Chapter 2 Page 32

March 23rd, 2010, 12:26 am
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H0lyhandgrenade
March 23rd, 2010, 12:26 am
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I made it to the end of the chapter... wheee... Damn I'm tired. In my efforts to try and get this page finished today it became tomorrow.

Oh yeah... It should be a shiny coloured cover page next but... I really don't have the time to do it at the moment I'm afraid. I can get it done once March is over, but until then, what would you like to fill the place? I can just make the rough sketch of the cover, or... Well, whatever you like. Ask away. Atty getting hit over the head with a chair, DT getting a cuddle, smut (you're free to at least ask), whatever. I'll draw whichever sounds the best.

He's really not crying by the way. Nope.

See y'all soon.
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xXTheMadHatterXx
March 23rd, 2010, 12:40 am
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You should draw a highly disgruntled Atty surrounded by "generic-happy-stuff". Not that I know what qualifies as happy. I've recently been told my adorable, lovely collection of angelic and gorgeous porcelain dolls (I <3 them. :>) is considered (and I quote) "creepy as fuck" by the general population, so there's obviously no accounting for my taste.

Edit: Woah hey, I also got first comment status. Yey me.

Editv2: Or! Or! Or you could draw Dragonthing with a mustache. Or dressed up as a pretty little doll.

Edit3: Or you could do what I would do and tape up a piece of paper saying "This is a chapter cover".
NotAwake
March 23rd, 2010, 12:40 am
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Okay, I'm insane. I think I only looked at the two fingers that weren't toned because they were all... whatever the term is.
And awwwwwwwwe. Poor Atty, manly crying. And I love how there's stairs like, four feet away. Fail Atty, fail.
xkrazydog
March 23rd, 2010, 12:41 am
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double update double update double update
Spoil us spoil us spoil us.
Sorrows Neptune
March 23rd, 2010, 12:41 am
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Ah, the second chapter is finished, and it only took you almost a year to do so! Web-comics usually take a long time to make anyways so it's no problem.
LadyPsychic
March 23rd, 2010, 12:43 am
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After being gone from SJ for a while, I have returned and reread the entire comic. Anyways, I suppose that a rough sketch of the cover of chapter 3 will be fine until you are able to make fully coloured version of it.
Amante
March 23rd, 2010, 12:51 am
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ATTY'S IN DENIAL

End of Chapter 2! Are you excited! You're progressing farther and farther and getting closer and closer to the premier of George! (is a George fanboy)

AND ALMOST 3000 FANS!
Seryou
March 23rd, 2010, 1:11 am
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Cover Page suggestion? Atticus surrounded by lots of moe-eyed, sparkly Ratattas. C:
BK_1/VGKid
March 23rd, 2010, 1:27 am
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H0ly: LOL! XD Never thought of it that way
haha like pokemon episodes
PainEclipse
March 23rd, 2010, 1:38 am
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DT getting a cuddle from kahn and atty gets jealous ? :DDD

woot <3 <3 <3 <3 *awaits happily*
Shukumei (Guest)
March 23rd, 2010, 1:40 am
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For a second I thought Atty let go just to point at Kahn. I started laughing until I saw the next few panels, then I started laughing at Atty trying to get angry while "not crying.". What to draw? Hmmm ... What about Atticus getting surrounded by cute-eyed rattatas, who then pounce upon him. It then goes to Atty screaming, sitting straight up in bed. It was all a nightmare, then he looks up and sees the cute-eyed rattata (the real one) staring at him through a window. I don't think he would scream then, maybe yell for dragonthing to do the kill the rat attack XD. Just my idea for a short one page comic, either way I am excited for the next chapter.
ItsGeorgeYEH
March 23rd, 2010, 1:54 am
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HA! Top Gear xD
Jazeki
March 23rd, 2010, 2:10 am
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Is it bad that I read that last sentence that Atty said as "Pull me up and get me off"?
outlawgirl4464
March 23rd, 2010, 2:29 am
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I love that Jazeki saw that! LOL!

