Chapter 2 Page 14

November 25th, 2009, 3:16 pm
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November 25th, 2009, 3:16 pm
Mmm. Delicious cigarettes. I mean chocolate.

Contraversial page is contraversial. If anyone still has any issues at this late point, send your messages to

It was only a short scene, the last- A little breather. All those washing machines for naught. Ah well, was good practice, not every day you get to draw a laundrette. Now I get to draw a little corner shop. Woohoo! Exciting times abound.

I'm looking forward to the next page.
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Bobcheese400: The king of chocolate bars from our youth.

Supersayainblue: Through hard work and dedication.

Rai-chan: I know... they only cost 20p back in the day, now it's up to something like 50p. Not to mention about half the size.

the being: You should try them. Chocolatey goodness. And Atty is his own source of repel.

BlackCatz: Damn, I'm hungry now...

bobomb: Chocolate?

Kinji: Interestingly, I don't think he does.

geegs: It's probably just for the chew anyway. He's not got many tastebuds left after all the punishment he's put them through.

Davo: The candy bar makes it all better.

Pat15: I dunno, maybe it's worth a shot. I heard scientists discovered that smoking officially makes you fifty percent cooler.

amymist: You got him down just right XD

Leviathan42: He's going to regret not saving any money to buy antidotes with later, yup.

ApaFox: Its virtues know no end!

SuperBiasedMan: I fell back on the old trick. When you feel the comic might be slipping- Bang out the curlywurlies.

Mr Aids: I know... Now we're older and wiser, and realize that the selling point of this product is that they're trying to get us to buy chocolate with holes in it.

Jazeki: It had to be done.

Czar: D'aww shoot, I knew someone would notice. You win the prize. It took me a whole time getting halfway through the page until I remembered that.

It's a magic shop.

Sol: I wouldn't be so sure. In fact I was kinda dubious putting ciggies in the pokemon world at all... Surely everything is nice and fluffy there.

FanFantasy: Give the man his time, allow him to count the cost first- There is a whole page coming up on which he may be allowed to speak.

Naya: Ten years old may be old enough to get yourself lost in a mountain cave, but it's never old enough to put a burning twig in your mouth. Remember that, kiddies.

Cyrstal Hikara: With moneys, I presume. But he may have to be somewhat more frugal for the rest of the journey. Y'know, I wish that was a real email address just so that I could see.

Rainbird: One must always take priorities. But hell, there's plenty other pokemon series out there giving a good influence, Atty's simply providing balance XD

u_queen: There's no better way to end a chapter than with lung cancer I've found. Whenever I get sick of the story, that's what will happen.

Floo Phantom: Can't say I've ever played mystery dungeon yet the point remains. Then again the main dude of the pokemon games was like a little robot. No talking, no eating, no sleeping... Yikes.

GRENZENLOS: Yo I'm not American D8 Curlywurlies are a choccie bar that the UK is proud of XD

Chan Is No Longer a Guest: Fourteen to be precise. And aye, he is a very naughty boy. Things wont be as easy as he makes them appear thus far.

Waiting For Your Whistle: Ah yes I see now XD Thankyou for the explanation. And through his efforts, Atty now never has to worry about his grandkids hugging him.

xwx101: You see correctly. Interiors are something that are tough and I wanted to practice, and I'm also making the most of them since the majority of this comic is going to take place outside.

Fred-Zexx: It's his second favourite pasttime~

cptfox11: Thanks XD I'm working on the next one right now.

Shade Guy: You'd think so. Why should one form of indirect suicide be allowed to kiddies yet not another.

Yamataro: Likely the only reason he didn't what to switch Dragonthing with Kahn's squirtle after that one won XD

Theorah: No huge issues or anything really, just the occasional mention. It certainly is his own choice XD He wants to knacker himself then he's free to (although perhaps not strictly in the eyes of the law.)

Pat15: Once DT learns the delicious taste of cigarettes he'll never go back.

xXTheMadHatterXx: I'd be disappointed if you didn't.

