAO. Deleting the moves you worked so hard to get. That's hilarious. :'D
I never leave my pokemon in the daycare center.
Nashira
November 15th, 2009, 2:01 pm
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Those Wanted Posters are foreshadowing, yes?
your pages always look so amazing ;u; can't wait for more!
RyoSoulreaper
November 15th, 2009, 2:51 pm
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Equipment under matinence, time 3:35 patience thin.

LMAO. Atty, really hates traveling don't he?
Jazeki
November 15th, 2009, 2:58 pm
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Man, I need a laundrette around here.I love the dialogue. Day 1 of 1 made me laugh.
Floo Phantom
November 15th, 2009, 3:42 pm
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Where is the charmander who seems to have been abused in the past.

Did Atty learn how to shove them back in they're airtight balls?
fishuu
November 15th, 2009, 3:51 pm
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Dun dun dun...? How ominous!

Ahh I really like how you did the glass effect in the last panel *g*
Waiting For Your Whistle
November 15th, 2009, 4:33 pm
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There's a random stalker guy or Professor Oak standing behind him saying this crap isn't there... He's gonna keep going till Atty Punches them... then me for calling him Atty ^^U
Drawkill
November 15th, 2009, 6:51 pm
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Wanted posters.
Dundundun
FreD-Zexx (Guest)
November 15th, 2009, 8:14 pm
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I really like your artwork, particularly the way you shade. :) The comic is brilliantly funny.

Random note: After reading it, I dreamt I was playing Pokémon and that it was a much more hilarious game than it actually was. A Caterpie turned into a Ninetails, then flew into Pewter City Gym and starting beating things up. ...
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
November 15th, 2009, 8:50 pm
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"Patience - thin" POOR ATTY LOL.
D8 Goddamn you must have a bucketload of patience to do all that detail...I would murder the tiles halfway through.
GreenNin93
November 15th, 2009, 9:51 pm
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Hm I noticed the wanted posters in the window, is that some kind of foreshadowing ?
pat15
November 16th, 2009, 7:01 am
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i have a feeling the two wanted dudes'll burst in to try to steal pokemon and then their plans are foiled because.... they would be pretty much be trying to steal pokemon in a laundrette... that reminds me when my sis saw a guy order a big mac at burger king :3
Floo Phantom
November 16th, 2009, 12:05 pm
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On the mans wanted poster, I can make out the words "Murder and being a".

Did he kill and eat his pokemon?!?
Ichipowa
November 16th, 2009, 1:53 pm
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o: isnt his patience always thin?
Mr Aids
November 16th, 2009, 6:02 pm
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Those washing machines look like they're watching Atty.

D=
Davo
November 16th, 2009, 10:11 pm
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Sir...

For the record....

I love what you are doing here. Do not screw it up, please.
tozz
November 16th, 2009, 10:29 pm
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the day care tagline makes me lol.

also, naked Atty = :D *wildly imagines*
Piano-kun
November 16th, 2009, 11:42 pm
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Atty's going to need The Viridian Forest Survival Guide. Rule #1: You'll need REPEL. Lots of REPEL.

...There is only one rule in The Viridian Forest Survival Guide.

Anyway, going to the laundromat always brings in the strangest people. Wash clothes, proceed with caution. XD
Whiteflamedkitsune
November 17th, 2009, 5:45 am
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your attention to details are amazing~~

can't wait for more ^^
Idene
November 17th, 2009, 8:25 am
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... what's going to happen when i call that number? *an immediate reply would be nice, as it's ringing. XD*
tozz
November 17th, 2009, 5:09 pm
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oh oh, to make it clear, I'm close enough in age to Atty that it's okay if I imagine him naked--no pedo, alright?! :D
Davo
November 17th, 2009, 6:21 pm
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It occurs to me that I have a piece of writing you would likely find interesting: a re-construction of the entire Pokémon mythos from the ground up.
gizumimipichu
November 18th, 2009, 12:44 am
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Awww the wanted poster people look like nice people though...*hehe* Looks can be decieving though, right?

Yeah! Atty's finally getting cleaned! XD
NotchedEarPichu
November 18th, 2009, 5:54 pm
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I just read the whole comic and I loved it! I'm big fan of pokemon. :D How did you make the comic? The drawing style is really cool!
Idene
November 18th, 2009, 10:04 pm
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oy, i live in the US, so you probably might not hear from me. XD

and i was looking at the posters *again, astonished by the amount of detail on your pages*, what exactly did the Vents do?!? murder, little tit, and jail bait?
ZanTheMonk
November 19th, 2009, 8:16 pm
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Teach Me Great One! Dude, how did you get so good at drawing? Pratice, classes what?

On topic: Seems he's just not having a good day...must be monday; God I hate mondays.
xwx101
November 20th, 2009, 1:14 pm
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umm is he on the inside or outside can't tell, an I have a feeling he is going to look real cool on the next page. Didn't mean to get you upset its just that the shine from the window looked like it was behind him but now I know he is defiantly on the inside. still really good page, and love the fast updates.
pat15
November 21st, 2009, 6:05 pm
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I just read somewhere that "Chuck Norris ordered a Big Mac at Burger King, and got one". XD
muffinpoodle
February 12th, 2010, 6:13 am
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WANTED FOR BEING A LITTLE TIT LOLOLOLOL
Subterfuge
April 19th, 2010, 6:45 pm
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Why haven't I noticed "And being Jail Bait" on the Belle Vent wanted poster until now? LOL
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 4:10 pm
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Awesome little page yes indeed.
DaydreamingDaisy
June 27th, 2011, 12:04 pm
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Laundrette! Oh poor Atty. He actually has patience? Shocker. Nice wanted posters, I hope we see those two soon! I'm rather surprised that Atticus actually knows how to do Laundry. He's learning something new everyday!
Wonderful Fanservice! Too bad we couldn't get a close up of him without his jumper. Lovely page!
Me (Guest)
July 1st, 2011, 8:19 pm
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Just reading back, and... Ohmygod look it's our favorite people on the wanted posters~
Glaben (Guest)
August 25th, 2011, 4:21 pm
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"Deleting those moves you worked hard to get". Epic.
DrakeF (Guest)
June 10th, 2012, 1:18 pm
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Day Care != Move Deleter, just sayin. But a wonderfully designed comic!