Can we pick all of the above! *Winkwink* :D
Mr Aids
March 23rd, 2010, 2:58 am
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Yay Top Gear.

If Atty is a man, he isn't crying. His eyes are merely sweating.

And the cover should be Atty using DT as a flail.
YuuganaruKyoujin
March 23rd, 2010, 3:21 am
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DRAW A POTATO DRAW A POTATO DRAW A POTATO!
Everlong
March 23rd, 2010, 3:40 am
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A vote for Mr. Aids idea~ That would be awesome XD
Staraito
March 23rd, 2010, 3:46 am
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Dragonthing! Just dragonthing sat on his own doing that face he did when he was confused. so CUTE
VanityAngel
March 23rd, 2010, 4:21 am
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Sorry to say this(I can't help it!), but I get the feeling that these two will be the new SasuNaru, LightxL, AlexanderxHephaestion...Bill ClintonxAmerica of the Poke..Mokepon world.

You know it's true.
soren
March 23rd, 2010, 5:38 am
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oh oh oh :( Atty useing DT (By force) to light his cigs :(

. . .oh andthat last voice bubble. . .

you know, the one right there.
yeah.
that one.
thats what he said :(
shuszgeh
March 23rd, 2010, 5:54 am
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They...they are like Ash and Gary, just too easy to pair up-------

Okay so...uh...y-yeah!
contego
March 23rd, 2010, 6:06 am
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howlong till he prefers to be dropped off a cliff than be saved by that guy?
Crystal Hikara
March 23rd, 2010, 7:42 am
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I like crazy's idea :D

I dunno. Uhhhhh yeah might want to change that last word bubble. >_>

Regardless, if I wanted to see anything, it'd be Atty screaming at the TV, because he missed Top Gear. :D And DT being irresistibly cute in the background and somehow not burning everything in sight.

Either that or Atty/DT hugging each other. Reluctantly. Yeah.
eishiya
March 23rd, 2010, 7:49 am
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Next time if you anticipate not having something to post, you should do guest strips! I think by this point you have enough fans that it would work. Heck, you'd probably end up having to post them daily.
GreenNin93
March 23rd, 2010, 7:57 am
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Wow Heh Atticus looks so angry that someone saved him XD
pat15
March 23rd, 2010, 7:59 am
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I can imagine that when he gets pulled up, he's gonna kick Khan after
Guest
March 23rd, 2010, 8:28 am
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atty x khan smut!!~ u sed we were free 2 ask. ^-^ well. i did.
zephyr-mai
March 23rd, 2010, 9:17 am
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Atty is kinda cute when totally "not" crying XD He acts like such a bratty little kid around Kahn.
Asj
March 23rd, 2010, 9:51 am
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Heh. Kahn doesn't seem bothered by his melodramaticness. ^_^"
I like his arm in the first panel. I don't know how to draw stuff like that.
Is Atty crying because he feels lower than Kahn? (I tried to make that punny...) It's like he wishes he was more like him, but he doesn't really try... Or it could just be the thoughts of dying that has him upset.

Hmm... why not go ahead and sketch out the cover? It's usually interesting to see things before they're finished.
GrotesquePrince
March 23rd, 2010, 9:53 am
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Kahn, the ambiguously gay hero~

Haha, im sure you're just ecstatic to hear that XD But it can't be helped! Being unendingly nice and kind to the 'fuck that shit' Atticus just makes him look gay XD Poor guy

Hmm, how 'bout for a cover replacement... Kahn being ambiguously gay (nice guy, super helpful) and Atticus being annoyed.

...I dunno. I love Kahn, but only when he's around Atty. I love a perfect guy pissing people off.
Ryuchael
March 23rd, 2010, 9:55 am
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pull me off and get of me? sounds like a typo...