Blix: It's happened! Many a page ago now. I didn't make a huge gag of it as I thought it too obvious, but it most certainly shall happen again.

Harrow: Works brilliantly. Except against fruity charizards.

Pareidolia: For a guy with barely two tastebuds left to rub together, he's got good taste.

Ichipowa: Quite, I was starting to get worried, starting to think I may have to take measures... I kid XD A joy to hear you're still reading.

GreenNin93: That's one way to get along... Why walk through the forest when you can just burn it down?

Silver Shyguy: He so would. Gentlemen!

Yellowmellow91: Takes time but it's a lotta fun XD

Kool: Unless he was some horrible evil bad guy I guess. ... Then again that's what Atty could easily be percieved to be.

Thanks for commenting!
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November 25th, 2009, 3:23 pm
Yay curly-wurley
November 25th, 2009, 3:27 pm
Is that really something you want to blow all your money on?X3
the being
November 25th, 2009, 3:41 pm
never had a curly-wurly. xD
he should definitley stock up on repel-oh, wait, he already does that...
November 25th, 2009, 3:44 pm

And chcolate is THE cure for everything! XD
November 25th, 2009, 3:50 pm
something I blow my money on every damn week.
November 25th, 2009, 4:00 pm
o.o He looks like Joey Wheeler, or Jounouchi.
November 25th, 2009, 4:17 pm
Hah! I work retail, and I can tell you for sure that we get that kind of a guy in at least once every couple of hours.
Cigarettes out the wazoo... and a candy bar.
November 25th, 2009, 4:40 pm
If repels ARE in fact cigarettes in pokemon then that explains why I'm addicted to using them. The repels are what I mean, not the smokes and I am definitely not planning to start.
November 25th, 2009, 5:00 pm
Yum. Chocolate. That's a heluvalot of cigarettes. Watch them all last him about one day. (Not to mention, I wouldn't be surprised if he ate all the cigarettes and forgot the chocolate.)
November 25th, 2009, 5:14 pm
How many bug catchers did he have to beat up to pay for those cigs? lol
November 25th, 2009, 5:44 pm
:3 Cigarette smoke is not only a good Pokemon repellent, it can also be used to see invisible lasers that trigger alarms and bombs.
November 25th, 2009, 5:51 pm
Nice, Curly-Wurlies are a nice touch to comics that are seldom used to their full potential.
Mr Aids
November 25th, 2009, 6:28 pm
I haven't had a Curly Wurly in ages D=

Oh those were the days.
November 25th, 2009, 6:41 pm
I like how he balances the candy bar on top of the pile.
November 25th, 2009, 8:00 pm
I guess they are allowed to sell cigs to minors in the Pokemon world XD
November 25th, 2009, 8:15 pm
That, that cashier! He's not saying anything! O_o What the- Atty, you're lucky your in Pokemon land.
November 25th, 2009, 8:21 pm
I'd question if hes old enough to buy those things, but considering he lives in a world where at 10 your old enough to run away from home with wild animals and fight creatures of elemental powers, age seems irrelevant.

That, and I think he IS old enough anyway XD
Crystal Hikara
November 25th, 2009, 9:42 pm
Is that a real email? If so I feel really bad for whomever just got spammed with about 50 new messages.

November 25th, 2009, 9:45 pm
Love how the chocolate seems to be an afterthought. Oh, Atty, you bad influence you. <3 xD
November 25th, 2009, 9:56 pm
Looking at the way the main character smokes, Mokepon is going to be a short story XD
Floo Phantom
November 25th, 2009, 11:19 pm
Isn't he gonna take concern in feeding his pokemon? Or is the pokefood that chocolate bar on the top.