It looks like dragonthing's suffering will never end... although the might be on the same tems once he/ she evelves... -shudder-
Chelleromo
March 23rd, 2010, 10:44 am
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Pull me up and get off me. Lol. Atty, you poor baby. :(
Kiriin
March 23rd, 2010, 10:48 am
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Top Geeaar *flail*
mosama
March 23rd, 2010, 10:58 am
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LMAO @ how the chapter ends like how an episode ends xD

;-; i miss that '|> TO BE CONTINUED'
Dchao
March 23rd, 2010, 11:01 am
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ooo Aaah what is it with you and top gear? :P
Guest
March 23rd, 2010, 11:29 am
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Great as usual. I'm just waiting for Atty to decide he needs a stronger pokemon and throw DT at a Garados.
EmiraBrightleaf
March 23rd, 2010, 1:18 pm
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Kahn is adorable. Fantastic.
Korbeh
March 23rd, 2010, 1:20 pm
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I told you dog. I told you about those ledges!
iXaxuar
March 23rd, 2010, 1:31 pm
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I wish the pokemon anime was like this.
ApaFox
March 23rd, 2010, 1:51 pm
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xD Last part's the best.
it's like "I hate you guts, but could you save me" kinda thing.
Skwinky
March 23rd, 2010, 2:14 pm
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Oh man oh man, I love how you ended that chapter. I swear I can hear the announcer's voice in my head.

And since this is a mini-commercial break, maybe a "Who's that Pokemon!?" I would forever be amused by what you would come up with for that. This is my two cents! Woohoo!
Leviathan42
March 23rd, 2010, 2:19 pm
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The Finger About the hand and the pointing: should do an "Uncle Sam wants you!" parody, or whatever the British equivalent is.
FreD-Zexx (Guest)
March 23rd, 2010, 2:51 pm
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roflllllll I so called that reaction. xDD
peanutbutterpancakes
March 23rd, 2010, 4:47 pm
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He's pointing at meee.... Also... I love how this ends like the old pokemon shows ended. It's awesomeness
munkyboywndr
March 23rd, 2010, 4:53 pm
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Top Gear Hmm, a BBC show. I'm intruiged, but this page has somehow inspired me to watch Top Gun instead. Maybe it's the similar name, maybe it's the shining beckon that pulls me from deep within Atticus's tear-filled eyes, or maybe it's the fact that Dragonthing didn't get into this page.
Whatever the reason, I'm sure you'll agree. It's time for Top Gun.
Kuro-Neko-Chan
March 23rd, 2010, 4:53 pm
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Awww... no digimon.

But hey this is good too. Just dash all my hopes and dreams forevermore, I dont care...
Bringer_of_light
March 23rd, 2010, 5:05 pm
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34.
Yamataro
March 23rd, 2010, 5:06 pm
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Atti:....
Kahn:You gonna say thanks?
Atti:... Depends. Got any smokes?
Kahn: No... I don't smoke.
Atti: Then No.
I love making scenes for this.
CaptainArmBrace
March 23rd, 2010, 6:16 pm
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I think I've come to understand what your 'surprise cliffs' are all about now. They look much smaller in the game o3o
Anyways, love this comic series so far :D I just adore how incredibly bitter that guy is to... everything... Tho I'm hoping he ends up catching on to the whole pokemon thing some time. Not catching on like Ash with love and peace burned into his very cells, but rather getting the hang of fighting. The battles seem to be rather onesided so far.
Looking forward to what your master plan with this is 8D

and as for a cover picture thing if you haven't decided on it yet. How bout some more famous 'cliff dangling' shots... with Kahn chilling with squirtle and DT looking down at Atty caught on a branch. With a Ratata on his head as well XD
Pandah
March 23rd, 2010, 6:18 pm
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lol. I like how you even added those stairs there just to taunt him.
Crewger
March 23rd, 2010, 6:27 pm
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will this be like Pokemon in that everyone wears the same clothes every day?
bluberd
March 23rd, 2010, 6:28 pm
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Ideas? I don't have any of my own, but I second the sparkly moe-eyed ratatatas thing. Just reading it made me giggle.
KyledKat
March 23rd, 2010, 6:53 pm
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Haha. Top Gear.
I love that show.
:3
RainbowLii
March 23rd, 2010, 8:14 pm
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...wasn't there a chuck norris joke about crying? D:

I'm going to throw my ideas out there X3
I can't help but think "what does Atty's happy place look like?" XDD
squishy_kitten_76
March 23rd, 2010, 8:25 pm
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How about... Atty being tied up or trapped in a corner or something, and DT holding a gun, pointed at him, but with DT being all like "? What is this thing?" an Atty would be all like ";m;" or something. Basically, this equation:
deadly device + (DT + confounded) || Atty + (fear² + (fear ÷ anxious))
Yes? No? Maybe? Confused?
zen129
March 23rd, 2010, 10:33 pm
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about time!! don't ya think its about time that Kahn explained how to battle to atticus? just saying, you don't have to listen to me anyway.:P
FYI: love the style and comic all together!! :D
Maowe
March 23rd, 2010, 10:37 pm
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yah,like i said atticus...
Embrace the madness dang it!
Chan Is No Longer a Guest
March 23rd, 2010, 11:01 pm
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YEAH. ATTY'S NOT CRYING.
THOSE AREN'T TEARS.
THAT'S........SWEAT. BECAUSE ATTY'S A MANLY MAN, AND MANLY MEN DON'T CRY. THEY SWEAT FROM THE EYES.
BECAUSE THEY'RE MANLY.

AHEM. HONESTLY if I were magically holding Atty up like that, BASICALLY RESCUING HIM, MIND YOU, and he started yelling at me....I'd drop him. Out of spite. OH SURE I MAAAY FEEL BAD LATER. But at that moment I'd show him!
I can't wait for the NEXT MOKEPON. I imagined all of that in the narrators voice.
ALSO I'm good with whatever you put up for the time being. SO WHATEV
celiex3
March 23rd, 2010, 11:18 pm
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OTL;;; i just realized the name of this comic is Mokepon OTL;;;
i thought it was Mokemon this whole time xD;
Nat33
March 24th, 2010, 2:11 am
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Called it! He did both things I said he would do 8D Though the crying one I was NOT expecting.

"Pull me up and get off me"

Atty is awesome, 'nuff said.
speak92
March 24th, 2010, 5:04 am
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battle there gonna fight again yeah!?
Waiting For Your Whistle
March 24th, 2010, 9:41 am
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Atty's face totally just turned me into a sadist. So cute <3 Atty's tryig to act like a big boy lol
Anonymousomeone (Guest)
March 24th, 2010, 9:49 am
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Draw giant Rattata with bump on head and evil look in eyes squishing Atticus & DT under right paw. =D

Wonder if newly learned DT Flail can beat Tackle...
Screaming_Teacup
March 24th, 2010, 11:39 am
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I SAY YAOI!!
LeLapin
March 24th, 2010, 5:40 pm
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I ship the one sided love of Stairs/Atty. With Atty breaking the Stairs' heart at the fact that he did not notice them at all.
ShuBox
March 24th, 2010, 6:55 pm
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ohOHOOH