Another thing that always bugged me about games is that nobody ever eats, yet mystery dungeon has food and hunger.
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
November 26th, 2009, 12:41 am
And I just realized that Atty is like...12 or something, right? AND HE'S ALLOWED TO BUY THOSE. XDD
Waiting For Your Whistle
November 26th, 2009, 10:58 am
Cigs will work just as well as repel, just ask grannies who smoke. Ask when the last time there' grandkids hugged them with out almost dying from lack of oxygen while holding their breath.
Sorry if I confused you... my last comment basically said that their was a stalker following him around saying the random panels aloud much like oak did earlier on with the whole "your starting an adventure thing" and that Atty will get fed up listening to them project nonsense and beat them up, then he will come after me for daring to call him Atty <3
BTW Happy "It's exceptional to become fat today in America so long as you eat with your family" Day!!! <3 (Thanksgiving for the confused ones) PIE FOR ALL!!! <3
November 26th, 2009, 1:33 pm
I can see it looks like your practicing your interior and exterior drawings or is it just me. Also still lovin these fast updates, man atty is one crazy smoker.
Fred-Zexx (Guest)
November 26th, 2009, 3:54 pm
ROFL he looks so happy when he smokes.
November 26th, 2009, 4:56 pm
cant wait i can't wait for the next one theese are awsome
November 27th, 2009, 2:58 pm
Well at least he doesn't have to buy a lighter. He's got "Dragonthing" xD
November 27th, 2009, 4:02 pm
people seriously had a problem with your main character smoking? 0_0 I thought it was supposed to be funny! Who knew you could even get comics censored now! And most people I know started smoking at his age anyway, thats just real life, and its their choice if they want to take the risk...
November 27th, 2009, 10:06 pm
I just hope Dragonthing won't pick up Atty's habits. XD
November 27th, 2009, 11:01 pm

blix (Guest)
November 27th, 2009, 11:38 pm
I'm waiting for the day Charmander lights his cig for him.
November 28th, 2009, 12:47 am
REPEL! Now in Charizard urine!
November 28th, 2009, 1:34 pm
Mmmmm curly wurly. I like your style Atty *insert thumbs up*
November 28th, 2009, 2:08 pm
lol wow epic xDD i havent posted in a while O<
November 29th, 2009, 3:53 pm
Wow Well that is a lot of cigs...hope he won't start a forest just imagined a pokemon smokey the bear XD
silver shyguy (Guest)
November 29th, 2009, 8:46 pm
better not smoke that all at once atty XD
November 29th, 2009, 9:03 pm
I really love all the detail you put in each page! C:
November 30th, 2009, 4:23 pm
Hey You've got quiet a awesome drawing style, alot of detail.

Plus, unique characters, I mean really, you would never see a character smokes in pokemon.:p
December 1st, 2009, 9:51 pm
I kind of did this snort-laughter.
That was brilliant. : D

I totally ready through this whole thing today~ It's wicked C:
Mist th
December 2nd, 2009, 2:41 am
Awesome comic you've got here.
Really interesting comic.
Great humor great art.
Seriously I haven't seen better art work before.
This makes some artist I know who I thought was a god at drawing look like a 4 year old.
Any ways enjoying this comic hope it continues.
Zmoore0890 (Guest)
January 3rd, 2010, 12:08 pm
Doing the math... 50.10 Euros is 71.76 USD, and I know that Marlboros cost around 5.60 here... so that's about 12 packs of cigarettes if the prices are at all similar.
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 4:13 pm
No no. Repels are not the same as Cigarettes. They just can be bought at the same store. However if they are the same and I am wrong it makes sense wild pokemon are not gonna show.
September 3rd, 2010, 6:05 pm
I wish the pokemart in my game stocked smokes.
June 27th, 2011, 12:10 pm
Low! Oh Atty, you chain smoker, you. Your supplies count as only cigarettes, huh? Does he really need all of those? Most of the people I know only go through half a pack a day, I can't imagine how long it would take Atty to finish all those. I love how he adds a chocolate bar on top. Reminds us all that he's still a kid, just with horrible habits.
I can't imagine how people can actually find this controversial. Atty is just being Atty, after all. Wonderful page, yet again!
Malph (Guest)
July 12th, 2011, 5:44 pm
Atty, that's a terrible habit you have. Spending all that money on Marbs when Pyramids are cheaper.
KC (Guest)
August 17th, 2011, 8:56 pm
Yes Marlboro 100s all the way baby I love this guy smokes maybe as much as me.