I wan't to see Atty CRY MORE
what are the chances we're ever going to see it happen again? Either really good or really bad
Kamiichi (Guest)
March 25th, 2010, 2:09 am
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I got it.
You should draw DT hitting Atty over the head with a chair. :D
drew6464
March 25th, 2010, 5:40 pm
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You should draw DT hugging Charizard, who is missing shooting a fireball at a surprised Atticus. Draw Kahn and his sister in the background, any new characters in the chapter, and Atticus's psycho mom running around with her mouth wide open. Now THAT would amuse me.
Calvin (Guest)
March 25th, 2010, 7:15 pm
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Atty falling off of ledge That was so funny that he fell off the ledge and it looked like he just vanished from DT forever. it probably said to it self in its mind "Either that was cool and on purpose or he was just an idiot".
LOL :D
novusinceptus
March 26th, 2010, 1:45 am
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Definitely faving. I always thought pokemon would be better if the person had more realistic reactions to the situations. Now I have this. woot~
Seedless-acorn
March 26th, 2010, 1:57 pm
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he needs to get home to watch top gear! GO WATCH IT ATTY!!
ExplodingHorse
March 26th, 2010, 6:22 pm
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AHAHAHAA
I would just like you to know that I think you are wonderful.
holy's little bro (Guest)
March 27th, 2010, 3:17 am
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this should take the place of pokemon seriossly it would be alot more interesting also kahn is fucking strong hes held on to atty for ages if it was me i would let go death to atty XD
p.s phone dad !!!!
Guest
March 27th, 2010, 3:22 am
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draw annoying lawnmower guy smeared in pokemon guts ... still smiling away
Guest
March 27th, 2010, 3:31 am
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what about DT with a knife sneaking up behind atty with the words on top saying
GAME OVER !
Guest
March 27th, 2010, 3:33 am
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ideas ideas ... D.T lighting attys fag for him :)
SuperBiasedMan
March 27th, 2010, 8:14 pm
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Congratulations on 3000 fans! ^^
You very much deserve them and all the others you'll get.
toboe059
March 28th, 2010, 2:19 pm
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yay i finally caught up! ^^
as for a cover..? i dunno, maybe Atty annoyed or something with his arms crossed, DT beside him looking sad, and Kahn somewhere in the cover, ooh! and Ratta 2!..dunno lol.
and sorry, but i have to say it..i can see Atty x Kahn...u kno evry1's think'n it XD
coolbeans
March 30th, 2010, 2:14 pm
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Soooo I've been meaning to read the entirety of this comic for a long time now, since I've heard nothing but good things about it and I know your art is awesome. c: I haven't had a chance to until now, and I am not disappointed in the slightest! You are awesome.

And I do hope Atty gets home in time for Top Gear.
sbdrag
July 9th, 2010, 1:45 am
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LOLZLOLZLOLZ "Pull me up and get off me."

Love it!!!

You are a genius! I comment too much on this!! Especially at almost three!!!

... I also love how Atticus is starting to get more complex... it did take a while, though...
XxBloodxAlicexX
August 16th, 2010, 3:10 pm
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omgomgomgomg. wahhh! ~cries~ i knew he was gonna start crying! its just as sad and pertiful as expected!
James Birdsong (Guest)
September 1st, 2010, 5:07 pm
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A very fitting end of the chapter. I don't think he'll make it home for Top Gear but I'd be happy to be proven incorrect on that.
BelltheCat
May 2nd, 2011, 9:23 pm
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*tearface* My love for this... Has surpassed my love for the original series. I don't know if I should feel bad about that but... I LOVE YOU FOR BLESSING THE WORLD WITH THIS... THIS... WONDERFULNESS OF EPIC WONDER.
DaydreamingDaisy
July 3rd, 2011, 10:42 pm
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Crying! Atty is Crying? Crying? I had to look at it for like 5 minutes before it hit me. He must feel really relieved that he's alive, but then again, he probably can't take it that Kahn was the one to save him. I love how Kahn just takes it all in stride. Next Chapter, Ahoy!
ixluvxprinny
July 19th, 2011, 12:23 pm
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hehe, i get it. A cliffhanger XD *shot*
lovenecoco
February 4th, 2013, 10:38 pm
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Kahn is very happy to leave you dangling ~<3 Just started reading, so far i love this comic. Anyway, while looking at the last panel i noticed that a little speck was right above Kahn's head, i eventually realized it was on my computer's screen, but before that i swore Kahn had a little heart above his head.
SilentEvil
April 12th, 2014, 11:52 am
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Just a moment I'm just taking a moment to tell you that this page contains a lot of BL vibes >.< hahaha Me likes!

Atty, honey, you're being such a whiny little bitch. So bossy! :D Just kiss already (so soon!)
3jaustin
May 14th, 2014, 8:39 pm
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If Atticus could handle the friendship thing with his charmander for only a couple minutes at least, then he would learn he needs to tell his pokemon what attacks to use.